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Challenge, Day 70

Today is the 70th day of my daily English challenge. Today my sister traveled to Algiers to see our family. After arrived she had called me to say our mother is sick and very weak. My sister helped our nephew to explain her maths sometimes finds hard to understand. His mother don't care about her son. I am so sorry about my sister-in law. I think is not a good mother almost she abandont the house and her son.There are those who have happiness and do not appreciate it... What a difficult time we live in!. But the problem is in ourselves...

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Challenge, Day 70

Today is the 70th day of my daily English challenge.

Today my sister traveled to Algiers to see our family.

I am so sorry about my sister-in law.

But the problem is in ourselves...

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Challenge, Day 70

Today is the 70th day of my daily English challenge.

Today my sister traveled to Algiers to see our family.

But the problem is in ourselves...

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I am so sorry about my sister-in -law.

I would use this sentence if I was apologizing to somebody for my sister-in-law. Are you trying to say "I feel sorry for my nephew."?

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Today my sister traveled to Algiers to see our family.

Correct, but "went to Algiers" or "flew to Algiers" is a little more natural. I would use travel if I was talking about the whole trip, instead of just going from point A to B.

Challenge, Day 70


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Today is the 70th day of my daily English challenge.


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Today my sister traveled to Algiers to see our family.


Today my sister traveled to Algiers to see our family. Today my sister traveled to Algiers to see our family.

Correct, but "went to Algiers" or "flew to Algiers" is a little more natural. I would use travel if I was talking about the whole trip, instead of just going from point A to B.

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After arrived she had called me to say our mother is sick and very weak.


After she arrived, she had called me to say our mother is sick and very weak. After she arrived, she called me to say our mother is sick and very weak.

Or... "After she arrived, she called to tell me that our mother is sick and very weak."

After she arrived she had called me to say our mother is sick and very weak. After she arrived she called me to say our mother is sick and very weak.

After arriveding she had called me to say our mother is sick and very weak. After arriving she called me to say our mother is sick and very weak.

I'm sorry to hear this.

My sister helped our nephew to explain her maths sometimes finds hard to understand.


My sister helped our nephew to explain her mathsexplain maths to our nephew, which he sometimes finds hard to understand. My sister helped explain maths to our nephew, which he sometimes finds hard to understand.

My sister helped our nephew to explainteach her maths that she sometimes finds hard to understand. My sister helped our nephew to teach her maths that she sometimes finds hard to understand.

My sister helped our nephew toby explain hering maths he sometimes finds hard to understand. My sister helped our nephew by explaining math he sometimes finds hard to understand.

His mother don't care about her son.


His mother doesn't care about her son. His mother doesn't care about her son.

His mother doesn't care about her sonim. His mother doesn't care about him.

His mother doesn't care about her son. His mother doesn't care about her son.

I am so sorry about my sister-in law.


I am so sorry about my sister-in -law. I am so sorry about my sister-in-law.

I would use this sentence if I was apologizing to somebody for my sister-in-law. Are you trying to say "I feel sorry for my nephew."?

I amfeel so sorry aboutfor my sister-in law. I feel so sorry for my sister-in law.

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I think is not a good mother almost she abandont the house and her son.There are those who have happiness and do not appreciate it... What a difficult time we live in!.


I think she is not a good mother; she almost she abandonted the house and her son. There are those who have happiness and do not appreciate it... What a difficult time we live in!. I think she is not a good mother; she almost abandoned the house and her son. There are those who have happiness and do not appreciate it... What a difficult time we live in!

I think she is not a good mother. She almost she abandonted the house and her son. There are those who have happiness and do not appreciate it... What a difficult time we live in!. I think she is not a good mother. She almost abandoned the house and her son. There are those who have happiness and do not appreciate it... What a difficult time we live in!

I think is notdon't think she is a good mother. She almost she abandont the houseed her son and ther son. house. There are those who have happiness and do not appreciate it... What a difficult time we live in!. I don't think she is a good mother. She almost abandoned her son and the house. There are those who have happiness and do not appreciate it... What a difficult time we live in!

But the problem is in ourselves...


But the problem is within ourselves... But the problem is within ourselves...

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