June 29, 2022
Walking On the Moon
A day will come that the moon will have been conquested by the man. All the spots will have been explored and economically exploted, and the moon surface will be full of footprints of feet and wheels. In that moment, the moon will be completely inhabited of human beings. At first, in the XX century, the astronauts had many carefull for not contaminatte our satellite. But a day will come that not will matter the care we had, the moon will end completaly contaminatted. This is as I think will be .
Walking On the Moon
A day will come that the moon will have been conquestred by the manmankind.
"Conquered" is past tense of "conquer". "Conquest" is the noun form.
All the spotsEvery location will have been explored and exploited economically exploted, and the moon surface will be full ofcovered by footprints of feet and wheeland tire tracks.
"All the spots" sounds unnatural in this context. Wheels don't leave footprints, they leave tire tracks.
In that momentis era, the moon will be completely inhabited ofby human beings.
In English the phrase "in that moment" usually indicates a very short duration of time, almost instantaneous, or perhaps a few minutes or seconds. For example "She smiled at me and in that moment my heart began to race." You may also see the phrase "at that moment in history", which does cover a longer period of time, but still usually focuses on immediate events during that time. "At that time" can indicate either an exact time or a short period of time or a longer period of time depending on context. I suggested "In this era" because it makes it clear that you are talking about a period of many years.
At first, in the XX20th century, the astronauts had manwere very carefull for to not contaminatte our satellite.
In English, Roman numerals are generally only used for very specific purposes such as copyright dates in books. If you aren't 100% sure, always use Arabic numerals.
But a day will come that not will matter the care we had, the moon will end up completaely contaminatted, regardless of the care we took originally.
This is ashow I think it will be .
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Your meaning is clear. I just corrected some details of spelling, grammar and usage.
June 30, 2022
Thanks a lot for corrections.
Walking Oon the Moon
A day will come that the moon will have been conquestred by the man.
'man' as in mankind, rather than 'the man', as in a single man.
All the spots will have been explored and economically exploited, and the moon surface will be full of footcovered by the prints of feet and wheels.
Feet have footprints. Wheels have wheel prints (but you'd never say this). Both have prints.
In that moment, tThe moon will be completely inhabited ofby human beings.
No need to specify in that moment.
At first, in the XX20th century, the astronauts had manwere very carefull for to not contaminatte our satellite.
Strange to use Roman numerals here.
But a day will come that not will matter the care we had,the care we had will not matter; the moon will bend completaely contaminatted.
This is ashow I think it will be .
June 30, 2022
Thanks.
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A day will come that the moon will have been conquested by the man. A day will come that the moon will have been conque 'man' as in mankind, rather than 'the man', as in a single man. A day will come that the moon will have been conque "Conquered" is past tense of "conquer". "Conquest" is the noun form. |
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All the spots will have been explored and economically exploted, and the moon surface will be full of footprints of feet and wheels. All the spots will have been explored and economically exploited, and the moon surface will be Feet have footprints. Wheels have wheel prints (but you'd never say this). Both have prints.
"All the spots" sounds unnatural in this context. Wheels don't leave footprints, they leave tire tracks. |
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In that moment, the moon will be completely inhabited of human beings.
No need to specify in that moment. In th In English the phrase "in that moment" usually indicates a very short duration of time, almost instantaneous, or perhaps a few minutes or seconds. For example "She smiled at me and in that moment my heart began to race." You may also see the phrase "at that moment in history", which does cover a longer period of time, but still usually focuses on immediate events during that time. "At that time" can indicate either an exact time or a short period of time or a longer period of time depending on context. I suggested "In this era" because it makes it clear that you are talking about a period of many years. |
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At first, in the XX century, the astronauts had many carefull for not contaminatte our satellite. At first, in the Strange to use Roman numerals here. At first, in the In English, Roman numerals are generally only used for very specific purposes such as copyright dates in books. If you aren't 100% sure, always use Arabic numerals. |
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