Tasogare thought at the time, that she wasn't actually clever. Tasogare thought at the time that she wasn't actually clever.

Then, Tasogare though at the time, thatt, perhaps she wasn't actually clever. Then, Tasogare thought, perhaps she wasn't actually clever.

Tasogare thought at the time, that she wasn't actually clever (after all). Tasogare thought at the time that she wasn't actually clever (after all).

He said that washer solving the crossword was a fluke? He said that her solving the crossword was a fluke?

He said that wondered "was the crossword puzzle a fluke?" He wondered "was the crossword puzzle a fluke?"

Again, seems a bit different from the Japanese text. 彼は、「クロスワードはまぐれだった？」と心の中でつぶやきました。 Your English sentence is asking whether or not "that" was the crossword was a fluke, but what's "that"? By putting "was it a fluke?" in quotations that makes it what he said. Instead of "he said ... in his mind", "he wondered" is better. Incidentally, whenever I want to say "I wonder" in Japanese, I always struggle with how to convey that thought in Japanese.

He said that thought to himself ‘was the crossword a fluke?’ He thought to himself ‘was the crossword a fluke?’

Alternatively: He asked himself if the crossword might have been a fluke.

He said that waswondered whether the crossword was a fluke?. He wondered whether the crossword was a fluke.

He said that was the crossword a fluke? He said was the crossword a fluke?

in his mind.

in his mind.

in his mind. in his mind.

This can be omitted because it's clear that it was in his mind.

I found thean interesting word "fluke" in the comic Spy x Family. I found an interesting word "fluke" in the comic Spy x Family.

I foundcame across the interesting word "fluke", in the comic Spy x Family. I came across the interesting word "fluke", in the comic Spy x Family.

I found thean interesting word, "fluke," in the comic Spy x Family. I found an interesting word, "fluke," in the comic Spy x Family.

I don't know I'd suggest changing it, but we'd normally say "manga" instead of "comic." That said, whether there's a reason to consider manga and comics as different things is another topic. The logical statement is "I found an interesting word in the comic." That the word was "fluke" is a clarification and so grammatically it should be surrounded by commas.

I found thean interesting word, "fluke" in the comic Spy x Family. I found an interesting word, "fluke" in the comic Spy x Family.

I think it's a good word, and we often use it in Japanese, too. I think it's a good word, and we often use it in Japanese too.

The comma here is optional.

I think it's a good word and we often use it in Japanese, too. I think it's a good word and we often use it in Japanese, too.

The comma before the "too" is not wrong but is usually omitted.

The scene was asomething below.: The scene was as below:

The scene was something like the below. The scene was something like the below.

The scene was something as below. The scene was something as below.

The scene was something like below. The scene was something like below.

However, after a few days later when they were out, Anya though that a bakery was a shop for bacon. However, a few days later when they were out, Anya though that a bakery was a shop for bacon.

"that" is optional here

However, after a few days later when they were out, Anya though bakery was a shop for bacon. However, few days later when they were out, Anya though bakery was a shop for bacon.

The Japanese text seems a bit different to me: でも、数日後彼外出中に、彼女は、ベイカリーという文字を見てベーコンのお店だと思いました。 The 文字 here makes me think she read "bakery" and thought "bacon shop," and when I checked the first episode of the anime (I don't have the manga), that's indeed what happened. I would write this like so: > However, a few days later walking along the street, Anya read "bakery" on a shop sign and thought it was a "bacon" shop.

However, after a few days when they were out, Anya thought the bakery was a shop for bacon. However, after a few days when they were out, Anya thought the bakery was a shop for bacon.

However, after a few days when they were out, Anya though a bakery was a shop forsold bacon. However, after a few days when they were out, Anya though a bakery was a shop sold bacon.

However, after a few days when/while they were out, Anya thought a bakery was a shop for bacon. However, after a few days when/while they were out, Anya thought a bakery was a shop for bacon.

Was the cross word puzzle a fluke? Was the crossword puzzle a fluke?

The "crossword" in "crossword puzzle" is one word, but also best to include the "puzzle" part in many contexts. "Fluke" is a noun so it needs an article attached.

Was the cross word a fluke? Was the cross word a fluke?

Was the cross word a fluke? Was the cross word a fluke?