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Jack

Sept. 11, 2022

15
Waist Pain

Yesterday afternoon, my wife wanted to use a Ceramic Electric Stewpot to cook soybeans.

That was the first time she had used it, so she didn't know how to operate it.

At that moment, the stewpot was on the floor. To see the control panel, I had to squat. After I did that, I started to stand up, but suddenly, my waist had severe pain and I almost fell.

I tried my best not to fall and moved to my bed, which took a lot of time and effort.

After I lay down on my bed, I could only stay in one posture. If I changed my posture a little, my waist would hurt severely and I would get sweaty.

Two hours later, I wanted to go to the bathroom. There were three steps to the whole process.

Firstly, I had to sit on the bed. Secondly, I had to stand up. Thirdly, I had to walk.

To achieve each step, I had to find a suitable posture which was less painful. The first two steps took almost 20 minutes.

When I walked to the bathroom, I had to keep a special posture, otherwise, I couldn't even stand.

I had waist pain two times before. The first time took place in about 2015, the second time took place in 2020. I did the medical check, but there was no waist bone injury.

Now, I am lying down on my bed. I think the treatment might be only to have a while of rest.

It's really strange. It suddenly hurt for no reason, but when I stood up, I was not overexerted.

Corrections

Yesterday afternoon, my wife wanted to use a Ceramic Electric Stewpotn electric Dutch oven to cook soybeans.

From pictures online, this is what I could call a Dutch oven. Perhaps even a slow cooker? You can have a look too to see if that fits :)

That was the first time she had used it, so she didn't know how to operate it yet.

At that momenWhile she tried to figure it out, the stewpot was on the floor.

To see the control panel, I had to squat on the ground.

Yours is correct - this is just more natural sounding

After I did that, I started to stand up, but suddenly, my waist hadI had a severe pain in my ribs and I almost fell down.

We don't usually say "waist" for pain. Perhaps ribs, maybe stomach or chest, or if it's more general and on the side, you could say "pain in my side".

After I lay down on my bed, I could only stay in one posturn't move.

If I changed my posture a little, my waistside/ribs would hurt severely and I would get sweaty.

To achieveFor each step, I had to find a suitable posture which was less painful.

When I walked to the bathroom, I had to keep a specialfic posture, otherwise, I couldn't even stand.

I had wave had thist pain two times before.

I did the medical checkhad a doctor check it out, but there was no waist bonerib injury.

The bones around your waist would be "ribs".

I think the treatment might be only to have a while ofjust to rest.

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Sounds so painful! I hope you are feeling better now.

Great writing - very readable, just changed a few things to sound more natural and native :)

Jack's avatar
Jack

Sept. 12, 2022

15

Thank you very much

Yesterday afternoon, my wife wanted to use a Ceramic Electrn electric ceramic Sstewpot to cook soybeans.

Thatis was the first time she had used it, so she didn't know how to operate it.

At that moment, the stewpot waslanded on the floor.

To see the control panel, I had to squat down.

After I did that, I started to stand up, but suddenly, my waist had severe pain and I almost fell.

I tried my best not to fall and moved to my bed, which took a lot of time and effort.

After I lay downrested on my bed, I could only stay in one posture.ition.

There were three steps to the whole process.

Firstly, I had to sit on the bed.

The first two steps took almost 20 minutes.

Now, I am lying down on my bed.

It's really strange.

Jack's avatar
Jack

Sept. 14, 2022

15

Thank you very much

Waist Pain

Yesterday afternoon, my wife wanted to use a Cceramic Eelectric Stewpotslowcooker to cook soybeans.

ThaIt was the first time she had used it, so she didn't know how to operate it.

At that moment, the stewpotlowcooker was on the floor.

To see the control panel, I had to squat.

After I did that, I started to stand up, but, suddenly, my waist had severe painI felt severe pain in my waist and I almost fell.

I tried my best not to fall and moved to my bed, which took a lot of time and effort.

After I lay down on my bed, I could only stalie only in one postureition.

Nice use of the word, "lay."

or

After I lay down on my bed, I could lie in one position only.

or


After I lay down on my bed, I only could lie in one position.

If I changed my postureition even a little bit, my waist would hurt severely hurt again and I would get sweaty.

Wow, this sounds really bad!

Two hours later, I wanted to go to the bathroom.

There were three steps to the whole process.

Firstly, I had to get up to sit on the bed.

This is a US alternative.

Secondly, I had to stand up.

US alternative

Thirdly, I had to walk.

US alternative

To achieve each step, I had to find a suitable postureition which was less painful.

The first two steps took almost 20 minutes.

When I walked to the bathroom, I had to keepmaintain a specialfic postureition because , otherwise, I couldn't even stand.

I've had waist pain two times before.

The first time took placeoccurred in about 2015, the second time took place in 2020.

I did the medical check, but there waswent to the Doctor's, but no waist bone injury could be found.

We don't ever use the term, "waist bone," in the US.

Now, I am lying down on my bed.

I think the treatment might be only to havejust resting for a while of rest.

It's really strange.

It suddenly hurt for no reason, butecause, when I stood up, I wasdid not overexerted myself.

