May 23, 2020
Watching TV on the Internet!
Nowadays, the young generation prefers to watch TV programs on the internet rather than watching it on a TV set. Of course, there are some positives of watching your favorite programs on the internet. One can, for instance, watch his favorite TV shows on the bus, train, or on the airplane.
However, there are also some negative aspects of watching your favourite shows on the internet. One can easily be provoked to watch violent shows or even pornography if you are watching it online. Therefore, I strongly believe that one should watch TV programs alongside family and friends and laugh together.
Watching TV on the Internet!
Nowadays, the young generation prefers to watch TV programs on the internet rather than watching ithem on a TV set.
Of course, there are some positives of watching your favorite programs on the internet.
One can, for instance, watch his favorite TV shows on the bus, train, or on the airplane.
However, there are also some negative aspects of watching your favourite shows on the internet.
One can easily be provoked to watch violent shows or even pornography if you are watching it online.
I think provoked works, but I would say tempted.
Therefore, I strongly believe that one should watch TV programs alongside family and friends and laugh together.
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May 25, 2020
Thanks a lot for the correction!
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Nowadays, the young generation prefers to watch TV programs on the internet rather than watching it on a TV set. Nowadays, the young generation prefers to watch TV programs on the internet rather than watching |
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Of course, there are some positives of watching your favorite programs on the internet. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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One can, for instance, watch his favorite TV shows on the bus, train, or on the airplane. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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However, there are also some negative aspects of watching your favourite shows on the internet. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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One can easily be provoked to watch violent shows or even pornography if you are watching it online. One can easily be provoked to watch violent shows or even pornography if you are watching it online. I think provoked works, but I would say tempted. |
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Therefore, I strongly believe that one should watch TV programs alongside family and friends and laugh together. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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