May 27, 2026
Today, I'm going to talk about the recent news I've heard when I practiced my English on the app BBC.
First, we are going to talk about the virus Ebola spreading away in the Democratic Republic of Congo, and I will conclude with the sportif event that's been in the US.
The virus Ebola has become a huge issue in the DRC and it could spread away to the other nations. For that matter, they have warned 9 countries that share borders with them. The main problem of the DRC is the lack of medicine and vaccins to fight against it. They are asking other nations to help them because the virus has had disastrous consequences. So far, 139 people passed away in the country and the spread of the virus has blew past their expectations. The number of people who contracted the virus is way bigger. They are now trying to coordinate with other nearby countries to fight and erase that disease.
In Las Vegas, they've been organising an event in the last few days. Everything you can expect from a Las Vegas spectacle was here: booming music, cheering crowd and the big spillboard. One of the main particularity of that event is the cash prize athletes can earn. By winning their event, they earn 250 000 dollars. However, they are more interested by the Jackpot, the 1M cashprize you get when you break a world record. So far, the only one who broke a record is a swimmer in the 50m event. He'd already won it last year and he's probably the highest paid swimmer in the world right now.
Still, something I didn't mention and that's making him not a real world champion is that the use of druggs is allowed. Every substances the Olympics and Sports Évents have always been fighting are made available for the athletes. They can take testosterone for instance. Critics say that it is an affront to the real spirit of fair play and it can have disastruous consecuences for the athletes while they are saying that it's not cheating but only an evolution of the modern sport.
In my opinion, it's totaly absurd. I can't fathom a world where all the sports would allow people to take substances. I find it so infair for athletes who really care about the real performance and more importantly their health
I hope you enjoyed reading my text! Please tell me what you thought of my English!
Today, I'm going to talk about the recent news I've heard when I practiced my English on the app BBCBBC app.
Today, I'm going to talk about the recent news I heard when I practiced my English on the BBC app.
First, we are going to talk about the virus EbolaEbola virus spreading away in the Democratic Republic of Congo, and I will conclude with the sportifng event that's been on in the US.
First, we are going to talk about the Ebola virus spreading away in the Democratic Republic of Congo, and I will conclude with the sporting event that's been on in the US.
There are cases where English does noun adjective, but it's a much smaller set of cases where that's allowed. English is generally adjective noun, and the name of the something is used as if it was an adjective in both "BBC app" and "Ebola virus" in your two sentences.
The virus EbolaEbola virus has become a huge issue in the DRC and it could spread away to the other nations.
The Ebola virus has become a huge issue in the DRC and it could spread to the other nations.
In "spreading away", "away" is actually not about a direction, but about something going on continuously - as a result you can't "spread away to". This is also quite an informal/colloqial use of "away".
The main problem ofor the DRC is the lack of medicine and vaccines to fight against it.
The main problem for the DRC is the lack of medicine and vaccines to fight against it.
So far, 139 people have passed away in the country and the spread of the virus has blewown past their expectations.
So far, 139 people have passed away in the country and the spread of the virus has blown past their expectations.
It's awkward since both "blew" and "blown" are past tenses for "blow" nouns, but "blew" is used in the sense of wind or storms, while "blown" is used in the sense of the aftermath of explosions or exceeding expectations.
In Las Vegas, they've been organising an event infor the last few days.
In Las Vegas, they've been organising an event for the last few days.
One of the main particularitydetails of that event is the cash prize athletes can earn.
One of the main details of that event is the cash prize athletes can earn.
"one of the..." takes a plural noun.
"particularities" is a real noun, but it's rarely used and as such can come off as if you're trying to use a big word to show off.
By winning their event, they can earn 250 ,000 dollars.
By winning their event, they can earn 250,000 dollars.
"they can earn" since it's potential event, as not every athlete wins.
English uses commas as decimal seperators, not spaces.
However, they are more interested byin the Jackpot, the 1M cashprize you get when you break a world record.
However, they are more interested in the Jackpot, the 1M cashprize you get when you break a world record.
Still, something I didn't mention and that's making him not a real world champion is that the use of druggs is allowed.
Still, something I didn't mention and that's making him not a real world champion is that the use of drugs is allowed.
