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serhan

April 16, 2023

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I went through on internet to find a good watch, which is not so expensive that I can purchase. Then I found this one. It looks nice and sportive. Color of dials and strap are cohorent each other. The strap wraps my wrist precisely. It is made up of nylon but looks very sportive and quality. Backround light works well but it is not perfect as the case's clour is black. However you can read time when you start the light in the dark. This is a perfect watch for daily use. You should not waste your money buying a Rolex, IWC, Patek etc.

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I went through ondid a search on the internet to find a good watch, which is not so expensive that I can purchaseI could afford.

Then I found this one.

It looks nice and sportivey.

CThe color of the dials and strap are cohorcompliment each other.

The strap wraps around my wrist precisnicely.

In the US, we wouldn't use the word "precisely" like this.

It is made up of nylon but looks very sportivey and of high quality.

BThe background light works well but it is not perfect asbecause the case's colour is black.

However yYou can read timehe time, however, when you startturn on the light in the dark.

We use "to turn on the light" in the US.

This is a pterfectrific watch for daily use.

or,

This is the perfect watch for daily use.

You should not waste your money buying a Rolex, IWC, Patek, etc.

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I agree. Again, good work.

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serhan

April 18, 2023

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Thank you <3

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I went through onsearched the internet to find a good watch, which is not stoo expensive, that I can purchase.

Then I found this one.

It looks nice and sportivey.

CThe color of the dials and strap are cohorent each owork well together.

The strap wrapfits my wrist precisely.

It is made up of nylon but looks very sportive any and good quality.

BThe backround light works well but it is not perfect as the case's colour is black.

do you mean background?

However you can readtell the time when you start the light in the dark.

This is a perfect watch for daily use.

You should not waste your money buying a Rolex, IWC, Patek etc.

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Great writing about the watch! :)

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serhan

April 16, 2023

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BThe backround light works well but it is not perfect as the case's colour is black.

Yes. I mistyped :(

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I went through on internet to find a good watch, which is not so expensive that I can purchase.


I went through onsearched the internet to find a good watch, which is not stoo expensive, that I can purchase.

I went through ondid a search on the internet to find a good watch, which is not so expensive that I can purchaseI could afford.

Then I found this one.


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It looks nice and sportive.


It looks nice and sportivey.

It looks nice and sportivey.

Color of dials and strap are cohorent each other.


CThe color of the dials and strap are cohorent each owork well together.

CThe color of the dials and strap are cohorcompliment each other.

The strap wraps my wrist precisely.


The strap wrapfits my wrist precisely.

The strap wraps around my wrist precisnicely.

In the US, we wouldn't use the word "precisely" like this.

It is made up of nylon but looks very sportive and quality.


It is made up of nylon but looks very sportive any and good quality.

It is made up of nylon but looks very sportivey and of high quality.

Backround light works well but it is not perfect as the case's clour is black.


BThe backround light works well but it is not perfect as the case's colour is black.

do you mean background?

BThe background light works well but it is not perfect asbecause the case's colour is black.

However you can read time when you start the light in the dark.


However you can readtell the time when you start the light in the dark.

However yYou can read timehe time, however, when you startturn on the light in the dark.

We use "to turn on the light" in the US.

This is a perfect watch for daily use.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This is a pterfectrific watch for daily use.

or, This is the perfect watch for daily use.

You should not waste your money buying a Rolex, IWC, Patek etc.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

You should not waste your money buying a Rolex, IWC, Patek, etc.

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