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Jan. 3, 2020

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Can owning a dog make you more active?

I've always been more of a cat person(we do have two cats at home), but recently I started to think about getting a dog.

It takes me 45 minutes every morning to drive kids to school and get myself to work. Then I spend all day sitting at the desk and then another 30 minutes of sitting in the car to get home.

Although I know that it is not so good for one's health to be so inactive person. But in the evenings, after I come home, I no longer have the motivation or energy to go for a walk.

So getting a dog and forcing myself to go for a walk started to look like a very good idea. What do you think?

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Jan. 4, 2020

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Can owning a dog make you more active?

I've always been more of a cat person(we do have two cats at home), but recently I started to think about getting a dog.

But in the evenings, after I come home, I no longer have the motivation or energy to go for a walk.

What do you think?

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Simon

Jan. 5, 2020

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Can owning a dog make you more active?

What do you think?

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Simon

Jan. 3, 2020

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Can owning a dog make you more active?


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I've always been more of a cat person(we do have two cats at home), but recently I started to think about getting a dog.


I've always been more of a cat person(we do, haveing two cats at home), but recently I started to think about getting a dog. I've always been more of a cat person, having two cats at home, but recently I started to think about getting a dog.

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It takes me 45 minutes every morning to drive kids to school and get myself to work.


It takes me 45 minutes every morning to drive my kids to school and get myself to work. It takes me 45 minutes every morning to drive my kids to school and get myself to work.

It takes me 45 minutes every morning to drive the kids to school and get myself to work. It takes me 45 minutes every morning to drive the kids to school and get myself to work.

It takes me 45 minutes every morning to drive my kids to school and get myself to work. It takes me 45 minutes every morning to drive my kids to school and get myself to work.

Then I spend all day sitting at the desk and then another 30 minutes of sitting in the car to get home.


Then I spend all day sitting at the desk, and then(I spend) another 30 minutes of sitting in the car to get home. Then I spend all day sitting at the desk, and (I spend) another 30 minutes sitting in the car to get home.

You can optionally add the "I spend" in parentheses, but that's what's being implied in the sentence.

Then I spend all day sitting at the desk and then another 30 minutes of sitting in the car to get home. Then I spend all day sitting at the desk and then another 30 minutes sitting in the car to get home.

Then I spend all day sitting at the desk, and then another 30 minutes of sitting in the car to get home. Then I spend all day sitting at the desk, and then another 30 minutes of sitting in the car to get home.

Then I spend all day sitting at the desk, and then another 30 minutes of sitting in the car to get home. Then I spend all day sitting at the desk, and then another 30 minutes of sitting in the car to get home.

Although I know that it is not so good for one's health to be so inactive person.


Although I know that it is not so good for one's health to be so inactive person. I know that it is not good for one's health to be so inactive.

AlEven though I know that it is not so good for one's health to be souch an inactive person. Even though I know that it is not so good for one's health to be such an inactive person.

Although I know that it is not so good for one's health to be so inactive person. I know that it is not so good for one's health to be so inactive.

Although I know that it is not so good for one's health to be so inactive person. Although I know that it is not so good for one's health to be so inactive.

But in the evenings, after I come home, I no longer have the motivation or energy to go for a walk.


ButHowever, in the evenings, after I come home, I no longer have the motivation or energy to go for a walk. However, in the evenings after I come home, I no longer have the motivation or energy to go for a walk.

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So getting a dog and forcing myself to go for a walk started to look like a very good idea.


So, getting a dog and forcing myself to go for a walks is starteding to look like a very good idea. So, getting a dog and forcing myself to go for walks is starting to look like a very good idea.

I would put this in the progressive, because you haven't bought the dog yet. So it's starting to look like a good idea, but once you're convinced, you'll actually do it.

So getting a dog and forcing myself to go for a walk has started to lookseem like a very good idea. So getting a dog and forcing myself to go for a walk has started to seem like a very good idea.

So, getting a dog and forcing myself to go for a walk started to look like a very good idea. So, getting a dog and forcing myself to go for a walk started to look like a very good idea.

So getting a dog and forcing myself to go for a walk has started to look like a very good idea. So getting a dog and forcing myself to go for a walk has started to look like a very good idea.

What do you think?


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