Every substances the Olympics and Sother sports Éevents have always been fighting areis made available for the athletes.
Every substance the Olympics and other sports events have always been fighting is made available for the athletes.
Critics say that it is an affront to the real spirit of fair play and it can have disastruous consecquences for the athletes, while they athletes are saying that it's not cheating but only an evolution of the modern sport.
Critics say that it is an affront to the real spirit of fair play and it can have disastrous consequences for the athletes, while the athletes are saying that it's not cheating but only an evolution of the modern sport.
"they" is ambiguous as it sounds like it's the still the critics, so better to restate a noun here.
I find it so iunfair for athletes who really care about the real performance and more importantly their health
I find it so unfair for athletes who really care about the real performance and more importantly their health
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Today, I'm going to talk about the recent news I've heard when I practiced my English on the app BBCBBC app.
Today I'm going to talk about the recent news I heard when I practiced my English on the BBC app.
First, we are going to talk about the virus Ebola spreading away in the Democratic Republic of the Congo, and I will conclude with the sportifng event that's been going on in the US.
First, we are going to talk about the virus Ebola spreading in the Democratic Republic of the Congo, and I will conclude with the sporting event that's been going on in the US.
The virus Ebola has become a huge issue in the DRC and it could spread away to the other nations.
The virus Ebola has become a huge issue in the DRC and could spread to the other nations.
For that matter, they have warned 9 countries that share borders with them.
The main problem of the DRC is the lack of medicine and vaccines to fight against it. The main problem of the DRC is the lack of medicine and vaccines to fight against it.
They are asking other nations to help them because the virus has had disastrous consequences.
So far, 139 people passed away in the country and the spread of the virus has blew pastexceeded their expectations.
So far, 139 people passed away in the country and the spread of the virus has exceeded their expectations.
If one was to use "blow," the conjugation is "blown."
The number of people who contracted the virus is way bigger.
They are now trying to coordinate with other nearby countries to fight and erase that disease.
In Las Vegas, they've been organising an event infor the lpast few days.
In Las Vegas, they've been organising an event for the past few days.
Everything you can expect from a Las Vegas spectacle was there: booming music, a cheering crowd and the big spbillboard.
Everything you can expect from a Las Vegas spectacle was there: booming music, a cheering crowd and the big billboard.
One of the main particularityspecificities of that event is the cash prize athletes can earn.
One of the specificities of that event is the cash prize athletes can earn.
By winning their event, they earn 250 ,000 dollars.
By winning their event, they earn 250,000 dollars.
However, they are more interested byin the Jackpot, the 1M cashprize you get when you break a world record.
However, they are more interested in the Jackpot, the 1M cashprize you get when you break a world record.
So far, the only one who has broken a record is a swimmer in the 50m event. So far, the only one who has broken a record is a swimmer in the 50m event.
He'd already won it last year and he's probably the highest paid swimmer in the world right now.
Still, something I didn't mention and that's making him not a reala "false" world champion is that the use of druggs is allowed.
Still, something I didn't mention that's making him a "false" world champion is that the use of drugs is allowed.
It's odd that they're allowing that!
Every substances the Olympics and Sports ÉEvents have always been fighting are madeanned is now available for the athletes.
Every substance the Olympics and Sports Events have always banned is now available for the athletes.
They can take testosterone, for instance. They can take testosterone, for instance.
Critics say that it is an affront to the real spirit of fair play and it cancould have disastruous consecquences for the athletes, while theyproponents are saying that it's not cheating, but only an evolution of the modern sport.
Critics say that it is an affront to the spirit of fair play and could have disastrous consequences for the athletes, while proponents are saying that it's not cheating, but only an evolution of the modern sport.
That's an interesting take from the proponents.
In my opinion, it's totaly absurd.
I can't fathom a world where all the sports organizations would allow people to take substances. I can't fathom a world where all the sports organizations would allow people to take substances.
I find it so iunfair for athletes who really care about the real performance and more importantly, their health.
I find it so unfair for athletes who really care about the real performance and more importantly, their health.
I hope you enjoyed reading my text! I hope you enjoyed reading my text!
I did.
