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A & B Talk105

I want to speak English naturally, not like a textbook! 🙇‍♂️🙇‍♂️
I want to speak like a native!! Seriously!!🙇‍♂️🙇‍♂️🙇‍♂️🔥🔥

Would you please help me by correcting anything that's wrong or sounds unnatural in my sentences?
You can change whatever you want!
It's alright if you change an entire sentence!!
I'd like to learn some common phrases and slang! 🙏
Also, I'd like to get your advice on how to have conversations with English speakers.
I'm looking forward to your constructive criticism.✍️



B: Excuse me, I'm looking for some uniquely Japanese souvenirs, do you have any recommendations around here?
A: I don't know much about this place, but I'll do a search!
B: Thanks!
A: Well, how about food samples?
B: What's that?
A: They're plastic food replica.
A: Gimme a minute, I'll show you a picture now. Like this.
B: Oh, I see. What's this for?
A: I guess many people collect them to display at home, or use them as straps or something.
B: Oh, cute. where can I buy one?
A: I think from here it's about a 10-minute walk. It says that you can try your hand at making one.
B: Oh, that sounds fun. What's it called shop?
A: Ganso.
B: Gimme a minute. I'll google it.
A: Yup.
B: Here?
A: Yes, here!
B: Okay. I'll go try it!
A: Yeah!
B: And...
A: Huh?
B: I'm looking for a Japanese gift for my mother. Any recommendations on where to go?
A: In that case, how about where to sell furoshiki? Though I'm not sure if there are any stores around here.
B: What's furoshiki?
A: It's a quite traditional.
One minute.
Like this! It has Japanese patterns on it, so it's a good way to remember the Japan, right
B: Oh, I see, that looks good!
A: I just checked now and this store is nearby.
They sell furoshiki and handkerchiefs and stuff like that.
What do you think? Not too good?
B: No, it's pretty nice. Furoshiki, right?
A: Yes.
B: I'll put it on the list in my head.
A: A folding fan would be good too. I think it would make a good gift.
B: Oh, I see.
A: Also chopsticks would be good too.
B: Oh, chopsticks! Is there a place that sells chopsticks around here?
A: One minute.
Let's see, I found three stores. First, this one (showing his phone).
B: Yes.
A: And this one.
B: Yeah
A: And this one.
B: Sorry, can you show me again?
A: Sure. Here. Here. And here.
What do you think?
B: Hmm, I like these chopsticks.
A: This place is called Hashifuji.
B: Hashifuji, correct?
A: Right. And these two stores are called Hyozaemon and Takeya.
B: Okay, I'll make a note of my phone! Thank you.
A: There may not be anything that is uniquely Japan, but I think a store called Don Quixote would be interesting.
B: Don Quixote?
A: Yes. Each store may sell different things, but I think you can buy most things there if you go to the bigger stores.
B: Where is that?
A: Well, it's a minute walk from here!
B: Oh, really?
A: Oh, sorry, I made a mistake, it's the same station, but from this exit it's an 8-minute walk!
B: Oh, I see! But I'll go there!
Is it Don Quixote?
A: Yes, Don Quixote!
B: Ok. That was very helpful! Thank you so much!
A: You're welcome. Have fun!
B: Thanks!
A: Bye Bye.
B: Yup.

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I want to speak English naturally, not like a textbook!

🙇‍♂️🙇‍♂️

I want to speak like a native!!

Seriously!!🙇‍♂️🙇‍♂️🙇‍♂️🔥🔥

Would you please help me by correcting anything that's wrong or sounds unnatural in my sentences?

You can change whatever you want!

It's alright if you change an entire sentence!!

I'd like to learn some common phrases and slang!

🙏

Also, I'd like to get your advice on how to have conversations with English speakers.

I'm looking forward to your constructive criticism.✍️

B: Thanks!

A: Well, how about food samples?

B: What's that?

A: They're plastic food replica.

Like this.

B: Oh, I see.

What's this for?

B: Oh, cute.

B: Oh, that sounds fun.

A: Ganso.

B: Gimme a minute.

I'll google it.

A: Yup.

B: Here?

A: Yes, here!

B: Okay.

I'll go try it!

A: Yeah!

B: And...

A: Huh?

B: I'm looking for a Japanese gift for my mother.

Any recommendations on where to go?

B: What's furoshiki?

Like this!

B: Oh, I see, that looks good!

They sell furoshiki and handkerchiefs and stuff like that.

What do you think?

B: No, it's pretty nice.

