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The Satsuma Samurai’s Hijacking Plot

On June 27, 1863, just before the outbreak of the Anglo-Satsuma War, the British brought a fleet of seven warships into Kagoshima Bay. The Satsuma domain, however, was secretly hatching a bold plot to hijack them.

Their strategy was to load eight small boats with a suicide squad disguised as watermelon merchants. Once aboard, they were to draw their swords, ambush the crew, and commandeer the warships. This squad actually included the very samurai who had slashed Richardson during the Namamugi Incident, as well as Kiyotaka Kuroda, who would later become Japan's second Prime Minister.

Two of the small boats pulled up directly alongside the British flagship, HMS Euryalus, and displayed their watermelons. But contrary to the Satsuma samurai's expectations, the British sailors gestured that they didn't want any.

The disguised samurai stubbornly lingered until the British fleet's interpreter, Siebold, appeared on deck to ask what their business was. The squad claimed they had brought a letter, to which Siebold replied that only the single man carrying the dispatch would be allowed to board.

When the first Japanese man climbed up, Siebold asked if he had the letter, but the man said no. Then a second man climbed up. Siebold asked him the same question, and he too said no. As men continued to pour onto the ship one after another, Siebold grew angry and tried to stop any more from boarding.

Right at that moment, one of the squad members told Siebold that the person carrying the letter was a member of the Shimazu clan. He argued that it was a matter of basic etiquette for him to board with a large retinue of followers, demanding to know why only one person was being permitted.

Siebold went below deck and reemerged a short while later with several officers. Looking quite furious, he announced, "Gentlemen, you are all permitted to board." By that time, however, almost everyone had already made their way onto the ship anyway.

In the end, about 40 members of the suicide squad successfully infiltrated the Euryalus. However, because the other squads failed to board the remaining six ships, the men on the flagship were forced to retreat. They realized that even if they managed to hijack a single vessel, it would immediately be blown out of the water by the rest of the fleet. To avoid needless casualties, the hijacking plot was ultimately called off.

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The Satsuma Samurai’s Hijacking Plot

Their strategy was to load eight small boats with a suicide squad disguised as watermelon merchants.

Once aboard, they were to draw their swords, ambush the crew, and commandeer the warships.

This squad actually included the very samurai who had slashed Richardson during the Namamugi Incident, as well as Kiyotaka Kuroda, who would later become Japan's second Prime Minister.

Two of the small boats pulled up directly alongside the British flagship, HMS Euryalus, and displayed their watermelons.

But contrary to the Satsuma samurai's expectations, the British sailors gestured that they didn't want any.

The disguised samurai stubbornly lingered until the British fleet's interpreter, Siebold, appeared on deck to ask what their business was.

The squad claimed they had brought a letter, to which Siebold replied that only the single man carrying the dispatch would be allowed to board.

When the first Japanese man climbed up, Siebold asked if he had the letter, but the man said no.

Then a second man climbed up.

As men continued to pour onto the ship one after another, Siebold grew angry and tried to stop any more from boarding.

Right at that moment, one of the squad members told Siebold that the person carrying the letter was a member of the Shimazu clan.

Siebold went below deck and reemerged a short while later with several officers.

Looking quite furious, he announced, "Gentlemen, you are all permitted to board."

By that time, however, almost everyone had already made their way onto the ship anyway.

They realized that even if they managed to hijack a single vessel, it would immediately be blown out of the water by the rest of the fleet.

To avoid needless casualties, the hijacking plot was ultimately called off.

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The Satsuma Samurai’s Hijacking Plot

On June 27, 1863, just before the outbreak of the Anglo-Satsuma War, the British brought a fleet of seven warships into Kagoshima Bay.

Their strategy was to load eight small boats with a suicide squad disguised as watermelon merchants.

Once aboard, they were to draw their swords, ambush the crew, and commandeer the warships.

This squad actually included the very samurai who had slashed Richardson during the Namamugi Incident, as well as Kiyotaka Kuroda, who would later become Japan's second Prime Minister.

Two of the small boats pulled up directly alongside the British flagship, HMS Euryalus, and displayed their watermelons.