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Nice work! Please take care of yourself!

Jack's avatar
Jack

Sept. 12, 2022

15

Thank you very much for your corrections.

After I did that, I started to stand up, but suddenly, my waist had severe painI had a severe pain at my waist and I almost fell.

I think the treatment might be only to have a whileperiod of rest.

It suddenly hurt for no reason, but when I stood up, I was not overexerteding myself.

Jack's avatar
Jack

Sept. 12, 2022

15

Thank you very much.

Thirdly, I had to walk.


Thirdly, I had to walk.

US alternative

Two hours later, I wanted to go to the bathroom.


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There were three steps to the whole process.


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This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Firstly, I had to sit on the bed.


Firstly, I had to get up to sit on the bed.

This is a US alternative.

Firstly, I had to sit on the bed.

Secondly, I had to stand up.


Secondly, I had to stand up.

US alternative

Waist Pain


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Yesterday afternoon, my wife wanted to use a Ceramic Electric Stewpot to cook soybeans.


Yesterday afternoon, my wife wanted to use a Cceramic Eelectric Stewpotslowcooker to cook soybeans.

Yesterday afternoon, my wife wanted to use a Ceramic Electrn electric ceramic Sstewpot to cook soybeans.

Yesterday afternoon, my wife wanted to use a Ceramic Electric Stewpotn electric Dutch oven to cook soybeans.

From pictures online, this is what I could call a Dutch oven. Perhaps even a slow cooker? You can have a look too to see if that fits :)

That was the first time she had used it, so she didn't know how to operate it.


ThaIt was the first time she had used it, so she didn't know how to operate it.

Thatis was the first time she had used it, so she didn't know how to operate it.

That was the first time she had used it, so she didn't know how to operate it yet.

At that moment, the stewpot was on the floor.


At that moment, the stewpotlowcooker was on the floor.

At that moment, the stewpot waslanded on the floor.

At that momenWhile she tried to figure it out, the stewpot was on the floor.

To see the control panel, I had to squat.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

To see the control panel, I had to squat down.

To see the control panel, I had to squat on the ground.

Yours is correct - this is just more natural sounding

After I did that, I started to stand up, but suddenly, my waist had severe pain and I almost fell.


After I did that, I started to stand up, but suddenly, my waist had severe painI had a severe pain at my waist and I almost fell.

After I did that, I started to stand up, but, suddenly, my waist had severe painI felt severe pain in my waist and I almost fell.

After I did that, I started to stand up, but suddenly, my waist had severe pain and I almost fell.

After I did that, I started to stand up, but suddenly, my waist hadI had a severe pain in my ribs and I almost fell down.

We don't usually say "waist" for pain. Perhaps ribs, maybe stomach or chest, or if it's more general and on the side, you could say "pain in my side".

I tried my best not to fall and moved to my bed, which took a lot of time and effort.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

After I lay down on my bed, I could only stay in one posture.


After I lay down on my bed, I could only stalie only in one postureition.

Nice use of the word, "lay." or After I lay down on my bed, I could lie in one position only. or After I lay down on my bed, I only could lie in one position.

After I lay downrested on my bed, I could only stay in one posture.ition.

After I lay down on my bed, I could only stay in one posturn't move.

If I changed my posture a little, my waist would hurt severely and I would get sweaty.


If I changed my postureition even a little bit, my waist would hurt severely hurt again and I would get sweaty.

Wow, this sounds really bad!

If I changed my posture a little, my waistside/ribs would hurt severely and I would get sweaty.

To achieve each step, I had to find a suitable posture which was less painful.


To achieve each step, I had to find a suitable postureition which was less painful.

To achieveFor each step, I had to find a suitable posture which was less painful.

The first two steps took almost 20 minutes.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

When I walked to the bathroom, I had to keep a special posture, otherwise, I couldn't even stand.


When I walked to the bathroom, I had to keepmaintain a specialfic postureition because , otherwise, I couldn't even stand.

When I walked to the bathroom, I had to keep a specialfic posture, otherwise, I couldn't even stand.

I had waist pain two times before.


I've had waist pain two times before.

I had wave had thist pain two times before.

The first time took place in about 2015, the second time took place in 2020.


The first time took placeoccurred in about 2015, the second time took place in 2020.

I did the medical check, but there was no waist bone injury.


I did the medical check, but there waswent to the Doctor's, but no waist bone injury could be found.

We don't ever use the term, "waist bone," in the US.

I did the medical checkhad a doctor check it out, but there was no waist bonerib injury.

The bones around your waist would be "ribs".

Now, I am lying down on my bed.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I think the treatment might be only to have a while of rest.


I think the treatment might be only to have a whileperiod of rest.

I think the treatment might be only to havejust resting for a while of rest.

I think the treatment might be only to have a while ofjust to rest.

It's really strange.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

It suddenly hurt for no reason, but when I stood up, I was not overexerted.


It suddenly hurt for no reason, but when I stood up, I was not overexerteding myself.

It suddenly hurt for no reason, butecause, when I stood up, I wasdid not overexerted myself.

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