Furoshiki, right?

A: Yes.

I think it would make a good gift.

B: Oh, I see.

B: Oh, chopsticks!

Is there a place that sells chopsticks around here?

Let's see, I found three stores.

First, this one (showing his phone).

A: And this one.

B: Yeah

A: And this one.

A: Sure.

Here.

Here.

And here.

What do you think?

B: Hmm, I like these chopsticks.

A: This place is called Hashifuji.

A: Right.

And these two stores are called Hyozaemon and Takeya.

Thank you.

A: There may not be anything that is uniquely Japan, but I think a store called Don Quixote would be interesting.

B: Don Quixote?

Each store may sell different things, but I think you can buy most things there if you go to the bigger stores.

B: Where is that?

A: Well, it's a minute walk from here!

B: Oh, really?

A: Oh, sorry, I made a mistake, it's the same station, but from this exit it's an 8-minute walk!

B: Oh, I see!

Is it Don Quixote?

A: Yes, Don Quixote!

B: Ok. That was very helpful!

Thank you so much!

A: You're welcome.

Have fun!

B: Thanks!

B: Yup.

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July 20, 2022

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July 18, 2022

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A: I don't know much about this place, but I'll do a searchlook!

Alt: I'll take a look! / Let me look!

You are understood with I'll do a search but it sounds unnatural. I recommended two informal ways of saying you will look for something.

Have fun!


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B: Okay.


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I'll go try it!


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A: Yeah!


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B: And...


B: And... B: And...

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A: Huh?


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A: Yes, here!


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I want to speak English naturally, not like a textbook!


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🙇‍♂️🙇‍♂️


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I want to speak like a native!!


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Seriously!!🙇‍♂️🙇‍♂️🙇‍♂️🔥🔥


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Would you please help me by correcting anything that's wrong or sounds unnatural in my sentences?


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You can change whatever you want!


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It's alright if you change an entire sentence!!


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I'd like to learn some common phrases and slang!


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🙏


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Also, I'd like to get your advice on how to have conversations with English speakers.


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I'm looking forward to your constructive criticism.✍️


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B: Excuse me, I'm looking for some uniquely Japanese souvenirs, do you have any recommendations around here?


B: Excuse me, I'm looking for some uniquely Japanese souvenirs, do you have any recommendations around here? B: Excuse me, I'm looking for some unique Japanese souvenirs, do you have any recommendations around here?

Alt: , you have any recommendations?

B: Excuse me, I'm looking for some uniquely Japanese souvenirs, do you have any recommendations for around here? B: Excuse me, I'm looking for some uniquely Japanese souvenirs, do you have any recommendations for around here?

This sounds more natural in the US.

A: I don't know much about this place, but I'll do a search!


A: I don't know much about this place, but I'll do a searchlook! A: I don't know much about this place, but I'll look!

Alt: I'll take a look! / Let me look! You are understood with I'll do a search but it sounds unnatural. I recommended two informal ways of saying you will look for something.

A: I don't know much about this placearea, but I'll do a search can check! A: I don't know much about this area, but I can check!

This sounds more natural in the US.

B: Thanks!


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A: Well, how about food samples?


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B: What's that?


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A: They're plastic food replica.


A: They're replicas of plastic food replica. A: They're replicas of plastic food.

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A: Gimme a minute, I'll show you a picture now.


A: Gimme a minute, I'll show you a picture now. A: Gimme a minute, I'll show you a picture now.

Alt: Lemme show you a picture. (Very informal)

A: Gimme a minute, I'll show you a picture now. A: Gimme a minute, I'll show you a picture.

Like this.


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B: Oh, I see.


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What's this for?


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A: I guess many people collect them to display at home, or use them as straps or something.


A: I guess manya lot of people collect them to display at homefor home decor, or use them as straps or something. A: I guess a lot of people collect them for home decor, or use them as straps or something.

B: Oh, cute.


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where can I buy one?


wWhere can I buy one? Where can I buy one?

wWhere can I buy one? Where can I buy one?

A: I think from here it's about a 10-minute walk.


A: I think from here it's about a 10-minute walk from here. A: I think it's about a 10-minute walk from here.

This sounds more natural in the US.

A: You're welcome.


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It says that you can try your hand at making one.


It says that you can try your hand at making one yourself. It says that you can try making one yourself.

This sounds more natural in the US.

B: Oh, that sounds fun.


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What's it called shop?


What's ithe shop called shop? What's the shop called?

