Was the cross word a fluke?

The scene was something like below.

However, after a few days when/while they were out, Anya thought a bakery was a shop for bacon.

Tasogare thought at the time, that she wasn't actually clever (after all).

He said that was the crossword a fluke?

Was the cross word a fluke?

I foundcame across the interesting word "fluke", in the comic Spy x Family.

The scene was something like the below.

However, after a few days when they were out, Anya though a bakery was a shop forsold bacon.

He said that thought to himself ‘was the crossword a fluke?’

Alternatively: He asked himself if the crossword might have been a fluke.

in his mind.

I found thean interesting word, "fluke" in the comic Spy x Family.

I think it's a good word and we often use it in Japanese, too.

The comma before the "too" is not wrong but is usually omitted.

The scene was something as below.

However, after a few days when they were out, Anya thought the bakery was a shop for bacon.

Then, Tasogare though at the time, thatt, perhaps she wasn't actually clever.

He said that waswondered whether the crossword was a fluke?.

in his mind.

This can be omitted because it's clear that it was in his mind.

Was the cross word puzzle a fluke?

The "crossword" in "crossword puzzle" is one word, but also best to include the "puzzle" part in many contexts.

"Fluke" is a noun so it needs an article attached.

I found thean interesting word, "fluke," in the comic Spy x Family.

I don't know I'd suggest changing it, but we'd normally say "manga" instead of "comic." That said, whether there's a reason to consider manga and comics as different things is another topic.

The logical statement is "I found an interesting word in the comic." That the word was "fluke" is a clarification and so grammatically it should be surrounded by commas.

However, after a few days later when they were out, Anya though bakery was a shop for bacon.

The Japanese text seems a bit different to me:

でも、数日後彼外出中に、彼女は、ベイカリーという文字を見てベーコンのお店だと思いました。

The 文字 here makes me think she read "bakery" and thought "bacon shop," and when I checked the first episode of the anime (I don't have the manga), that's indeed what happened. I would write this like so:

> However, a few days later walking along the street, Anya read "bakery" on a shop sign and thought it was a "bacon" shop.

He said that wondered "was the crossword puzzle a fluke?"

Again, seems a bit different from the Japanese text.

彼は、「クロスワードはまぐれだった？」と心の中でつぶやきました。

Your English sentence is asking whether or not "that" was the crossword was a fluke, but what's "that"? By putting "was it a fluke?" in quotations that makes it what he said.

Instead of "he said ... in his mind", "he wondered" is better. Incidentally, whenever I want to say "I wonder" in Japanese, I always struggle with how to convey that thought in Japanese.

in his mind.

I found thean interesting word "fluke" in the comic Spy x Family.

I think it's a good word, and we often use it in Japanese, too.

The comma here is optional.

The scene was asomething below.:

However, after a few days later when they were out, Anya though that a bakery was a shop for bacon.

"that" is optional here

Tasogare thought at the time, that she wasn't actually clever.

He said that washer solving the crossword was a fluke?