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SummerTeaWater

Feb. 14, 2022

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Wake Up Early

As you may know, there is a trend about morning routines, so called Miracle Morning.

According to the miracle morning, we can use more effective life drinking tea, reading books or having meditation early in the morning.

In Korea, there is a lawyer who wakes up at 4:30.

About 3 hours, she can use for her own purposes.

Finally, she got a certification of lawyers, became a famous YouTuber and now she released a new book about her morning routines.

The most important thing for these routines, we need to go to bed before 10 pm.

I agree this sentence because I also experienced during my military service.

I was a night owl but it was changed when I was serving in the army.

I had to sleep between 9 pm or 10pm, and I should wake up 6 am.

During 2 years, I could change my body rhythm and now I usually wake up near 5 am.

Overall, it is possible to wake up early when going to bed early, I think.

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Wake Up Early

Or: Waking Up Early

As you may know, there is a trend abouty morning routines, and it iso called the Miracle Morning.

According to the mMiracle mMorning, we can usehave a more effective life by drinking tea, reading books or havdoing meditation early in the morning.

Or: According to the Miracle Morning, we can use our time more effectively by drinking tea, reading books or having meditation early in the morning.

In Korea, there is a lawyer who wakes up at 4:30.

AFor about 3 hours, she can ususes her time for her own purposes.

Finally, she got a certification ofto be a lawyers, became a famous YouTuber and now shehas now released a new book about her morning routines.

Or: Finally, she got a law certification, became a famous YouTuber and has now released a new book about her morning routines.

The most important thing forabout these routines, is that we need to go to bed before 10 pm.

I agree with this sentence because I also experienced this during my military service.

I had to sleep between 9 pm or 10pm, and I shouldhad to wake up 6 am.

During those 2 years, I could changed my body rhythm, and now I usually wake up nearound 5 am.

Or: During those 2 years, I changed my body rhythm, and now I usually wake up at approximately 5 am.

Overall, I think it is possible to wake up early when goingif you go to bed early, I think.

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Very interesting! I try to sleep early as well, but it's not easy! Great job! :)

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SummerTeaWater

Feb. 15, 2022

402

Thank you very much!

Wakeing Up Early

As you may know, there is a new trend about morning routines, so called "Miracle Morning."

According to the "miracle morning," we can usecreate a more effective lifestyle by drinking tea, reading books, or havdoing meditation early in the morning.

Changed some words to sound more natural.

In Korea, there is a lawyer who wakes up at 4:30.

ABy doing this, she has about 3 hours, that she can use for her own purposes.

Finally, she got a certification of lawyersShe got a JD (juris doctor), became a famous YouTuber, and now she recently released a new book about her morning routines.

In English, a law degree is called a "juris doctor," but most people just say "JD."

The most important thing for these routines, weabout this routine is that you need to go to bed before 10 pm.

I agree this sentencewith this idea, because I also experienced the benefits of it during my military service.

Added a few more words for clearer understanding.

I was a night owl, but it wasthat changed when I was serving in the army.

I had to sleep between 9 pm orand 10pm, and I shouldhad to wake up at 6 am.

DuringOver 2 years, I couldwas able to change my body rhythm and now I usually wake up nearound 5 am.

Overall, I think it is possible to wake up early when going, so long as you go to bed early, I think.

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잘 했습니다! 일찍 일어나는 것을 좋아해요. 그런데, 가끔만요. ㅋㅋㅋ.

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SummerTeaWater

Feb. 14, 2022

402

고맙습니다! ㅎㅎ

As you may know, there is a trend about morning routines, so called the Miracle Morning.

Maybe: There is a morning routine trending right now called the Miracle Morning

"trend about morning routines" isn't incorrect but it sounds awkward

According to the miracle morning, we can usehave a more effective life by drinking tea, reading books, or having meditationg early in the morning.

In Korea, there is a lawyer who wakes up at 4:30.

AShe has about 3 hours, she can use fo to use however sher own purposes would like.

Finally, sShe got a lawyer certification of lawyers, became a famous YouTuber and now she released a new book about her morning routines.

I think "She became a lawyer" is best, but I'm not sure what you mean.

The most important thing for these routines, is that we need to go to bed before 10 pm.

I agree this sentencewith this because I also experienced it during my military service.

I was a night owl but it wasthat changed when I was serving in the army.

I had to go sleep between 9 pm or 10pm, and I should wawoke up 6 am.

