Nov. 12, 2021
Way To Go My Hometown
This weekend, we will have a family event in my hometown.
The event is that preparing kimchi for the winter, and kimchi for one year.
Since there was no refrigerator, this tradition has kept in Korea.
Maybe it started 2000 years ago or older.
All family members gather at my hometown, and make kimchi more than 2 days.
It is quite tired to make but this kimchi is tastier than selling one.
I hope we will make delicious kimchi for this year as well.
Way To Go My Hometown
This weekend, we will have a family event in my hometown.
The event is thatfor preparing kimchi for the winter, and kimchi for one year.
Since there wasere no refrigerator, this tradition has kepts in the past, this became a tradition in Korea.
Maybe iIt started about 2000 years ago or even older.
All family members gather at my hometown, and make kimchi for more than 2 days.
There is only a comma before "and" if the second clause is also a complete sentence.
It is quite tireding to make but this kimchi is tastier than selling onthe one sold at the store.
I hope we will make delicious kimchi for this year as well.
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That sounds like a nice family tradition. I also love kimchi! Great job! :)
Nov. 12, 2021
Thank you so much.
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This weekend, we will have a family event in my hometown. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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The event is that preparing kimchi for the winter, and kimchi for one year. The event is |
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Since there was no refrigerator, this tradition has kept in Korea. Since there w |
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Maybe it started 2000 years ago or older.
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All family members gather at my hometown, and make kimchi more than 2 days. All family members gather at my hometown There is only a comma before "and" if the second clause is also a complete sentence. |
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It is quite tired to make but this kimchi is tastier than selling one. It is quite tir |
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I hope we will make delicious kimchi for this year as well. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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