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Oct. 23, 2020

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Walking with 1 leg

After I have the bicycle accident and injured my right lag.

All I do is just sitting in house and watch TV.

This morning after I get up, I decide working to near restaurant to have breakfast.

Usually that only takes 5 minutes.

But now I only walking with my left lag and the right lag is only for support my body.

Sounds easy?

Super hard!

Because when I walking my left lag need to take care the whole-body weight.

Instead before only takes half of my body weight.

As result even just after the first 2 minutes, my left lag start feeling tired.

So, if you are walking with 2 lag, you know how lucky you are.

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After I have theI had a bicycle accident and injured my right laeg.

All I do iid after the accident was just sitting in my house and watching TV.

This morning after, I geot up, Iand decide workingd to walk to a nearby restaurant to have breakfast.

Usually thait only takes 5 minutes.

But now I could only walking with my left lag and theeg, with my right lag iseg only for supporting my body.

SDoes that sounds easy?

SIt's super hard!

Because when I'm walking, my left laeg needs to take care thesupport my whole- body weight.

Instead bBefore, it only takesneed to support half of my body weight.

As a result, even just after the firjust 2 minutes, my left lag started feeling tired.

So, if you are walking with 2 lagegs, you know how lucky you are.

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Nicely written. I'm sorry to hear about your leg :/

Walking with 1 leg

After I have theI had a bicycle accident and injured my right laeg.

ANow, all I do is just sitting in around the house and watch TV.

"Sit around" is an idiom, meaning to just relax or do nothing. "Sitting around the house" is a way to say you're doing nothing at home.

This morning after I geot up, I decide workingd to walk to a nearby restaurant to have breakfast.

Since its an action in the past, it should be "got up" and not "get up." Same thing with "decide" vs. "decided."

Usually that only takes 5 minutes.

But now I can only walking with my left laeg and the right lag is only forthere to support my body.

SIt's not. It's super hard!

Because wWhen I walking, my left laeg needs to take care thesupport my whole- body weight.

"Support" means to hold up—it's a more appropriate verb than "to take care."

Instead bBefore it only takessupported half of my body weight.

As a result, even just after the firjust 2 minutes, my left laeg started feeling tired.

So, if you arecan walking with 2 lag, you know how lucky you are.both legs, you are lucky!

Walking with 1 leg

After I have thed a bicycle accident andin which I injured my right lag.eg,

All I do is just sitting insit in the house and watch TV.

This morning after I getwoke up, I decide working tod to walk to the nearby restaurant to have breakfast.

Usually thait only takes 5 minutes.

But now I can only walking with my left laeg andwhile the right laeg is only forjust supports my body.

Sounds easy?

SIt is super hard!

Because when I walking with my left lageg, I need to take care of the whole-body weight.

InsteadWhile before, it only takesook half of my body weight.

As a result even just after, after just the first 2 minutes, my left laeg starts to feeling tired.

So, if you are walking with 2 lag, youegs, know how lucky you are.

Usually that only takes 5 minutes.


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Usually thait only takes 5 minutes.

Usually thait only takes 5 minutes.

Walking with 1 leg


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

After I have the bicycle accident and injured my right lag.


After I have theI had a bicycle accident and injured my right laeg.

After I have thed a bicycle accident andin which I injured my right lag.eg,

After I have theI had a bicycle accident and injured my right laeg.

All I do is just sitting in house and watch TV.


All I do is just sitting insit in the house and watch TV.

ANow, all I do is just sitting in around the house and watch TV.

"Sit around" is an idiom, meaning to just relax or do nothing. "Sitting around the house" is a way to say you're doing nothing at home.

All I do iid after the accident was just sitting in my house and watching TV.

This morning after I get up, I decide working to near restaurant to have breakfast.


This morning after I getwoke up, I decide working tod to walk to the nearby restaurant to have breakfast.

This morning after I geot up, I decide workingd to walk to a nearby restaurant to have breakfast.

Since its an action in the past, it should be "got up" and not "get up." Same thing with "decide" vs. "decided."

This morning after, I geot up, Iand decide workingd to walk to a nearby restaurant to have breakfast.

But now I only walking with my left lag and the right lag is only for support my body.


But now I can only walking with my left laeg andwhile the right laeg is only forjust supports my body.

But now I can only walking with my left laeg and the right lag is only forthere to support my body.

But now I could only walking with my left lag and theeg, with my right lag iseg only for supporting my body.

Sounds easy?


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

SDoes that sounds easy?

Super hard!


SIt is super hard!

SIt's not. It's super hard!

SIt's super hard!

Because when I walking my left lag need to take care the whole-body weight.


Because when I walking with my left lageg, I need to take care of the whole-body weight.

Because wWhen I walking, my left laeg needs to take care thesupport my whole- body weight.

"Support" means to hold up—it's a more appropriate verb than "to take care."

Because when I'm walking, my left laeg needs to take care thesupport my whole- body weight.

Instead before only takes half of my body weight.


InsteadWhile before, it only takesook half of my body weight.

Instead bBefore it only takessupported half of my body weight.

Instead bBefore, it only takesneed to support half of my body weight.

As result even just after the first 2 minutes, my left lag start feeling tired.


As a result even just after, after just the first 2 minutes, my left laeg starts to feeling tired.

As a result, even just after the firjust 2 minutes, my left laeg started feeling tired.

As a result, even just after the firjust 2 minutes, my left lag started feeling tired.

So, if you are walking with 2 lag, you know how lucky you are.


So, if you are walking with 2 lag, youegs, know how lucky you are.

So, if you arecan walking with 2 lag, you know how lucky you are.both legs, you are lucky!

So, if you are walking with 2 lagegs, you know how lucky you are.

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