Sept. 11, 2022
Yesterday afternoon, my wife wanted to use a Ceramic Electric Stewpot to cook soybeans.
That was the first time she had used it, so she didn't know how to operate it.
At that moment, the stewpot was on the floor. To see the control panel, I had to squat. After I did that, I started to stand up, but suddenly, my waist had severe pain and I almost fell.
I tried my best not to fall and moved to my bed, which took a lot of time and effort.
After I lay down on my bed, I could only stay in one posture. If I changed my posture a little, my waist would hurt severely and I would get sweaty.
Two hours later, I wanted to go to the bathroom. There were three steps to the whole process.
Firstly, I had to sit on the bed. Secondly, I had to stand up. Thirdly, I had to walk.
To achieve each step, I had to find a suitable posture which was less painful. The first two steps took almost 20 minutes.
When I walked to the bathroom, I had to keep a special posture, otherwise, I couldn't even stand.
I had waist pain two times before. The first time took place in about 2015, the second time took place in 2020. I did the medical check, but there was no waist bone injury.
Now, I am lying down on my bed. I think the treatment might be only to have a while of rest.
It's really strange. It suddenly hurt for no reason, but when I stood up, I was not overexerted.
Yesterday afternoon, my wife wanted to use a Ceramic Electric Stewpotn electric Dutch oven to cook soybeans.
From pictures online, this is what I could call a Dutch oven. Perhaps even a slow cooker? You can have a look too to see if that fits :)
That was the first time she had used it, so she didn't know how to operate it yet.
At that momenWhile she tried to figure it out, the stewpot was on the floor.
To see the control panel, I had to squat on the ground.
Yours is correct - this is just more natural sounding
After I did that, I started to stand up, but suddenly, my waist hadI had a severe pain in my ribs and I almost fell down.
We don't usually say "waist" for pain. Perhaps ribs, maybe stomach or chest, or if it's more general and on the side, you could say "pain in my side".
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If I changed my posture a little, my waistside/ribs would hurt severely and I would get sweaty.
To achieveFor each step, I had to find a suitable posture which was less painful.
When I walked to the bathroom, I had to keep a specialfic posture, otherwise, I couldn't even stand.
I had wave had thist pain two times before.
I did the medical checkhad a doctor check it out, but there was no waist bonerib injury.
The bones around your waist would be "ribs".
I think the treatment might be only to have a while ofjust to rest.
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Sounds so painful! I hope you are feeling better now.
Great writing - very readable, just changed a few things to sound more natural and native :)
Yesterday afternoon, my wife wanted to use a Ceramic Electrn electric ceramic Sstewpot to cook soybeans.
Thatis was the first time she had used it, so she didn't know how to operate it.
At that moment, the stewpot waslanded on the floor.
To see the control panel, I had to squat down.
After I did that, I started to stand up, but suddenly, my waist had severe pain and I almost fell.
I tried my best not to fall and moved to my bed, which took a lot of time and effort.
After I lay downrested on my bed, I could only stay in one posture.ition.
There were three steps to the whole process.
Firstly, I had to sit on the bed.
The first two steps took almost 20 minutes.
Now, I am lying down on my bed.
It's really strange.
Waist Pain
Yesterday afternoon, my wife wanted to use a Cceramic Eelectric Stewpotslowcooker to cook soybeans.
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At that moment, the stewpotlowcooker was on the floor.
To see the control panel, I had to squat.
After I did that, I started to stand up, but, suddenly, my waist had severe painI felt severe pain in my waist and I almost fell.
I tried my best not to fall and moved to my bed, which took a lot of time and effort.
After I lay down on my bed, I could only stalie only in one postureition.
Nice use of the word, "lay."
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After I lay down on my bed, I could lie in one position only.
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After I lay down on my bed, I only could lie in one position.
If I changed my postureition even a little bit, my waist would hurt severely hurt again and I would get sweaty.
Wow, this sounds really bad!
Two hours later, I wanted to go to the bathroom.
There were three steps to the whole process.
Firstly, I had to get up to sit on the bed.
This is a US alternative.
Secondly, I had to stand up.
US alternative
Thirdly, I had to walk.
US alternative
To achieve each step, I had to find a suitable postureition which was less painful.
The first two steps took almost 20 minutes.
When I walked to the bathroom, I had to keepmaintain a specialfic postureition because , otherwise, I couldn't even stand.
I've had waist pain two times before.
The first time took placeoccurred in about 2015, the second time took place in 2020.
I did the medical check, but there waswent to the Doctor's, but no waist bone injury could be found.
We don't ever use the term, "waist bone," in the US.
Now, I am lying down on my bed.
I think the treatment might be only to havejust resting for a while of rest.
It's really strange.
It suddenly hurt for no reason, butecause, when I stood up, I wasdid not overexerted myself.
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Nice work! Please take care of yourself!
After I did that, I started to stand up, but suddenly, my waist had severe painI had a severe pain at my waist and I almost fell.
I think the treatment might be only to have a whileperiod of rest.
It suddenly hurt for no reason, but when I stood up, I was not overexerteding myself.
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