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I think that your English is a sight to behold. Keep it up! BBC is definitely a great thing to keep doing. Personally, I'm using France 24 En direct and RFI, for example, to learn French.
Today, I'm going to talk about thsome recent news I've heard when I was practiceding my English onwith the app BBCBBC app.
Today, I'm going to talk about some recent news I heard when I was practicing my English with the BBC app.
First, we are going toI'll talk about the virus EbolaEbola virus currently spreading away in the Democratic Republic of Congo, and I will conclude with the sportif event that's been in the USwhat I heard about some US sports.
First, I'll talk about the Ebola virus currently spreading in the Democratic Republic of Congo, and I will conclude with what I heard about some US sports.
The virus EbolaEbola virus has become a huge issue in the DRC and it could spread away to theto other nations.
The Ebola virus has become a huge issue in the DRC and it could spread to other nations.
For that matter, theyThe DRC haves warned 9 countries that share borders with it / them.
The DRC has warned 9 countries that share borders with it / them.
Depends on the level of grammatical strictness or formality or whether you understand this as "The people in the DRC" vs "The DRC" as an abstract concept here.
The main problem ofin the DRC is the lack of medicine and vaccines to fight against itEbola.
The main problem in the DRC is the lack of medicine and vaccines to fight Ebola.
They are asking other nations to help them because the virus has had disastrous consequences. They are asking other nations to help them because the virus has had disastrous consequences.
So far, 139 people have passed away in the country and the spread of the virus has blewown past their expectations.
So far, 139 people have passed away in the country and the spread of the virus has blown past their expectations.
The number of people who have contracted the virus is way bigmuch larger.
The number of people who have contracted the virus is much larger.
"way bigger" is very informal and sounds a bit childish.
They are now trying to coordinate with other nearby countries to fight and erase thate disease.
They are now trying to coordinate with other nearby countries to fight and erase the disease.
In Las Vegas, they've been organising an event inover the lpast few days.
In Las Vegas, they've been organising an event over the past few days.
EIt had everything you canwould expect from a Las Vegas spectacle was here: booming music, a cheering crowd and the big spillboard.
It had everything you would expect from a Las Vegas spectacle: booming music, a cheering crowd and the big spillboard.
I'm not sure what a spillboard is. Scoreboard?
One of the main particularity ofunique thing about thate event is thea cash prize athletes can earn.
One unique thing about the event is a cash prize athletes can earn.
What event is it? It's hard to understand without giving a little information about what the sport is.
By winning their eventIf they win, they earnget 250 000 dollars as a prize.
If they win, they get 250 000 dollars as a prize.
However, they participants are more interested byin the Jjackpot, the 1Mwhich is a $1 million cash prize you get whenif you break a world record.
However, the participants are more interested in the jackpot, which is a $1 million cash prize you get if you break a world record.
So far, the only persone who has broken a record is a swimmer in the 50m event.
So far, the only person who has broken a record is a swimmer in the 50m event.
He'd already won it last year and he's probably the highest paid swimmer in the world right now.
He already won it last year and he's probably the highest paid swimmer in the world right now.
Still, something I didn't mention and that's makinges him not a real world champion is that the use of druggs is allowed.
Something I didn't mention that makes him not a real world champion is that the use of drugs is allowed.
Every substances the Olympics and Sports Évents have always been fighting are made available for the athletother sports competitions have banned are allowed in these games.
Every substance the Olympics and other sports competitions have banned are allowed in these games.
They can take testosterone, for instance. They can take testosterone, for instance.
Critics say that it is an affront to the real spirit of fair play and it can have disastruous consecquences for the athletes whil. The athey areletes (?) saying that it's not cheating but only, just an evolution of the modern sport.
Critics say that it is an affront to the real spirit of fair play and it can have disastrous consequences for the athletes. The athletes (?) say that it's not cheating, just an evolution of modern sport.
In my opinion, it'using drugs in sports is totally absurd.
In my opinion, using drugs in sports is totally absurd.
"it" doesn't have a clear referent here for your reader.
I can't fathom a world where all the sports would allow people to takepeople could compete in sports while using (performance-enhancing?) substances.
