Dec. 22, 2019
Water
I read an article about Libya's water problem.
According to the article getting safe water is becoming difficult in Libya. This is due to a war between an internationally recognized government and what is called a military government.
Even bottled water is becoming polluted.
This story made my heart ache.
According to the article getting safe water, it is becoming more difficult to get access to safe water in Libya.
Dec. 23, 2019
Thank you for the correction!
Water
I read an article about Libya's water problem/crisis.
I like "crisis" in this sentence, but it's also fine as you originally wrote it.
According to the article, getting safe water is becoming difficult in Libya.
This is due to a war between an internationally recognized government and what is called a military government.
Even bottled water is becoming polluted.
This story made my heart ache.
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That's so heartbreaking. I've never even heard about this crisis before! I hope it gets resolved as soon as possible.
Water
I read an article about Libya's water problemcrisis.
Your sentence is ok, but I think "crisis" is more appropriate.
According to the article, getting safe water is becoming difficult in Libya.
This is due to a war between an internationally recognized government and what is called a military government.
Even bottled water is becoming polluted.
This story made my heart ache.
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Excellent job!
Dec. 22, 2019
Thanks a lot:D
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I read an article about Libya's water problem. I read an article about Libya's water Your sentence is ok, but I think "crisis" is more appropriate. I read an article about Libya's water problem/crisis. I like "crisis" in this sentence, but it's also fine as you originally wrote it. |
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According to the article getting safe water is becoming difficult in Libya. According to the article, getting safe water is becoming difficult in Libya. According to the article, getting safe water is becoming difficult in Libya. According to the article |
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This is due to a war between an internationally recognized government and what is called a military government. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Even bottled water is becoming polluted. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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