July 7, 2021
It is Rainy
Today, it is rainy all day and I didn't go out. The weather forecast says it will be rainy and cloudy next week, so I'm fed up with it. I don't dislike rain per se but dislike it causes high humidity and makes me being short of exercise. Additionally, I cannot dry my clothes without going to a laundromat, which costs time and money.
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It i's Rainy
It's Rainy
This is correct but is very formal. Formal talk like this is reserved for legal or technical language, and can make you sound defensive. 'It's rainy' sounds more natural.
Today, it iIt was rainying all day today and I didn't go out.
It was raining all day today and I didn't go out.
Alternatively, 'Today it was raining all day and I didn't go out,' which is a little more stiff but entirely acceptable. When it comes to is vs was: if it encompasses the entirety of a thing, it is past tense. I'm sorry if that's a bad explanation, I can't think of a better way to say it.
The weatherI'm fed up with the weather, since the forecast says it will be rainy and cloudy all next week, so I'm fed up with it.
I'm fed up with the weather, since the forecast says it will be rainy and cloudy all next week.
You are the subject because this is about your feelings about the weather, so you take priority in the sentence.
I don't dislike rain per se but dislike that it causes high humidity and makes me beingfall short of my exercise goals.
I don't dislike rain per se but dislike that it causes high humidity makes me fall short of my exercise goals.
Being implies it started that way. If you don't have exercise goals but just exercise more when its not raining, you would just say 'and it makes exercising hard.'
Additionally, I canno't dry my clothes without going to a laundromat, which costs time and money.
Additionally, I can't dry my clothes without going to a laundromat, which costs time and money.
Correct but uncontracted 'cannot' is very formal.
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You are very proficient, speaking formally is important when you are just learning a language but I think you can start getting a little casual now.
July 8, 2021
Thank you so much! Your advice is helpful to understand slight differences of nuances, and I learned a lot.
It is Rainy
Today, it is rainyed all day and I didn't go out.
Today, it rained all day and I didn't go out.
The weather forecast says it will be rainy and cloudy next week, so and I'm fed up with it.
The weather forecast says it will be rainy and cloudy next week and I'm fed up with it.
I don't dislike rain per se but I dislike that it causes high humidity and makes me being short ofhave to postpone my outdoor exercise.
I don't dislike rain per se but I dislike that it causes high humidity and makes me have to postpone my outdoor exercise.
I assumed you meant that the rain caused you not to be able to exercise outdoors as much, so that's why I wrote it like this!
Additionally, I cannot dry my clothes without going to a laundromat, which costs time and money.
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I agree, I'm tired of the rain too! I love your word choices in your sentences!
July 8, 2021
I'm happy to hear that, and thank you for your corrections!
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It is Rainy This sentence has been marked as perfect!
It This is correct but is very formal. Formal talk like this is reserved for legal or technical language, and can make you sound defensive. 'It's rainy' sounds more natural. |
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Today, it is rainy all day and I didn't go out.
Today, it
Alternatively, 'Today it was raining all day and I didn't go out,' which is a little more stiff but entirely acceptable. When it comes to is vs was: if it encompasses the entirety of a thing, it is past tense. I'm sorry if that's a bad explanation, I can't think of a better way to say it. |
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The weather forecast says it will be rainy and cloudy next week, so I'm fed up with it.
The weather forecast says it will be rainy and cloudy next week
You are the subject because this is about your feelings about the weather, so you take priority in the sentence. |
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I don't dislike rain per se but dislike it causes high humidity and makes me being short of exercise.
I don't dislike rain per se but I dislike that it causes high humidity and makes me I assumed you meant that the rain caused you not to be able to exercise outdoors as much, so that's why I wrote it like this!
I don't dislike rain per se but dislike that it causes high humidity Being implies it started that way. If you don't have exercise goals but just exercise more when its not raining, you would just say 'and it makes exercising hard.' |
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Additionally, I cannot dry my clothes without going to a laundromat, which costs time and money. This sentence has been marked as perfect!
Additionally, I can Correct but uncontracted 'cannot' is very formal. |
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