I can't fathom a world where people could compete in sports while using (performance-enhancing?) substances.
some specificity would be helpful for the reader here.
I find it so iunfair forto athletes who really care about the real performance and more importantly, their health.
I find it unfair to athletes who care about real performance and more importantly, their health.
I hope you enjoyed reading my textentry!
I hope you enjoyed reading my entry!
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Some overall themes to work on: use of verb tenses (more plain past/present is appropriate, you have a lot of progressive/imperfect tense where it sounds unnatural) and where to give specific information to your reader (rather than assuming they know what you're talking about). Keep at it!
First, we are going to talk about the virus Ebola spreading away in the Democratic Republic of Congo, and I will conclude with the sportifng event that's been in the US.
First, we are going to talk about the virus Ebola spreading in the Democratic Republic of Congo, and I will conclude with the sporting event that's been in the US.
The virus Ebola has become a huge issue in the DRC and it could spread away to the other nations.
The virus Ebola has become a huge issue in the DRC and it could spread to the other nations.
The main problem of the DRC is the lack of medicine and vaccines to fight against it. The main problem of the DRC is the lack of medicine and vaccines to fight against it.
So far, 139 people have passed away in the country and the spread of the virus has blew pastown away their expectations.
So far, 139 people have passed away in the country and the spread of the virus has blown away their expectations.
The number of people who have contracted the virus is way bigger. The number of people who have contracted the virus is way bigger.
They are now trying to coordinate with other nearby countries to fight and erasdicate thatis disease.
They are now trying to coordinate with other nearby countries to fight and eradicate this disease.
One of the main particularity of that event is the cash prize athletes can earn.
One of the main event is the cash prize athletes can earn.
By winning their event, they can earn 250 000 dollars. By winning their event, they can earn 250 000 dollars.
However, they are more interested byin the Jackpot, the 1M cashprize you get when you break a world record.
However, they are more interested in the Jackpot, the 1M cashprize you get when you break a world record.
So far, the only persone who broke a record is a swimmer in the 50m event.
So far, the only person who broke a record is a swimmer in the 50m event.
He'd already won it last year and he's probably the highest paid swimmer in the world right now.
Still, something I didn't mention and that'swhich does not makinge him not a real world champion is that the use of druggs is allowed.
Still, something I didn't mention which does not make him a real world champion is that the use of drugs is allowed.
Every substances the Olympics and Sports ÉEvents have always been fighting against, are made available for the athletes.
Every substances the Olympics and Sports Events have always been fighting against, are made available for the athletes.
They can take testosterone for instance. They can take testosterone for instance.
You could also say "for example" instead of "for instance".
Critics say that it is an affront to the real spirit of fair play and it can have disastruous consecuences for the athletes, while they others are saying that it's not cheating but only an evolution of the modern sport.
Critics say that it is an affront to the real spirit of fair play and it can have disastrous consecuences for the athletes, while the others are saying that it's not cheating but only an evolution of the modern sport.
In my opinion, it's totaly absurd.
I can't fathom a world where all the sports would allow people to take substances.
I can't fathom a world where all sports would allow people to take substances.
I hope you enjoyed reading my text! I hope you enjoyed reading my text!
I did ^_^
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I think your English is great, you just made few errors.
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Today, I'm going to talk about the recent news I've heard when I practiced my English on the app BBC.
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First, we are going to talk about the virus Ebola spreading away in the Democratic Republic of Congo, and I will conclude with the sportif event that's been in the US.
First, we are going to talk about the virus Ebola spreading
First,
First, we are going to talk about the virus Ebola spreading
First, we are going to talk about the There are cases where English does noun adjective, but it's a much smaller set of cases where that's allowed. English is generally adjective noun, and the name of the something is used as if it was an adjective in both "BBC app" and "Ebola virus" in your two sentences. |
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The virus Ebola has become a huge issue in the DRC and it could spread away to the other nations.
The virus Ebola has become a huge issue in the DRC and it could spread
The
The virus Ebola has become a huge issue in the DRC and
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For that matter, they have warned 9 countries that share borders with them.
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The main problem of the DRC is the lack of medicine and vaccins to fight against it. The main problem of the DRC is the lack of medicine and vaccines to fight against it. The main problem of the DRC is the lack of medicine and vaccines to fight against it.
