Dec. 9, 2020
War Breaking out at an Unfamiliar Place
Fortunately, the amount of COVID-19 patients in Japan is still low compared with one in Western countries. I've never heard of anyone I know who suffered from the infection.
Though people wear a facemask and wash their hands with ethanol, most of them don't believe that the infection would happen to them or cause unexpected death.
While care-free people require the government to extend of the tourism promoting campaign, medical staffs are desperate to prevent the infection from spreading and work too much without any sufficient supports from the government.
This situation is as if the war is breaking out at an unfamiliar place.
(I meant to say that people are indifferent toward the war against COVID-19 as much as toward an unfamiliar war.)
War Breaking out atin an Unfamiliar Place
I've never heard of anyone I know who suffered from the infection.
Though people wear a facemask and wash their hands with ethanol, most of them don't believe that the infection would happen to them or cause unexpected death.
While care-free people requirewant the government to extend of the tourism -promoting campaign, medical staffs are desperate to prevent the infection from spreading and work too much without any sufficient supports from the government.
This first clause is a little confusing. I edited it assuming you are saying that care-free people want the government to push for more tourism.
This situation is as if the war is breaking out atin an unfamiliar place.
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Almost no errors, but you have some phrases that are confusing. Also, what do you mean by an unfamiliar place? Are you talking about a sort of "social war" going on in Japan about coronavirus policies? If so, it makes sense, but it is a bit vague without context.
Dec. 9, 2020
Thank you for your feedback! I meant to say that people are indifferent toward the war against COVID-19 as much as toward an unfamiliar war.
Please let me know if you have appropriate phrases.
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Fortunately, the amount of COVID-19 patients in Japan is still low compared with one in Western countries. |
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I've never heard of anyone I know who suffered from the infection. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Though people wear a facemask and wash their hands with ethanol, most of them don't believe that the infection would happen to them or cause unexpected death. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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While care-free people require the government to extend of the tourism promoting campaign, medical staffs are desperate to prevent the infection from spreading and work too much without any sufficient supports from the government. While care-free people This first clause is a little confusing. I edited it assuming you are saying that care-free people want the government to push for more tourism. |
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This situation is as if the war is breaking out at an unfamiliar place. This situation is as if |
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(I meant to say that people are indifferent toward the war against COVID-19 as much as toward an unfamiliar war.) |
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