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I visited The Seiko Museum at Ginza exhibiting various clocks from ancient water clocks to state of the art wrist watches. Seiko is a famous Japanese company manufacturing affordable clocks with high performance. The company launched the first quartz watch series Astron in 1969. Clocks had counted the seconds by turning gears mechanically. Drawbacks of mechanical watches are low precision, cost and vulnerable to impact. Quartz watches use the precise vibration of quartz when applying electric current and do not require complicated system. Drastic drop in prices was caused by the innovation and resulted in collapse of clock industries in US and Switzerland. Today, more than 80% in the clock market is quartz type including radio clocks. I prefer mechanical watches because the sound of gears makes me relax.

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Clocks had counted the seconds by turning gears mechanically.

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I visited The Seiko Museum at Ginza exhibiting various clocks from ancient water clocks to state of the art wrist watches.


I visited The Seiko Museum atin Ginza which exhibitings various clocks, from ancient water clocks to state of the art wrist watches. I visited The Seiko Museum in Ginza which exhibits various clocks, from ancient water clocks to state of the art wrist watches.

I visited The Seiko Museum atin Ginza. The museum exhibitinged various clocks and watches, from ancient water clocks to state of the art wrist watches. I visited The Seiko Museum in Ginza. The museum exhibited various clocks and watches, from ancient water clocks to state of the art wrist watches.

In English, watches aren't seen as a kind of clock, and watches are not usually called "clocks." A watch is a timepiece around your wrist, while a clock is a timepiece that hangs on the wall. I would write "clocks and watches."

I visited The Seiko Museum at Ginza, which exhibitings various clockstypes of clocks, ranging from ancient water clocks to state of the art wrist watches. I visited The Seiko Museum at Ginza, which exhibits various types of clocks, ranging from ancient water clocks to state of the art wrist watches.

I visited Tthe Seiko Museum atin Ginza which exhibitings various clocks, from ancient water clocks to state of the art wrist watches. I visited the Seiko Museum in Ginza which exhibits various clocks, from ancient water clocks to state of the art wrist watches.

Seiko is a famous Japanese company manufacturing affordable clocks with high performance.


Seiko is a famous Japanese company, manufacturing affordable clocks with high performance. Seiko is a famous Japanese company, manufacturing affordable clocks with high performance.

Seiko is a famous Japanese company that manufacturinges affordable clocks and watches with high performance. Seiko is a famous Japanese company that manufactures affordable clocks and watches with high performance.

Seiko is a famous Japanese company that manufacturinges affordable clocks with high performance. Seiko is a famous Japanese company that manufactures affordable clocks with high performance.

The company launched the first quartz watch series Astron in 1969.


The company launched the first quartz watch series, Astron, in 1969. The company launched the first quartz watch series, Astron, in 1969.

The company launched the first quartz watch series Astron in 1969. The company launched the first quartz watch series Astron in 1969.

Clocks had counted the seconds by turning gears mechanically.


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Clocks hadBefore this invention, clocks and watches could only counted the seconds by turning gears mechanically. Before this invention, clocks and watches could only count the seconds by turning gears mechanically.

CThese clocks had counted the seconds by turning gears mechanically. These clocks counted the seconds by turning gears mechanically.

Drawbacks of mechanical watches are low precision, cost and vulnerable to impact.


DSome drawbacks of mechanical watches are low precision, cost and vulnerable to impact. Some drawbacks of mechanical watches are low precision, cost and vulnerable to impact.

‘Drawbacks’ is fine but adding the qualifier is good for some sentences that start with non-proper nouns

Drawbacks of mechanical clocks and watches are low precision, cost, and vulnerable to impactlow durability. Drawbacks of mechanical clocks and watches are low precision, cost, and low durability.

Drawbacks of mechanical watches arinclude low precision, cost, and vulnerableility to impact. Drawbacks of mechanical watches include low precision, cost, and vulnerability to impact.

Drawbacks of mechanical watches are low precision, cost and vulnerableility to impact. Drawbacks of mechanical watches are low precision, cost and vulnerability to impact.

Quartz watches use the precise vibration of quartz when applying electric current and do not require complicated system.


Quartz watches use the precise vibration of quartz when applying electric current and do not require a complicated system. Quartz watches use the precise vibration of quartz when applying electric current and do not require a complicated system.

Quartz clocks and watches use the precise vibration of quartz when applying electric current and do not require a complicated system. Quartz clocks and watches use the precise vibration of quartz when applying electric current and do not require a complicated system.

Quartz watches use the precise vibration of quartz when applying electric current and do not require a complicated system. Quartz watches use the precise vibration of quartz when applying electric current and do not require a complicated system.

Drastic drop in prices was caused by the innovation and resulted in collapse of clock industries in US and Switzerland.


DA drastic drop in prices was caused by the innovavention and resulted in the collapse of the clock industries inand watch industry in the US and Switzerland. A drastic drop in prices was caused by the invention and resulted in the collapse of the clock and watch industry in the US and Switzerland.

DA drastic drop in prices was caused by theis innovation and resulted in the collapse of clock industries in US and Switzerland. A drastic drop in prices was caused by this innovation and resulted in the collapse of clock industries in US and Switzerland.

DA drastic drop in prices was caused by the innovation, and resulted in the collapse of clock industries in US and Switzerland. A drastic drop in prices was caused by the innovation, and resulted in the collapse of clock industries in US and Switzerland.

Today, more than 80% in the clock market is quartz type including radio clocks.


Today, more than 80% inof the clock market is the quartz type, including radio clocks. Today, more than 80% of the clock market is the quartz type, including radio clocks.

Today, more than 80% of watches and clocks in the clock market isare quartz type, including radio clocks. Today more than 80% of watches and clocks in the market are quartz, including radio clocks.

Today, more than 80% of products in the clock market isare quartz type, including radio clocks. Today, more than 80% of products in the clock market are quartz type, including radio clocks.

Today, more than 80% inof the clock market is quartz type, including radio clocks. Today more than 80% of the clock market is quartz type, including radio clocks.

I prefer mechanical watches because the sound of gears makes me relax.


I prefer mechanical watches because the sound of the gears makes me relax. I prefer mechanical watches because the sound of the gears makes me relax.

I prefer mechanical watches because the sound of the gears makes me relaxis relaxing to me. I prefer mechanical watches because the sound of the gears is relaxing to me.

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