During those 2 years, I could change my body rhythm changed and now I usually wake up nearabout 5 am.

Overall, I think it is possible to wake up early when going to bed early, I think.

Feedback

Good work and interesting thoughts! I go to bed early and wake up early, so it's encouraging for me :-) Most of the corrections were stylistic, not grammar. I was just working to make it sound more natural.

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SummerTeaWater

Feb. 14, 2022

402

Thank you so much for fixing my sentences.

Wake Up Early


Wakeing Up Early

Wake Up Early

Or: Waking Up Early

As you may know, there is a trend about morning routines, so called Miracle Morning.


As you may know, there is a trend about morning routines, so called the Miracle Morning.

Maybe: There is a morning routine trending right now called the Miracle Morning "trend about morning routines" isn't incorrect but it sounds awkward

As you may know, there is a new trend about morning routines, so called "Miracle Morning."

As you may know, there is a trend abouty morning routines, and it iso called the Miracle Morning.

According to the miracle morning, we can use more effective life drinking tea, reading books or having meditation early in the morning.


According to the miracle morning, we can usehave a more effective life by drinking tea, reading books, or having meditationg early in the morning.

According to the "miracle morning," we can usecreate a more effective lifestyle by drinking tea, reading books, or havdoing meditation early in the morning.

Changed some words to sound more natural.

According to the mMiracle mMorning, we can usehave a more effective life by drinking tea, reading books or havdoing meditation early in the morning.

Or: According to the Miracle Morning, we can use our time more effectively by drinking tea, reading books or having meditation early in the morning.

In Korea, there is a lawyer who wakes up at 4:30.


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This sentence has been marked as perfect!

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About 3 hours, she can use for her own purposes.


AShe has about 3 hours, she can use fo to use however sher own purposes would like.

ABy doing this, she has about 3 hours, that she can use for her own purposes.

AFor about 3 hours, she can ususes her time for her own purposes.

Finally, she got a certification of lawyers, became a famous YouTuber and now she released a new book about her morning routines.


Finally, sShe got a lawyer certification of lawyers, became a famous YouTuber and now she released a new book about her morning routines.

I think "She became a lawyer" is best, but I'm not sure what you mean.

Finally, she got a certification of lawyersShe got a JD (juris doctor), became a famous YouTuber, and now she recently released a new book about her morning routines.

In English, a law degree is called a "juris doctor," but most people just say "JD."

Finally, she got a certification ofto be a lawyers, became a famous YouTuber and now shehas now released a new book about her morning routines.

Or: Finally, she got a law certification, became a famous YouTuber and has now released a new book about her morning routines.

The most important thing for these routines, we need to go to bed before 10 pm.


The most important thing for these routines, is that we need to go to bed before 10 pm.

The most important thing for these routines, weabout this routine is that you need to go to bed before 10 pm.

The most important thing forabout these routines, is that we need to go to bed before 10 pm.

I agree this sentence because I also experienced during my military service.


I agree this sentencewith this because I also experienced it during my military service.

I agree this sentencewith this idea, because I also experienced the benefits of it during my military service.

Added a few more words for clearer understanding.

I agree with this sentence because I also experienced this during my military service.

I was a night owl but it was changed when I was serving in the army.


I was a night owl but it wasthat changed when I was serving in the army.

I was a night owl, but it wasthat changed when I was serving in the army.

I had to sleep between 9 pm or 10pm, and I should wake up 6 am.


I had to go sleep between 9 pm or 10pm, and I should wawoke up 6 am.

I had to sleep between 9 pm orand 10pm, and I shouldhad to wake up at 6 am.

I had to sleep between 9 pm or 10pm, and I shouldhad to wake up 6 am.

During 2 years, I could change my body rhythm and now I usually wake up near 5 am.


During those 2 years, I could change my body rhythm changed and now I usually wake up nearabout 5 am.

DuringOver 2 years, I couldwas able to change my body rhythm and now I usually wake up nearound 5 am.

During those 2 years, I could changed my body rhythm, and now I usually wake up nearound 5 am.

Or: During those 2 years, I changed my body rhythm, and now I usually wake up at approximately 5 am.

Overall, it is possible to wake up early when going to bed early, I think.


Overall, I think it is possible to wake up early when going to bed early, I think.

Overall, I think it is possible to wake up early when going, so long as you go to bed early, I think.

Overall, I think it is possible to wake up early when goingif you go to bed early, I think.

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