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Sept. 9, 2023

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Drinking party

I have a drinking party with nostalgic members today.
I belonged to a volleyball club when I was a university student. The members liked holding a drinking party and I also joined it. Especially when the senior members joined it, I enjoyed more than usual.
After graduating, there were few parties with the same guys. I haven’t seen them for a couple of years.
This year the volleyball team I belonged to before won the title. It boosted my motivation holding the old school party.
We are getting together tonight. I’m looking forward to seeing them!

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I haven’t seen them for a couple of years.

It boosted my motivation holding the old school party.

Drinking party

We are getting together tonight.

I’m looking forward to seeing them!

Drinking party


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I have a drinking party with nostalgic members today.


I have a drinking party with nostalgic membersome old friends today. I have a drinking party with some old friends today.

nostalgic -> old (in this context)

I have a drinking party with nostalgic membersome old friends today. I have a drinking party with some old friends today.

I belonged to a volleyball club when I was a university student.


I used to belonged to a volleyball club when I was a university student. I used to belong to a volleyball club when I was a university student.

I belonged towas in a volleyball club when I was a university student. I was in a volleyball club when I was a university student.

The members liked holding a drinking party and I also joined it.


The members liked holding a drinking partyies and I ( often ) also joined itn. The members liked holding drinking parties and I ( often ) also joined in.

join it = To attach multiple objects together くっつける join in = To take part in an activity 参加する EDIT: I think you were using the verb "join", in which case "join it" is technicially correct, but it sounds a little unnatural.

Especially when the senior members joined it, I enjoyed more than usual.


Especially when the senior members joined it, I enjoyed it more than usual. Especially when the senior members joined, I enjoyed it more than usual.

Especially when the senior members joined itattended, I enjoyed more than usual. Especially when the senior members attended, I enjoyed more than usual.

After graduating, there were few parties with the same guys.


After graduating, there were a few parties with the same guys. After graduating, there were a few parties with the same guys.

After graduating, there were a few parties with the same guys. After graduating, there were a few parties with the same guys.

I haven’t seen them for a couple of years.


I haven’t seen them forin a couple of years. I haven’t seen them in a couple of years.

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This year the volleyball team I belonged to before won the title.


This year, that same volleyball team I belonged to before won the title. This year, that same volleyball team won the title.

This year the volleyball team I belonged toused to be apart of before won the title. This year the volleyball team I used to be apart of before won the title.

It boosted my motivation holding the old school party.


It boosted my motivation to holding the old school party ( even more ). It boosted my motivation to hold the school party ( even more ).

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We are getting together tonight.


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I’m looking forward to seeing them!


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