May 1, 2023
Ways of using free time effectively
Most of one’s life is spent sleeping and working in such a way that it is not often considered what to do in our free time. That is the reason why people usually prefer relaxing or hanging out.
Nevertheless, opting for a more practical approach instead of leisure activities is a rare avis. In this regard, the aim of this essay is to show other alternatives, such as: doing physical exercise or getting involved in communitary projects.
Given the fact that technologies are intrinsically linked to lack of exercise, it would be advisable to practise some sport in order to keep in shape and more importantly follow a healthy way of life.
That is true, yet it is an individualistic point of view, since its benefits does not go beyond our own interests and are frequently related to competitiveness rather than cooperation. Therefore, taking part in altruistic activities, especially, when possible, those which take place in our neighbourhood, could be a more effective way of using our spare time. Apart from the social satisfaction of helping other people, it is worthy noting, one can contribute to the place where people live and become more familiar, which would noticeably improve coexistence. That would have positive effect in our mental and, indirectly, physical health.
To sum up, participating in local projects has both positive effects in our own and the community where one life. This feedback is overall more significant and practical than exercising. Furthermore, both ways are not excluyent and could be associated in activities like a local marathon.
‘Ways of using free time effectively:
* contributing to community projects
* learning practical skills
* taking up healthy activities
Some opinions expressed nthe discussion:
“When you help others you geta lo out oft to.”
“Hove using things ve repaired or made myselt”
“Physical activity s important for everyone.”
Choose two ways and explain which is the most effective
Ways tof usinge free time effectively
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That is the reason why people usually prefer relaxing or hanging out.
Nevertheless, opting for a more practical approach instead of leisure activities is a rare avis.
So I've never heard the word "avis" before. I looked it up and while I did find a few definitions, most results are about the Avis car company. To be honest, I don't think people use the word "avis", but maybe I'm wrong.
In this regard, the aim of this essay is to show other alternatives, such as: doing physical exercise or getting involved in communitary projects.
Given the fact that technologies are intrinsically linked to lack of exercise, it would be advisable to practise some sport in order to keep in shape, and more importantly, follow/have a healthy way of life.
That is true, yet it is an individualistic point of view, since its benefits does not go beyond our own interests and are frequently related to competitiveness rather than cooperation.
How I would write it: " It is a self-centered point of view, since it only serves our self-interests and encourages competitiveness rather than cooperation."
Therefore, taking part in altruistic activities, especially, when possible, especially those which take place in our neighbourhood, could be a more effective way of using our spare time.
Apart from the social satisfaction of helping other people, it is worthy noting,to note that one can contribute to the place where people live and become more familiar with the place, which would noticeably improve coexistence.
That would have a positive effect ion our mental and, indirectly, (our) physical health.
To sum up, participating in local projects has both positive effects in our own (community) and the community where one lifeves.
Furthermore, both ways are not excluyentsive and could be associated ian be combined to become an activitiesy like a local marathon.
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Ways of using free time effectively Ways to Not wrong, I just think that using "ways to" sounds more instructional |
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Most of one’s life is spent sleeping and working in such a way that it is not often considered what to do in our free time. Most of one’s/our life is spent sleeping and working More clearer this way |
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That is the reason why people usually prefer relaxing or hanging out. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Nevertheless, opting for a more practical approach instead of leisure activities is a rare avis. Nevertheless, opting So I've never heard the word "avis" before. I looked it up and while I did find a few definitions, most results are about the Avis car company. To be honest, I don't think people use the word "avis", but maybe I'm wrong. |
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In this regard, the aim of this essay is to show other alternatives, such as: doing physical exercise or getting involved in communitary projects. In this regard, the aim of this essay is to show other alternatives, such as: doing physical exercise or getting involved in communit |
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Given the fact that technologies are intrinsically linked to lack of exercise, it would be advisable to practise some sport in order to keep in shape and more importantly follow a healthy way of life. Given the fact that technologies are intrinsically linked to lack of exercise, it would be advisable to practise some sport in order to keep in shape, and more importantly, follow/have a healthy way of life. |
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That is true, yet it is an individualistic point of view, since its benefits does not go beyond our own interests and are frequently related to competitiveness rather than cooperation. That is true, yet it is an individualistic point of view, since its benefits do How I would write it: " It is a self-centered point of view, since it only serves our self-interests and encourages competitiveness rather than cooperation." |
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Therefore, taking part in altruistic activities, especially, when possible, those which take place in our neighbourhood, could be a more effective way of using our spare time. Therefore, taking part in altruistic activities |
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Apart from the social satisfaction of helping other people, it is worthy noting, one can contribute to the place where people live and become more familiar, which would noticeably improve coexistence. Apart from the social satisfaction of helping other people, it is worthy |
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That would have positive effect in our mental and, indirectly, physical health. That would have a positive effect |
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To sum up, participating in local projects has both positive effects in our own and the community where one life. To sum up, participating in local projects has both positive effects in our own (community) and the community where one li |
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This feedback is overall more significant and practical than exercising. |
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Furthermore, both ways are not excluyent and could be associated in activities like a local marathon. Furthermore, both ways are not exclu |
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