Jan. 22, 2023
The disturbing neighbour
Dear Ms. Sherman,
Thank you for your reply. As I mentioned in the last mail Brandon is a really annoying neighbour. More specifically, he keeps his TV turned on at high volume all nights. I don't know if he fall asleep watching TV, but the TV doesn't mute until morning around 8 AM.
At the weekends the situation is even worse. A deafening music sounds from Saturday morning to Sunday evening. He is probably hosting a party every weekend because there are people going into and out of his house continuously.
As if that were not enough, he frequently spends some nights making reparations at home with noisy tools.
As his landlady, I hope you can talk to Brandon to solve the situation.
Best wishes.
You mention that “Mr Price makes an awful lot of noise at night during weekdays and all day at weekends.” Could you please be more specific about it?
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The dDisturbing nNeighbour
The Disturbing Neighbour
As I mentioned in themy last mailletter, Brandon is a really annoying neighbour.
As I mentioned in my last letter, Brandon is a really annoying neighbour.
More specifically, he keeps his TV turned on at high volume allevery nights.
More specifically, he keeps his TV turned on at high volume every night.
I don't know if he falls asleep watching TV, but the TV doesn't mutestop until the morning at around 8 AM.
I don't know if he falls asleep watching TV, but the TV doesn't stop until the morning at around 8 AM.
AtOn the weekends, the situation is even worse.
On the weekends, the situation is even worse.
A dDeafening music sounds from Saturday morning to Sunday evening.
Deafening music sounds from Saturday morning to Sunday evening.
He is probably hosting a party every weekend because there are people going into and out of his house continuousstantly.
He is probably hosting a party every weekend because there are people going into and out of his house constantly.
As if that were not enough, he frequently spends some nights making repairations at home with noisy tools.
As if that were not enough, he frequently spends some nights making repairs at home with noisy tools.
As his landlady, I hope you can talk to Brandon to resolve the situation. As his landlady, I hope you can talk to Brandon to resolve the situation.
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Great job!
Jan. 27, 2023
Thank you!!
The disturbing neighbour
Dear Ms. Sherman,
Thank you for your reply.
As I mentioned in themy last email Brandon is a really annoying neighbour.
As I mentioned in my last email Brandon is a really annoying neighbour.
We wouldn’t say mail in this context !
Since you’re one who wrote the last email, stylistically, using the possessive ‘my’ is very natural and something a native would use instead; it implies, slightly, a bit more anger/passive aggression, if that makes sense, and given the context of the purpose of your text (e.g., a complaint that has been ignored) it is very suitable here !
More specifically, he keeps his TV turned on at high volume all nights.
More specifically, he keeps his TV turned on at high volume all night.
I don't know if he falls asleep whilst watching TV, but the TV doesn't mutestop until the early morning around 8 AM.
I don't know if he falls asleep whilst watching TV, but the TV doesn't stop until the early morning around 8 AM.
AtOn the weekends the situation is even worse.
On the weekends the situation is even worse.
A dDeafening music sounds from Saturday morning to Sunday evening.
Deafening music sounds from Saturday morning to Sunday evening.
He is probably hosting a party every weekend because there are people going into and out of his house continuousstantly.
He is probably hosting a party every weekend because there are people going in and out of his house constantly.
As if that were not enough, he frequently spends some nights making repairations at home with noisy tools.
As if that were not enough, he frequently spends nights making repairs at home with noisy tools.
As his landlady, I hope you can talk to Brandon to solve the situation.
Best wishes.
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Well done very formal tone, I enjoyed reading this, if it is true I hope it gets resolved quickly.
Jan. 22, 2023
As I mentioned in themy last email Brandon is a really annoying neighbour.
We wouldn’t say mail in this context !
Since you’re one who wrote the last email, stylistically, using the possessive ‘my’ is very natural and something a native would use instead; it implies, slightly, a bit more anger/passive aggression, if that makes sense, and given the context of the purpose of your text (e.g., a complaint that has been ignored) it is very suitable here !
I mean an electronic mail. Do you only use mail for mail post and for electronic mail I have to say email?
Jan. 22, 2023
Thank you. Fortunately it's just an example text :-)
Jan. 23, 2023
I mean an electronic mail. Do you only use mail for mail post and for electronic mail I have to say email?
Electronic mail: email
Physical, hand-written letter/mail delivered to someone else: letter
I will correct accordingly then! And to answer your question, yes !
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As I mentioned in the last mail Brandon is a really annoying neighbour.
As I mentioned in We wouldn’t say mail in this context ! Since you’re one who wrote the last email, stylistically, using the possessive ‘my’ is very natural and something a native would use instead; it implies, slightly, a bit more anger/passive aggression, if that makes sense, and given the context of the purpose of your text (e.g., a complaint that has been ignored) it is very suitable here !
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More specifically, he keeps his TV turned on at high volume all nights.
More specifically, he keeps his TV turned on at high volume all night
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I don't know if he fall asleep watching TV, but the TV doesn't mute until morning around 8 AM.
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At the weekends the situation is even worse.
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A deafening music sounds from Saturday morning to Sunday evening.
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He is probably hosting a party every weekend because there are people going into and out of his house continuously.
He is probably hosting a party every weekend because there are people going in
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As if that were not enough, he frequently spends some nights making reparations at home with noisy tools.
As if that were not enough, he frequently spends
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