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Ducky

July 13, 2022

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Walking in the Morning

This morning I went to the dentist for a rutine control; as all was correct, it was a fast visit. The dental clinic is not far of home, so is possible go walking. To return home, I did a little turn and come back walking on the sand, in the shore on the beach, wetting my feet. In the coming weeks I will try to go to the beach all whatever I can.

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Walking in the Morning

This morning I went to the dentist for a routine control; as all was correct,visit. Everything looked good so it was a fast visit.

This sounds more natural in the US.

The dental clinic is not far ofrom home, so is possible go walkingI could walk to it.

This sounds more natural in the US.

To return home, I did a little turn and come back walking on the sand, in the shoreOn the way home, I went a different way and walked on the beach, w getting my feet wet.

This sounds more natural in the US.

In the coming weeks, I wi'll try to go to the beach all whatwhenever I can.

This sounds more natural in the US. "Whenever" is for time whereas "whatever" is for things or objects.

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Great job!

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Ducky

July 14, 2022

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Thanks you very much.

Walking in the Morning

This morning, I went to the dentist for a routine controlheck-up; as all was correct, it was a fast visit.

The dental clinic is not far ofrom home, so it's possible gto walking there.

To return home, I didtook a little tdetourn and coame back walking on the sand, i on the shore onf the beach, wetting my feet.

In the coming weeks, I will try to go to the beach all whatwhenever I can.

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Ducky

July 14, 2022

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Thanks a lot.

This morning I went to the dentist for a routine control; as all was correct,heckup. Everything was alright, so it was a fast visit.

The dental clinic is not far ofrom my home, so it is possible goto get there by walking.

To return home, I did a little ttook a detourn and come back, walkinged on the sand, in the shore on the beach, wettingand got my feet wet.

In the comingnext few weeks, I will try to go to the beach all whatever I can.

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Ducky

July 14, 2022

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Thanks.

Walking in theA Morning Stroll

More professional and concise

This morning I went to the dentist for a rutine controlmy routinely dentist visit; as all was correctwell, it was a fast visittimely.

Not correct; use well to describe something good. Timely sounds more sophisticated

The dental clinic iwas not far ofrom my home, so it was possible gto walking.

Was is past tense, you’re talking about something that happened in the past you need to use this. Again it was possible = past.

To return home, I didonly had to do a little turn and come back walking on the sand,beach. I dipped my feet in the shorewater onf the beach, wetting my feet.shore.

In the coming weeks I will try to go to the beach all whatever I canwhenever I am free.

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Overall good but maintain tense + maintain tone

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Ducky

July 14, 2022

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I really appreciate your corrections.

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July 14, 2022

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This morning I went to the dentist for a rutine controlmy routinely dentist visit; as all was correctwell, it was a fast visittimely.

Not correct; use well to describe something good. Timely sounds more sophisticated

Sorry I’ll correct myself it should be:
“my routine dentist appointment” or you can say “yearly” instead of routine if it’s once a year etc.

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Ducky

July 15, 2022

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Thanks :)

Walking in the Morning Walk

This morning I went to the dentist for a routine controlappointment; as all was correctwell, it was a fastquick visit.

control-> appointment, correct->well, fast->quick.

The dental clinic is not far ofrom home, so it is possible gto walking.

of -> from,

To returnon my way home, I did a little turn and come back walking on the sand, in the shorewalked back on the beach, wetting my feet. in the sand

In the coming weeks I will try to go to the beach all whatenever I can.

Walking in the Morning

Walking in the Morning Walk

Walking in theA Morning Stroll

This morning I went to the dentist for a rutine control; as all was correct, it was a fast visit.

This morning I went to the dentist for a rutine controlmy routinely dentist visit; as all was correctwell, it was a fast visittimely.

This morning I went to the dentist for a routine control; as all was correct,visit. Everything looked good so it was a fast visit.

This morning, I went to the dentist for a routine controlheck-up; as all was correct, it was a fast visit.

This morning I went to the dentist for a routine controlappointment; as all was correctwell, it was a fastquick visit.

This morning I went to the dentist for a routine control; as all was correct,heckup. Everything was alright, so it was a fast visit.

The dental clinic is not far of home, so is possible go walking.

The dental clinic iwas not far ofrom my home, so it was possible gto walking.

The dental clinic is not far ofrom home, so is possible go walkingI could walk to it.

The dental clinic is not far ofrom home, so it's possible gto walking there.

The dental clinic is not far ofrom home, so it is possible gto walking.

The dental clinic is not far ofrom my home, so it is possible goto get there by walking.

To return home, I did a little turn and come back walking on the sand, in the shore on the beach, wetting my feet.

To return home, I didonly had to do a little turn and come back walking on the sand,beach. I dipped my feet in the shorewater onf the beach, wetting my feet.shore.

To return home, I did a little turn and come back walking on the sand, in the shoreOn the way home, I went a different way and walked on the beach, w getting my feet wet.

To return home, I didtook a little tdetourn and coame back walking on the sand, i on the shore onf the beach, wetting my feet.

To returnon my way home, I did a little turn and come back walking on the sand, in the shorewalked back on the beach, wetting my feet. in the sand

To return home, I did a little ttook a detourn and come back, walkinged on the sand, in the shore on the beach, wettingand got my feet wet.

In the coming weeks I will try to go to the beach all whatever I can.

In the coming weeks I will try to go to the beach all whatever I canwhenever I am free.

In the coming weeks, I wi'll try to go to the beach all whatwhenever I can.

In the coming weeks, I will try to go to the beach all whatwhenever I can.

In the coming weeks I will try to go to the beach all whatenever I can.

In the comingnext few weeks, I will try to go to the beach all whatever I can.

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