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Scarlett_Father

May 31, 2023

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Water Lettuce

I have collected some water lettuce from a small river near my house, and added them to the small pond. Water lettuce is a floating aquatic plant that can grow rapidly. As we know if the plants cover the surface of the pond, they might prevent oxygen from entering the water, which can lead some fish to be killed. I will watch them carefully and prepare to remove some of the water lettuce before full covered.

When I see two tiny frogs live on the green leaves, I feel so happy and can smell the harmonious life between the growing tiny animals and plants.

Here, I want to show my thanks to water lettuce who give their leaves as a temporary house to their living neighbours. On the other hand, I believe when the frogs grow up, they will certainly pay something back to the water lettuce.

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Water Lettuce

I have collected some water lettuce from a small river near my house, and added them to the small pond.

Water lettuce is a floating aquatic plant that can grow rapidly.

As we know, if the plants cover the surface of the pond, they might prevent oxygen from entering the water, which can lead to some fish to bebeing killed.

あるいは、

As we know, if the plants cover the surface of the pond, they might prevent oxygen from reaching the water, which can lead to some fish being killed.

I will watch them carefully and prepare to remove some of the water lettuce before they fully covered the water.

また、

I will watch them carefully and prepare to remove some of the water lettuce before they fully cover the surface.

When I see two tiny frogs liveing on the green leaves, I feel so happy and can smell the harmonious life between the growing tiny animals and plants.

いいですね。

Here, I want to show my thanks to the water lettuce who give their leaves as a temporary houseing to their living neighbou(u)rs.

すごいですね。

On the other hand, I believe when the frogs grow up, they will certainly pay something back to the water lettuce.

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またいい話ですよ!教えてくれてありがとうございました!それに、とても上手にかけています。

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Scarlett_Father

June 26, 2023

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感謝しています!🙇‍♂️🙇‍♂️

Water Lettuce

I have collected some water lettuce from a small river near my house, and added them to the small pond.

Water lettuce is a floating aquatic plant that can grow rapidly.

As we know if, when the plants cover the surface of the pond, they might prevent oxygen from entering the water, which can lead some fish to be killedto the killing of some fish.

I will watch them carefully and prepare to remove some of the water lettuce before it fully covereds.

When I see two tiny frogs live on the green leaves, I feel so happy and can smell the harmonious life between the growing tiny animals and plants.

Here, I want to show my thanks to the water lettuce, whoich gives their leaves as a temporary house to their living neighboring creatures.

On the other hand, I believe when the frogs grow up, they will certainly pay something back to the water lettuce.

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Scarlett_Father

June 1, 2023

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Thank you for your corrections! :-)

Water Lettuce

I have collected some water lettuce from a small river near my house, and added them to the small pond.

Water lettuce is a floating aquatic plant that can grow rapidly.

As we know, if the plants cover the surface of thea pond, they might prevent oxygen from entering the water, which can lead to some fish to bebeing killed.

I will watch them carefully and prepareget ready to remove some of the water lettuce before it fully coveres the pond.

When I see two tiny frogs liveing on the green leaves, I feel so happy and can smellense the harmonious life between the tiny growing tiny animals and plants.

Here, I want to show my thanks to the water lettuce whothat give their leaves as a temporary house to their living neighbours.

Who = people/animate objects
That = inanimate objects

On the other hand, I believe that when the frogs grow up, they will certainly pay something back to the water lettuce.

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Lovely :)

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Scarlett_Father

May 31, 2023

2

Thank you for your corrections! :-)

Water Lettuce


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Water lettuce is a floating aquatic plant that can grow rapidly.


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As we know if the plants cover the surface of the pond, they might prevent oxygen from entering the water, which can lead some fish to be killed.


As we know, if the plants cover the surface of thea pond, they might prevent oxygen from entering the water, which can lead to some fish to bebeing killed.

As we know if, when the plants cover the surface of the pond, they might prevent oxygen from entering the water, which can lead some fish to be killedto the killing of some fish.

As we know, if the plants cover the surface of the pond, they might prevent oxygen from entering the water, which can lead to some fish to bebeing killed.

あるいは、 As we know, if the plants cover the surface of the pond, they might prevent oxygen from reaching the water, which can lead to some fish being killed.

I will watch them carefully and prepare to remove some of the water lettuce before full covered.


I will watch them carefully and prepareget ready to remove some of the water lettuce before it fully coveres the pond.

I will watch them carefully and prepare to remove some of the water lettuce before it fully covereds.

I will watch them carefully and prepare to remove some of the water lettuce before they fully covered the water.

また、 I will watch them carefully and prepare to remove some of the water lettuce before they fully cover the surface.

When I see two tiny frogs live on the green leaves, I feel so happy and can smell the harmonious life between the growing tiny animals and plants.


When I see two tiny frogs liveing on the green leaves, I feel so happy and can smellense the harmonious life between the tiny growing tiny animals and plants.

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When I see two tiny frogs liveing on the green leaves, I feel so happy and can smell the harmonious life between the growing tiny animals and plants.

いいですね。

Here, I want to show my thanks to water lettuce who give their leaves as a temporary house to their living neighbours.


Here, I want to show my thanks to the water lettuce whothat give their leaves as a temporary house to their living neighbours.

Who = people/animate objects That = inanimate objects

Here, I want to show my thanks to the water lettuce, whoich gives their leaves as a temporary house to their living neighboring creatures.

Here, I want to show my thanks to the water lettuce who give their leaves as a temporary houseing to their living neighbou(u)rs.

すごいですね。

On the other hand, I believe when the frogs grow up, they will certainly pay something back to the water lettuce.


On the other hand, I believe that when the frogs grow up, they will certainly pay something back to the water lettuce.

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