April 24, 2023
Ways of Encouraging Young People to Study Science (essay)
Science are thought to be such a boring knowledge field that most of the students usually get interested in associated subjects, because of the prospects of a better future in economic terms, particularly in case of engineering, not in a vocational way.
Nowadays, youths are daily immersed in whatever kind of media: TV, Youtube, social media and so on, as well as, all the typical characters involved in, like actors, musicians, writers,... Due to that fact they are more influented by what it is considerated fashionable through this platforms, than by means of their teachers at school. That is the reason why these should be a tool to take into account in order to inform students about scientist’s contribution in our society.
Nonetheless, all explained above would make no sense without a proper public funding, which enable them to choose this way. It should be noted that most of fields in sciences are dependent on it. Therefore, young people will realise this career path is possible and not get frustrated if governments finantially support it.
Comparing both points, advertising could encourage young people to study science, but it is a long term measure. However, grants are the short term and most effective way to allow current universitary students make their dream of working in science true. Moreover, this would be the best scenario so as to promote the next student generation, currently in the secondary school, to become interested in science.
As a conclusion, youth will think about study science degrees whenever this path is affordable, so as not to need to work abroad far away from their roots.
You must answer this question. Write your answer in 220-260 words in an appropriate style.
1 Your class has listened to a radio discussion on how more young people can be encouraged
to study science. You have made the notes below:
Ways of encouraging young people to
study science:
+ advertising
+ school programmes Some opinions expressed in the
+ government grants igguasions
“You never see positive images of
young scientists on TV, just pop stars
or actors.”
“Science lessons should be more
practical and fun.”
“If young people see science as a
career, they'll want to study it."
Write an essay discussing two of the points in your notes. You should explain which way
would be more effective in encouraging young people to study science, providing
reasons to support your opinion
ou may, if you wish, make use of the opinions expressed In the discussion, but you should
use your own words as far as possible.
Ways ofHow to Encouraginge Young People to Study Science (essay)
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Science is a singular noun even though it covers many different subject areas. I was not sure what you meant by "a vocational way" so I left that off here. Maybe people who construct the things engineers design?
Nowadays, youths are daily immersed in whateverng people are immersed in many different kinds of media: TV, Youtube, social media and so on, as well as, all the typical characters involved in, like actors, musicians, writers,... Due to that fact they are more influented by what it is considerated fashionabl. They also follow the people who make the media like actors, musicians, writers. The pop culture they consume through thisese platforms, than by means of and from these celebrities influences them more than their teachers at school.
"Nowadays" and "and so on" are kind of old-fashioned phrases, but they still work for what you are trying to say and give it an interesting style. :)
That is the reason why these should be a tool to take into account in order to inform students about scientist’s contribution inBecause of this, these pop culture platforms should be used to inform students about what science does for our society.
Nonetheless, all explained above would make no sHowever, if we make kids aware of careers in sciensce without a proper public funding, which enable them to choose this way behind them, it won't make any sense.
It should be noted that most of fields in sciencen fact, most scientific fields are dependent on itpublic money.
"fields in sciences" is a kind of strange construction in English, so you would say "scientific fields"
Therefore, young people will realise this career path is possible and not get frustrated if governments finantially support itSo if the government financially supports the sciences, young people won't get frustrated by choosing a scientific career path.
Comparing both points,Long-term, it could be good to use advertising couldto encourage young people to study science, but it is a long term measure.
I don't understand how you are comparing the two points here so please disregard my feedback if I'm changing the meaning of your work!
However, grants areIn the short -term and, grants would be the most effective way to allow current universitary students to make their dream of working in science come true.
Dreams always "come" true in English (Or don't come true, if it doesn't work out)
Moreover, tThis would be the best scenario so as to promoteway to help the next student generation of students, currently in the secondary school, to become interested in science.
As aIn conclusion, youth will think aboutng people will consider studying science degrees wheneverwhen this path is affordable, so as not toand when they won't need to work abroad, far away from their roots.
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Overall pretty high-level stuff here. Just some minor rephrasing to help make it sound more natural. :)
May 9, 2023
Thank you so much for all your comments and help
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Nowadays, youths are daily immersed in whatever kind of media: TV, Youtube, social media and so on, as well as, all the typical characters involved in, like actors, musicians, writers,... Due to that fact they are more influented by what it is considerated fashionable through this platforms, than by means of their teachers at school. Nowadays, you "Nowadays" and "and so on" are kind of old-fashioned phrases, but they still work for what you are trying to say and give it an interesting style. :) |
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Ways of Encouraging Young People to Study Science (essay)
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Science are thought to be such a boring knowledge field that most of the students usually get interested in associated subjects, because of the prospects of a better future in economic terms, particularly in case of engineering, not in a vocational way. Science Science is a singular noun even though it covers many different subject areas. I was not sure what you meant by "a vocational way" so I left that off here. Maybe people who construct the things engineers design? |
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That is the reason why these should be a tool to take into account in order to inform students about scientist’s contribution in our society.
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Nonetheless, all explained above would make no sense without a proper public funding, which enable them to choose this way.
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It should be noted that most of fields in sciences are dependent on it. I "fields in sciences" is a kind of strange construction in English, so you would say "scientific fields" |
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Therefore, young people will realise this career path is possible and not get frustrated if governments finantially support it.
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Comparing both points, advertising could encourage young people to study science, but it is a long term measure.
I don't understand how you are comparing the two points here so please disregard my feedback if I'm changing the meaning of your work! |
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However, grants are the short term and most effective way to allow current universitary students make their dream of working in science true.
Dreams always "come" true in English (Or don't come true, if it doesn't work out) |
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Moreover, this would be the best scenario so as to promote the next student generation, currently in the secondary school, to become interested in science.
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As a conclusion, youth will think about study science degrees whenever this path is affordable, so as not to need to work abroad far away from their roots.
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