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My favourte fotball club is Arsenal FC.
I have a littile story about it.
It started when i was six years old, as my age boys i was also fan of the Brasilian Fotball, they wore a yellow shirt.
Onced i asked my mother to buy me a Brasilian jersey, but my mother was careless and changed the jersey which was also yellow.
I excepted a brasilian yellow but i recivied a changed lifer jersey instead of it. It was the legendary number of 14 Henry Jersey.
After i sometime i watched the Arsenal matches.
The story is continue when i was littile bit older i got a PC, so i started to play games like FIFA.
in the fifa first selectable team was the Arsenal.
These two key momnet were in my life change it to a Arsenal Fan.
Waiting for a football match
My favourite football club is Arsenal FC.
I have a littile story about it.
It started when iI was six years old, a. Like other boys my age boys i, I was also a fan of the Brasizillian Football, t club. They wore a yellow shirt.
Probably you want to say "uniform" instead of "shirt."
Onced i I asked my mother to buy me a Brasizillian jersey, but my mother was careless and changed (?) the jersey which was also yellow.
Not sure what you mean by "changed." Possibly the second half of the sentence should say, "... and bought a different jersey which was also yellow."
I excepted a bBrasizillian yellow but i recievied a changed lifer (?) jersey instead of it.
I don't know what "changed lifer" is. Do you mean to say it was a "life-changing" jersey? i.e. a jersey that changed your life?
It was the legendary number of 14 Henry Jersey.
After i(that), I sometime i watched the Arsenal matches.
The story is continued when iI was littile bit older iI got a PC, so iI started to play games like FIFA.
iIn the fifaFIFA game, the first selectable team was the Arsenal.
These two key momnetents were iwhen my life change it to a Arsenal Fan.
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Nice work! The spelling needs some work, and remember to capitalize "I", but overall it was mostly understandable.
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My favourte fotball club is Arsenal FC. My favo |
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I have a littile story about it. I have a litt |
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It started when i was six years old, as my age boys i was also fan of the Brasilian Fotball, they wore a yellow shirt. It started when Probably you want to say "uniform" instead of "shirt." |
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Onced i asked my mother to buy me a Brasilian jersey, but my mother was careless and changed the jersey which was also yellow. Once Not sure what you mean by "changed." Possibly the second half of the sentence should say, "... and bought a different jersey which was also yellow." |
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I excepted a brasilian yellow but i recivied a changed lifer jersey instead of it. I excepted a I don't know what "changed lifer" is. Do you mean to say it was a "life-changing" jersey? i.e. a jersey that changed your life? |
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It was the legendary number of 14 Henry Jersey. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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After i sometime i watched the Arsenal matches. After |
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The story is continue when i was littile bit older i got a PC, so i started to play games like FIFA. The story is continued when |
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in the fifa first selectable team was the Arsenal.
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These two key momnet were in my life change it to a Arsenal Fan. These two key mom |
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