The main problem The main problem of the DRC is the lack of medicine and vaccines to fight against it. The main problem of the DRC is the lack of medicine and vaccines to fight against it.
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They are asking other nations to help them because the virus has had disastrous consequences. They are asking other nations to help them because the virus has had disastrous consequences. They are asking other nations to help them because the virus has had disastrous consequences. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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So far, 139 people passed away in the country and the spread of the virus has blew past their expectations.
So far, 139 people have passed away in the country and the spread of the virus has bl
So far, 139 people have passed away in the country and the spread of the virus has bl
So far, 139 people passed away in the country and the spread of the virus has If one was to use "blow," the conjugation is "blown."
So far, 139 people have passed away in the country and the spread of the virus has bl It's awkward since both "blew" and "blown" are past tenses for "blow" nouns, but "blew" is used in the sense of wind or storms, while "blown" is used in the sense of the aftermath of explosions or exceeding expectations. |
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The number of people who contracted the virus is way bigger. The number of people who have contracted the virus is way bigger. The number of people who have contracted the virus is way bigger.
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They are now trying to coordinate with other nearby countries to fight and erase that disease.
They are now trying to coordinate with other nearby countries to fight and era
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In Las Vegas, they've been organising an event in the last few days.
In Las Vegas, they've been organising an event
In Las Vegas, they've been organising an event
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Everything you can expect from a Las Vegas spectacle was here: booming music, cheering crowd and the big spillboard.
I'm not sure what a spillboard is. Scoreboard?
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One of the main particularity of that event is the cash prize athletes can earn.
One of the main
One What event is it? It's hard to understand without giving a little information about what the sport is.
One of the
One of the main "one of the..." takes a plural noun. "particularities" is a real noun, but it's rarely used and as such can come off as if you're trying to use a big word to show off. |
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By winning their event, they earn 250 000 dollars. By winning their event, they can earn 250 000 dollars. By winning their event, they can earn 250 000 dollars.
By winning their event, they earn 250
By winning their event, they can earn 250 "they can earn" since it's potential event, as not every athlete wins. English uses commas as decimal seperators, not spaces. |
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However, they are more interested by the Jackpot, the 1M cashprize you get when you break a world record.
However, they are more interested
However, the
However, they are more interested
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So far, the only one who broke a record is a swimmer in the 50m event.
So far, the only person
So far, the only person So far, the only one who has broken a record is a swimmer in the 50m event. So far, the only one who has broken a record is a swimmer in the 50m event. |
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He'd already won it last year and he's probably the highest paid swimmer in the world right now. This sentence has been marked as perfect!
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Still, something I didn't mention and that's making him not a real world champion is that the use of druggs is allowed.
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Still, something I didn't mention It's odd that they're allowing that!
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Every substances the Olympics and Sports Évents have always been fighting are made available for the athletes.
Every substances the Olympics and Sports
Every substance
Every substance
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They can take testosterone for instance. They can take testosterone for instance. They can take testosterone for instance. You could also say "for example" instead of "for instance". They can take testosterone, for instance. They can take testosterone, for instance. They can take testosterone, for instance. They can take testosterone, for instance. |
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Critics say that it is an affront to the real spirit of fair play and it can have disastruous consecuences for the athletes while they are saying that it's not cheating but only an evolution of the modern sport.
Critics say that it is an affront to the real spirit of fair play and it can have disastr
Critics say that it is an affront to the real spirit of fair play and it can have disastr
Critics say that it is an affront to the That's an interesting take from the proponents.
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In my opinion, it's totaly absurd. This sentence has been marked as perfect!
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I can't fathom a world where all the sports would allow people to take substances.
I can't fathom a world where all
I can't fathom a world where some specificity would be helpful for the reader here. I can't fathom a world where all the sports organizations would allow people to take substances. I can't fathom a world where all the sports organizations would allow people to take substances. |
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I find it so infair for athletes who really care about the real performance and more importantly their health
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I hope you enjoyed reading my text! I hope you enjoyed reading my text! I hope you enjoyed reading my text! I did ^_^
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