But contrary to the Satsuma samurai's expectations, the British sailors gestured that they didn't want any.

The squad claimed they had brought a letter, to which Siebold replied that only the single man carrying the dispatch would be allowed to board.

When the first Japanese man climbed up, Siebold asked if he had the letter, but the man said no.

Then a second man climbed up.

Siebold asked him the same question, and he too said no.

As men continued to pour onto the ship one after another, Siebold grew angry and tried to stop any more from boarding.

Right at that moment, one of the squad members told Siebold that the person carrying the letter was a member of the Shimazu clan.

He argued that it was a matter of basic etiquette for him to board with a large retinue of followers, demanding to know why only one person was being permitted.

Siebold went below deck and reemerged a short while later with several officers.

Looking quite furious, he announced, "Gentlemen, you are all permitted to board."

By that time, however, almost everyone had already made their way onto the ship anyway.

In the end, about 40 members of the suicide squad successfully infiltrated the Euryalus.

However, because the other squads failed to board the remaining six ships, the men on the flagship were forced to retreat.

They realized that even if they managed to hijack a single vessel, it would immediately be blown out of the water by the rest of the fleet.

To avoid needless casualties, the hijacking plot was ultimately called off.

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The Satsuma Samurai’s Hijacking Plot

On June 27, 1863, just before the outbreak of the Anglo-Satsuma War, the British brought a fleet of seven warships into Kagoshima Bay.

Their strategy was to load eight small boats with a suicide squad disguised as watermelon merchants.

Once aboard, they were to draw their swords, ambush the crew, and commandeer the warships.

Two of the small boats pulled up directly alongside the British flagship, HMS Euryalus, and displayed their watermelons.

The disguised samurai stubbornly lingered until the British fleet's interpreter, Siebold, appeared on deck to ask what their business was.

The squad claimed they had brought a letter, to which Siebold replied that only the single man carrying the dispatch would be allowed to board.

When the first Japanese man climbed up, Siebold asked if he had the letter, but the man said no.

Then a second man climbed up.

Siebold asked him the same question, and he too said no.

As men continued to pour onto the ship one after another, Siebold grew angry and tried to stop any more from boarding.

Right at that moment, one of the squad members told Siebold that the person carrying the letter was a member of the Shimazu clan.

He argued that it was a matter of basic etiquette for him to board with a large retinue of followers, demanding to know why only one person was being permitted.

Siebold went below deck and reemerged a short while later with several officers.

By that time, however, almost everyone had already made their way onto the ship anyway.

In the end, about 40 members of the suicide squad successfully infiltrated the Euryalus.

However, because the other squads failed to board the remaining six ships, the men on the flagship were forced to retreat.

They realized that even if they managed to hijack a single vessel, it would immediately be blown out of the water by the rest of the fleet.

To avoid needless casualties, the hijacking plot was ultimately called off.

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On June 27, 1863, just before the outbreak of the Anglo-Satsuma War, the British brought a fleet of seven warships into Kagoshima Bay.


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On June 27, 1863, just before the outbreak of the Anglo-Satsuma War, the British broughtsteered/led a fleet of seven warships into Kagoshima Bay. On June 27, 1863, just before the outbreak of the Anglo-Satsuma War, the British steered/led a fleet of seven warships into Kagoshima Bay.

"brought" is okay, but a verb like "steered" or "led" is more specific

The Satsuma domain, however, was secretly hatching a bold plot to hijack them.


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Their strategy was to load eight small boats with a suicide squad disguised as watermelon merchants.


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Once aboard, they were to draw their swords, ambush the crew, and commandeer the warships.


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This squad actually included the very samurai who had slashed Richardson during the Namamugi Incident, as well as Kiyotaka Kuroda, who would later become Japan's second Prime Minister.


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This squad actually included the very samurai who had slashedcut down Richardson during the Namamugi Incident, as well as Kiyotaka Kuroda, who would later become Japan's second Pprime Mminister. This squad actually included the very samurai who had cut down Richardson during the Namamugi Incident, as well as Kiyotaka Kuroda, who would later become Japan's second prime minister.