What's ithe shop called shop? What's the shop called?

A: Ganso.


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B: Gimme a minute.


B: Gimme a minute. B: Gimme a minute.

Alt: Hold up / Give me a sec.

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I'll google it.


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A: Yup.


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B: Here?


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B: I'm looking for a Japanese gift for my mother.


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Any recommendations on where to go?


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A: In that case, how about where to sell furoshiki?


A: In that case, how about where to sell furoshiki? A: In that case, how about furoshiki?

A: In that case, how about where to sell furoshiki? A: In that case, how about furoshiki?

Though I'm not sure if there are any stores around here.


Though I'm not sure if there are any stores around here which sell it. Though I'm not sure if there are any stores around here which sell it.

This sounds more natural in the US.

B: What's furoshiki?


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A: It's a quite traditional.


A: It's a quite traditional. A: It's quite traditional.

A: It's a quite traditional. A: It's quite traditional.

One minute.


One minuteHold on a sec. Hold on a sec.

This sounds more natural in the US.

Like this!


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It has Japanese patterns on it, so it's a good way to remember the Japan, right


It has Japanese patterns on it, so it's a good way to remember the Japan, right? It has Japanese patterns on it, so it's a good way to remember Japan, right?

It has Japanese patterns on it, so it's a good way to remember the Japan, righthuh. It has Japanese patterns on it, so it's a good way to remember Japan, huh.

More US slang

B: Oh, I see, that looks good!


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A: I just checked now and this store is nearby.


A: I just checked now, and this store is nearby. A: I just checked now, and this store is nearby.

A: I just checked now and thisere's a store is nearby. A: I just checked and there's a store nearby.

They sell furoshiki and handkerchiefs and stuff like that.


They sell furoshiki and handkerchiefs and stuff like that. They sell furoshiki and handkerchiefs and stuff like that.

Alt: all that stuff (instead of stuff like that)

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What do you think?


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Not too good?


Not too good? Not too good?

Alt: It doesn't work for you?

Not too good? No good?

B: No, it's pretty nice.


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Furoshiki, right?


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A: Yes.


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B: I'll put it on the list in my head.


B: I'll putkeep it oin the list in my heamind. B: I'll keep it in mind.

Understood when you say list in my head but sounds unnatural.

B: I'll put it on the list in my headmy mental list. B: I'll put it on my mental list.

A: A folding fan would be good too.


A: A folding fan would be good, too. A: A folding fan would be good, too.

I think it would make a good gift.


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B: Oh, I see.


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A: Also chopsticks would be good too.


A: Also, chopsticks would be good, too. A: Also, chopsticks would be good, too.

B: Oh, chopsticks!


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Is there a place that sells chopsticks around here?


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A: One minute.


A: One minuteJust a sec ... A: Just a sec ...

Let's see, I found three stores.


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First, this one (showing his phone).


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B: Yes.


B: YesOkay. B: Okay.

This sounds more natural in the US.

A: And this one.


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B: Yeah


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A: And this one.


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B: Sorry, can you show me again?


B: Sorry, can you show methat again? B: Sorry, can you show that again?

A: Sure.


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Here.


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Here.


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And here.


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What do you think?


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B: Hmm, I like these chopsticks.


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A: This place is called Hashifuji.


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B: Hashifuji, correct?


B: Hashifuji, correcright? B: Hashifuji, right?

A: Right.


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And these two stores are called Hyozaemon and Takeya.


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B: Okay, I'll make a note of my phone!


B: Okay, I'll make a note of it on my phone! B: Okay, I'll make a note of it on my phone!

Alt: I'll make a note of it!

B: Okay, I'll make a note ofn my phone! B: Okay, I'll make a note on my phone!

Thank you.


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A: There may not be anything that is uniquely Japan, but I think a store called Don Quixote would be interesting.


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B: Don Quixote?


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A: Yes.


A: Yesah. A: Yeah.

Each store may sell different things, but I think you can buy most things there if you go to the bigger stores.


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B: Where is that?


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A: Well, it's a minute walk from here!


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B: Oh, really?


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A: Oh, sorry, I made a mistake, it's the same station, but from this exit it's an 8-minute walk!


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B: Oh, I see!


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But I'll go there!


But I'll go there! I'll go there!

Is it Don Quixote?


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A: Yes, Don Quixote!


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B: Ok. That was very helpful!


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Thank you so much!


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B: Thanks!


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A: Bye Bye.


A: Bye B-bye. A: Bye-bye.

B: Yup.


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