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Journal 12/1/20

Many things make me curious, like down jackets. I am very curious about who first finds the down can be clothes. There are many similar things, like who invented Chinese liquor? Who found tobacco can be smoked, etc. Why is the first example of down jackets? Because it’s very warmer when you put it on. In my memory, when I was a child, I always wore cotton-padded jackets when the cold winter came, and cotton-padded jackets were only the best clothes to against the cold. When I grow up, know down jackets and have ones, I just know how warm it is. When compared to the cotton-padded jackets, I found the warm keeping effects of the cotton-padded jackets are not good at all. I am wearing down jackets now. It is warm a lot.

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Journal 12/1/20


Many things make me curious, like down jackets.


I am very curious about who first finds the down can be clothes.


I am very curious about who first fiounds theat down can be used to make clothes. I am very curious about who first found that down can be used to make clothes.

There are many similar things, like who invented Chinese liquor?


Who found tobacco can be smoked, etc.


Who founddiscovered that tobacco can be smoked, etc. Who discovered that tobacco can be smoked, etc.

Why is the first example of down jackets?


Why iare down jackets the first example of down jackets? Why are down jackets the first example?

Because it’s very warmer when you put it on.


Because it’s very warmer when you put it onIt is because when you put one on you become much warmer. It is because when you put one on you become much warmer.

In my memory, when I was a child, I always wore cotton-padded jackets when the cold winter came, and cotton-padded jackets were only the best clothes to against the cold.


In my memory, wWhen I was a child, I remember always woreearing cotton-padded jackets whein the cold winter came, and c. Cotton-padded jackets were only the best clothes to protect against the cold. When I was a child, I remember always wearing cotton-padded jackets in the winter. Cotton-padded jackets were the best clothes to protect against the cold.

When I grow up, know down jackets and have ones, I just know how warm it is.


When INow that I am grown up, knowI have down jackets and have ones, I justbecause I know how warm it is.they are. Now that I am grown up, I have down jackets because I know how warm they are.

When compared to the cotton-padded jackets, I found the warm keeping effects of the cotton-padded jackets are not good at all.


When compared to the cotton-padded jackets, I found the warm keeping effects of thedown jackets, cotton-padded jackets aredo not good at all.provide as much warmth. When compared to down jackets, cotton-padded jackets do not provide as much warmth.

I am wearing down jackets now.


It is warm a lot.


It is warm a lot.a lot warmer. It is a lot warmer.

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