June 29, 2024
Watermelon Juice
The weather in Taiwan is unbearably hot right now—today it's 35°C (95°F). The only things that could save us from this hellish heat are afternoon thunderstorms or a cup of watermelon juice.
In summer, vendors pile up watermelons to prove they use real fruit, not just sugar and food coloring. The price is very cheap; a watermelon juice costs less than 1 USD. Some people like their juice clear, but I prefer it with a bit of pulp.
Watermelon Juice
The weather in Taiwan is unbearably hot right now—today it's 35°C (95°F).
The only things that couldan save us from this hellish heat are afternoon thunderstorms or a cup of watermelon juice.
In the previous sentence, you used present tense, so you should continue to use present tense.
In summer, vendors pile up watermelons to prove that they use real fruit, not just sugar and food coloring.
The price is very cheap; a cup of watermelon juice costs less than 1 USD.
You could say "a cup of watermelon juice" or just "watermelon juice". Juice does not require an article.
July 1, 2024
Thank you so much :))
Watermelon Juice
The weather in Taiwan is unbearably hot right now—today it's 35°C (95°F).
The only things that could save us from this hellish heat are afternoon thunderstorms or a cup of watermelon juice.
In the summer, vendors pile up watermelons to prove they use real fruit, not just sugar and food coloring.
The price is very cheap; a watermelon juice costs less than 1 USD.
Some people like their juice clear, but I prefer it with a bit of pulp.
July 1, 2024
Thank you so much :))
The weather in Taiwan is unbearably hot right now—today it's 35°C (95°F).
The only things that could save us from this hellish heat are afternoon thunderstorms or a cup of watermelon juice.
I think 'the only things that could possibly save us' sounds a little bit more natural, since it would add to the exaggeration you're using here.
In summer, vendors pile up watermelons to prove they use real fruit, not just sugar and food coloring.
The price is very cheap; a cup of watermelon juice costs less than $1 USD.
Some people like their juice clear, but I prefer it with a bit of pulp.
Feedback
Delicious! Is it humid in Taiwan? Humidity makes the heat even worse, in my opinion.
July 1, 2024
Thank you so much :)) Yes, Taiwan is very humid, so I hate summer lol.
Watermelon Juice
The weather in Taiwan is unbearably hot right now—today it's 35°C (95°F).
The only things that could save us from this hellish heat are afternoon thunderstorms or a cup of watermelon juice.
In summer, vendors pile up watermelons to prove they use real fruit, not just sugar and food coloring.
The price is very cheap; a cup of watermelon juice costs less than 1 USD.
I think you need to use a quantifier here. "a watermelon juice" is not quite correct.
Some people like their juice clear, but I prefer it with a bit of pulp.
Feedback
Your English is fantastic! Keep it up!
July 1, 2024
Thank you so much :))
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The only things that could save us from this hellish heat are afternoon thunderstorms or a cup of watermelon juice. This sentence has been marked as perfect! The only things that could save us from this hellish heat are afternoon thunderstorms or a cup of watermelon juice. I think 'the only things that could possibly save us' sounds a little bit more natural, since it would add to the exaggeration you're using here. This sentence has been marked as perfect! The only things that c In the previous sentence, you used present tense, so you should continue to use present tense. |
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In summer, vendors pile up watermelons to prove they use real fruit, not just sugar and food coloring. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! In the summer, vendors pile up watermelons to prove they use real fruit, not just sugar and food coloring. In summer, vendors pile up watermelons to prove that they use real fruit, not just sugar and food coloring. |
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The price is very cheap; a watermelon juice costs less than 1 USD. The price is very cheap; a cup of watermelon juice costs less than 1 USD. I think you need to use a quantifier here. "a watermelon juice" is not quite correct. The price is very cheap; a cup of watermelon juice costs less than $1 USD. This sentence has been marked as perfect! The price is very cheap; a cup of watermelon juice costs less than 1 USD. You could say "a cup of watermelon juice" or just "watermelon juice". Juice does not require an article. |
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