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Recently, The Shanghai's air quality is so bad, Lots of dust in the air. So my car is very dirty too.
Yesterday afternoon, I attended a meeting and it finished earlier than suspected. I went back home at 4 pm.
It was a good time for washing car, The sunlight and temperature were so fitted. Than I used a bucket of water and spent a half of hour to clean my car by myself. It was no any fare and exercise body. I should do this more.
最近,上海的空气质量很不好,有很多灰尘,我的车也非常脏。
昨天下午,我去参加一个会议,因为会议结束的早,下午四点我就回到了家里。
正是个洗车的好时间,阳光和温度都很合适,我就用半小时和一桶水,自己动手把车擦洗了一遍。既省钱又锻炼一下身体。以后应该经常这样做。
Wash my car
Recently, The Shanghai's air quality is so bad, L that lots of dust is in the air.
you may also say:
Recently, Shanghai's air quality is so bad. There is lots of dust in the air.
So my car is very dirty too.
Yesterday afternoon, I attended a meeting and it finished earlier than susexpected.
I went back home at 4 pm.
It was a good time for washing cara car wash,
you may also say:
It was a good time to wash my car
It was a good time for car washing
The sunlight and temperature were so fittedjust right.
or The sunlight and temperature were (just) perfect
note 1) you cannot say "The sunlight and temperature were right." though
note 2) Usually when describing sunlight, you may want to use "the level of sunlight" or "the amount of sunlight". So it would then become "The amount of sunlight and the temperature were just right."
Thaen I used a bucket of water and spent a half ofan hour to clean my car by myself.
It was no any fare andfree and I get to exercise my body.
I should do this more.
Wash my car
Recently, The Shanghai's air quality iwas so bad, L there was lots of dust in the air.
"The" does not need to be present here, and does not sound natural. Shanghai, like most other proper nouns, does not need the article in a use-case like this.
So, my car is very dirty, too.
"So" needs a comma after it, as well as "too". Whenever "too" is used at the end of a sentence in English, we write ", too".
Yesterday afternoon, I attended a meeting and it finished earlier than suspected.
It was a good time for washing my car,.
The sentence needs an article ("washing a* car"), or an adjective ("washing one* car", or a possessive adjective ("washing my* car")
The sunlight and temperature were so fitteding.
"Fitting" works here, but is not common to say where I live. We might say something like, "The sunlight and temperature were just right." Perhaps, we might say, "The sun and temperature were just right."
Thanen, I used a bucket of water and spent a half of hour to cleaning my car by myself.
It is very easy to accidentally use "than" instead of "then". We English speakers do it all the time :). Than is used just for comparison. For example: The orange cat is bigger THAN the grey cat. OR The younger guitarist has less skill THAN the older one.
It was not any fareir, and it really exercise d my body.
I'm not sure of the meaning in this sentence, but I tried to make a suggested change according to what I guessed you were trying to say. I believed you were saying that it was not fair (that you were doing this by yourself), and that you exhausted yourself with exercise.
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You're doing great! Keep it up. Most of your sentences worked very well, were understandable, and I only needed to make minor changes to sound more natural or be more proper. Great job!
Wash my car
Recently, The Shanghai's air quality is so bad, Lots of dust in the air.
So my car is very dirty too.
Yesterday afternoon, I attended a meeting and it finished earlier than susexpected.
I went back home at 4 pm.
It was a good time for washing a car (or: cars),
The sunlight and temperature were so fittedperfect (or, closer to your sentence but sounding less natural: so suitable).
"Fitted" is only used for physical objects; generally for tight-fitting clothes, I think.
Thaen I used a bucket of water and spent a half of hour to cleaning my car by myself.
It was no any fare and exercise body.
I don't understand this part, especially "no any fare"
I should do this more.
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I hate to admit it, but I've never hand washed my car... I always use the drive-through car washes!
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Recently, The Shanghai's air quality is so bad, Lots of dust in the air. Recently, Recently, "The" does not need to be present here, and does not sound natural. Shanghai, like most other proper nouns, does not need the article in a use-case like this. Recently, you may also say: Recently, Shanghai's air quality is so bad. There is lots of dust in the air. |
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It was a good time for washing car, It was a good time for washing a car (or: cars), It was a good time for washing my car The sentence needs an article ("washing a* car"), or an adjective ("washing one* car", or a possessive adjective ("washing my* car") It was a good time for you may also say: It was a good time to wash my car It was a good time for car washing |
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The sunlight and temperature were so fitted. The sunlight and temperature were "Fitted" is only used for physical objects; generally for tight-fitting clothes, I think. The sunlight and temperature were so fitt "Fitting" works here, but is not common to say where I live. We might say something like, "The sunlight and temperature were just right." Perhaps, we might say, "The sun and temperature were just right." The sunlight and temperature were or The sunlight and temperature were (just) perfect note 1) you cannot say "The sunlight and temperature were right." though note 2) Usually when describing sunlight, you may want to use "the level of sunlight" or "the amount of sunlight". So it would then become "The amount of sunlight and the temperature were just right." |
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Than I used a bucket of water and spent a half of hour to clean my car by myself. Th Th It is very easy to accidentally use "than" instead of "then". We English speakers do it all the time :). Than is used just for comparison. For example: The orange cat is bigger THAN the grey cat. OR The younger guitarist has less skill THAN the older one. Th |
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