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Walking app
I feel like I'm not getting enough exercise, so I downloaded a walking app.
This is an app that walks while picking up seedlings and planting flowers.
I went to a convenience store a little far and back home a little detour today.
I hope I can keep it up.
運動不足だと思いウォーキング系のアプリをダウンロードしました。
苗を拾ったり花を植えたりしながら歩くアプリです。
今日はちょっと遠くのコンビニまで行って、ちょっと遠回りして帰ってきました。
続けられるといいなぁ。
Walking app
I feel like I'm not getting enough exercise, so I downloaded a walking app.
This is an app that walks whilehelps you picking up seedlings and planting flowers while you're walking.
Today, I went to a convenience store that was a little far, and on the way back home I took a little detour today.
Here is a suggestion for making it sound a bit more natural.
I hope I can keep it up.
This is an app that walorks while I picking up seedlings and planting flowers.
Are you the one picking up seedlings and planting flowers? I don't think that an app can do that lol. I am not entirely sure what you are trying to say here - so I just made my best guess.
I went to a convenience store that is a little far andway, and then came back home after a little detour today.
Don't forget your prepositions!
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Walking app
I feel like I'm not getting enough exercise, so I downloaded a walking app.
This is an app that walks while picking up seedlings and planting flowers.
I went to a convenience store a little far and back home a little detour today.
I hope I can keep it up.
Walking app
I feel like I'm not getting enough exercise, so I downloaded a walking app.
This iIt's an app that walks while pickings up seedlings and plantings flowers while you walk.
Have to specify that it's YOU walking, not the app hehe
I went to a convenience store a little far away and back home by a little detour today.
In this case we always use "far" with another word. You can say "far off" or "far out," or specify the reference point ("far from home").
Exception: when answering a question sometimes people just say "far" by itself
ie. Person A: "Where is the convenience store?"
Person B: "It's a little far." ("It's a little far away." <--- also correct)
I hope I can keep it up.
Walking app
I feel like I'm not getting enough exercise, so I downloaded a walking app.
This is an app that walks while picking up seedlings and planting flowers.
I'm not sure how to correct, I'm not clear what you're trying to say. An app doesn't walk, though.
I went to a convenience store a littlenot far away and back home on a little detour today.
I hope I can keep it up.
yesterday
Thank you for checking.
...If I walk a lot, the number of flowers in the app will increase...
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Have to specify that it's YOU walking, not the app hehe This is an app that w Are you the one picking up seedlings and planting flowers? I don't think that an app can do that lol. I am not entirely sure what you are trying to say here - so I just made my best guess. This is an app that |
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