"slash" is intransitive, or when transitive, the object is what is swung (ie. "he slashed his sword") "stab" sounds best but I'm not sure if it was a stab wound I also assumed from your writing that Richardson hadn't died, and just was wounded, but I looked up the incident and found out he died. "Cut down" implies he died and also has sword slashing imagery to it. Unless it's part of someone's title, we don't capitalize things like "prime minister" or "president." But you would capitalize it if you said "Prime Minister Kiyotaka Kuroda"

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Two of the small boats pulled up directly alongside the British flagship, HMS Euryalus, and displayed their watermelons.


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But contrary to the Satsuma samurai's expectations, the British sailors gestured that they didn't want any.


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But contrary to the Satsuma samurai's expectations, the British sailors gestured that they didn't want any. But contrary to the Satsuma samurai's expectations, the British sailors gestured that they didn't want any.

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The disguised samurai stubbornly lingered until the British fleet's interpreter, Siebold, appeared on deck to ask what their business was.


The disguised samurai stubbornly lingered until the British fleet's interpreter, Siebold, appeared on deck to ask what their business wasthey had there. The disguised samurai stubbornly lingered until the British fleet's interpreter, Siebold, appeared on deck to ask what business they had there.

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The squad claimed they had brought a letter, to which Siebold replied that only the single man carrying the dispatch would be allowed to board.


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When the first Japanese man climbed up, Siebold asked if he had the letter, but the man said no.


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Then a second man climbed up.


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Siebold asked him the same question, and he too said no.


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Siebold asked him the same question, and he, too, said no. Siebold asked him the same question, and he, too, said no.

As men continued to pour onto the ship one after another, Siebold grew angry and tried to stop any more from boarding.


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Right at that moment, one of the squad members told Siebold that the person carrying the letter was a member of the Shimazu clan.


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He argued that it was a matter of basic etiquette for him to board with a large retinue of followers, demanding to know why only one person was being permitted.


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He argued that it was a matter of basic etiquette for hima member of the Shimazu clan to board with a large retinue of followers,, and demandinged to know why only one person was being permitted to board. He argued that it was a matter of basic etiquette for a member of the Shimazu clan to board with a large retinue, and demanded to know why only one person was permitted to board.

edits for clarity "followers" could mean people who follow your ideas or treat you as a leader (which is what I assume you mean), but it could also mean people who are literally, physically following you. All the people on board are presumably boarding first before the person with the letter, so they are not physically following him, which makes the sentence a little confusing. It's also not necessary since "a large retinue" communicates the same idea. In general be careful with pronouns of the same gender because they can easily be confused. We can understand "He" as referring to "one of the squad members" because "one of the squad members" was the subject of the previous sentence and "He" is the subject of the current sentence. But then when "him" is introduced it becomes confusing because "him" could be referring to the same "He" that is the subject, or it could be the previously referenced member of the Shimazu clan. So it's important to specify who "him" is.

Siebold went below deck and reemerged a short while later with several officers.


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Looking quite furious, he announced, "Gentlemen, you are all permitted to board."


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Looking quite furious, he announced, "Gentlemen, you are all permitted to board." Looking quite furious, he announced, "Gentlemen, you are all permitted to board."

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By that time, however, almost everyone had already made their way onto the ship anyway.


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In the end, about 40 members of the suicide squad successfully infiltrated the Euryalus.


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In the end, about 40 members of the suicide squad had successfully infiltrated the Euryalus. In the end, about 40 members of the suicide squad had successfully infiltrated the Euryalus.

However, because the other squads failed to board the remaining six ships, the men on the flagship were forced to retreat.


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However, because the other squads failed to board the remaining six ships, the mensamurai on the flagship were forced to retreat. However, because the other squads failed to board the remaining six ships, the samurai on the flagship were forced to retreat.

specifying which men, since the flagship presumably also has British men on it.

They realized that even if they managed to hijack a single vessel, it would immediately be blown out of the water by the rest of the fleet.


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To avoid needless casualties, the hijacking plot was ultimately called off.


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