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Tammy

March 22, 2024

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Need more Chinese Entries

When I started to write more entries here, I noticed that my correction ratio was decreasing to 1.

It makes me like a taker on this platform, not a giver.

I want to be a giver.

Would you guys write more Chinese entries, please? I really need them to correct.


需要更多中文手记

当我开始在这里写更多的时候,注意到我的修改比率快降到1了。

这让我感觉像这个平台的索取者,而非给予者。

我想做一个给予者啊。

请大家多写点中文好吗?我真的想要修改他们!

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Tammy

April 1, 2024

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Need more Chinese Entries

When I started to write more entries here, I noticed that my correction ratio was decreasing to 1.

I want to be a giver.

Would you guys write more Chinese entries, please?

I really need them to correct.

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mp

March 22, 2024

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Need more Chinese Entries

When I started to write more entries here, I noticed that my correction ratio was decreasing to 1.

I want to be a giver.

Would you guys write more Chinese entries, please?

I really need them to correct.

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Tammy

March 22, 2024

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shorter

March 23, 2024

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Tammy

March 24, 2024

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When I started to write more entries here, I noticed that my correction ratio was decreasing to 1.

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Tammy

March 22, 2024

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Need more Chinese Entries


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It makes me like a taker on this platform, not a giver.


It makes mefeel like a taker on this platform, not a giver. It makes feel like a taker on this platform, not a giver.

"like" needs to be paired with "feel" or "seem" or some other such word, otherwise the clause lacks a verb.

It makes me feel like a taker on this platform, not a giver. It makes me feel like a taker on this platform, not a giver.

It makes me more like a takreceiver on this platform, not a giver. It makes me more like a receiver on this platform, not a giver.

I want to be a giver.


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I want to be a giver.ould like to give more than receive edits. I would like to give more than receive edits.

Giver is a bit not natural in English in this context. Making it into a verb feels better, like this.

Would you guys write more Chinese entries, please?


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WCould you guys write more Chinese entries, please? Could you guys write more Chinese entries, please?

Just to let you know, would you sounds a biiiiit rude in this haha. It's like saying "would you stop doing that please", "would you take out the trash", it sounds more like an order. Could gives a bit of a leeway, like kindly asking.

I really need them to correct.


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I really need them to correctwould like to edit/ correct more Chinese entries. I really would like to edit/ correct more Chinese entries.

In English "I need them" sounds like it becomes a necessity. Like 如果没有手记能改就会死😅

When I started to write more entries here, I noticed that my correction ratio was decreasing to 1.


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