June 22, 2021
Watching a Video Clip
When I am browsing through YouTube, I find a video clip that is about vlog during trip.
It was originally broadcast on TV and my family really likes to watch video series like these.
Because of the pandemic, my friends also watch the video series over and over again.
It shows small cities all around world.
Unlikely the big cities, small cities have their own character and I am blown away by the charming locations.
I will travel to the cities after finished this pandemic.
Watching a Video Clip
When I am browsing through YouTube, I findoften watch / look for a video clip that is about vlog made during a trip.
If you use the present tense you need to add adverbs like often. You can use the past tense: When I was browsing through Youtube I found ...
It was originally broadcast on TV and my family really likes to watch video series like these.
Because of the pandemic, my friends also love watching theis video series over and over again.
your sentence is not wrong but is a little unusual. You could say : my friends have watched the video series over and over again
It shows small cities all around world.
Unlikely the big cities, small cities have their own character and I am blown away by the charming locations.
Unlike is a preposition followed by a noun. Unlikely is an adverb and needs a verb. Don't use 'the' when meaning is 'in general'
I will travel to these cities after finished this pandemic has finished.
Feedback
Good writing. Some very good sentences. I corrected the grammar because I used to be an English teacher and notice small errors.
June 24, 2021
Thank you very much! The corrections are so helpful
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Watching a Video Clip This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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When I am browsing through YouTube, I find a video clip that is about vlog during trip. When I am browsing through YouTube, I If you use the present tense you need to add adverbs like often. You can use the past tense: When I was browsing through Youtube I found ... |
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It was originally broadcast on TV and my family really likes to watch video series like these. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Because of the pandemic, my friends also watch the video series over and over again. Because of the pandemic, my friends also love watching th your sentence is not wrong but is a little unusual. You could say : my friends have watched the video series over and over again |
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It shows small cities all around world. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Unlikely the big cities, small cities have their own character and I am blown away by the charming locations. Unlike Unlike is a preposition followed by a noun. Unlikely is an adverb and needs a verb. Don't use 'the' when meaning is 'in general' |
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I will travel to the cities after finished this pandemic. I will travel to these cities after |
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