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Nov. 9, 2019

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Watching A Movie For Crying (no spoiler)

Last night, I watched a Korean movie which based on a woman has an Alzheimer's disease on the young age. Before I watched, I had read some review trying to stay away spoiler. Most of them agreeing on the movie is a tearjerker which was the reason to watch for me. But I didn't ended up crying like they had said.

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Watching A Ma movie For Cryingto make myself cry (no spoilers)

Last night, I watched a Korean movie which based onfeaturing a woman thas ant had Alzheimer's disease on theat a young age.

Before I watched, I had read some review tryings but still tried to stay away from spoilers.

Most of them agreeing ond that the movie iwas a tearjerker whichand that was themy reason tofor watch for meing it.

But I didn't ended up crying like they had saisaid I would.

Watching A Movie ForTo Make Me Crying (no spoilers)

Last night, I watched a Korean movie, which was based on a woman has anwho had Alzheimer's disease on thefrom a young age.

Before I watched it, I had read some reviews, trying (my best) to stay away from spoilers.

Most of them agreeing on that the movie is a tearjerker, which was the reason towhy I watch for meed it.

But I didn't ended up crying, like they had said I would.

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sila

Nov. 11, 2019

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Thank you for correction!

Watching A Movie For Crying (no spoilers)

Last night, I watched a Korean movie which was based on a woman has anwho had Alzheimer's disease on thefrom a young age.

Before I watched, I had read some reviews while trying to stay away from spoilers.

Most of them agreeingd on the movie isbeing a tearjerker which, for me, was the reason to watch for meit.

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sila

Nov. 11, 2019

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Thank you so much!

Watching A Movie For Crying (no spoilers)

Last night, I watched a Korean movie which is based on a woman who has an Alzheimer's disease on theat a young age.

Before I watched, I had read some reviews trying to stay away from spoilers.

Most of them agreeing ond that the movie is a tearjerker which was the reason for me to watch for meit.

But I didn't ended up crying like they had said.

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I'm sorry I can't explain my corrections, most of them are just to make it sound a little more natural or specific grammar things I don't know how to explain.

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sila

Nov. 11, 2019

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Thank you! I think, it is really hard to explain mother language to someone, so I am really appreciate.

Watching A Movie For Crying (no spoiler)


Watching A Movie For Crying (no spoilers)

Watching A Movie For Crying (no spoilers)

Watching A Movie ForTo Make Me Crying (no spoilers)

Watching A Ma movie For Cryingto make myself cry (no spoilers)

Last night, I watched a Korean movie which based on a woman has an Alzheimer's disease on the young age.


Last night, I watched a Korean movie which is based on a woman who has an Alzheimer's disease on theat a young age.

Last night, I watched a Korean movie which was based on a woman has anwho had Alzheimer's disease on thefrom a young age.

Last night, I watched a Korean movie, which was based on a woman has anwho had Alzheimer's disease on thefrom a young age.

Last night, I watched a Korean movie which based onfeaturing a woman thas ant had Alzheimer's disease on theat a young age.

Before I watched, I had read some review trying to stay away spoiler.


Before I watched, I had read some reviews trying to stay away from spoilers.

Before I watched, I had read some reviews while trying to stay away from spoilers.

Before I watched it, I had read some reviews, trying (my best) to stay away from spoilers.

Before I watched, I had read some review tryings but still tried to stay away from spoilers.

Most of them agreeing on the movie is a tearjerker which was the reason to watch for me.


Most of them agreeing ond that the movie is a tearjerker which was the reason for me to watch for meit.

Most of them agreeingd on the movie isbeing a tearjerker which, for me, was the reason to watch for meit.

Most of them agreeing on that the movie is a tearjerker, which was the reason towhy I watch for meed it.

Most of them agreeing ond that the movie iwas a tearjerker whichand that was themy reason tofor watch for meing it.

But I didn't ended up crying like they had said.


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But I didn't ended up crying, like they had said I would.

But I didn't ended up crying like they had saisaid I would.

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