I'llm going to talk about university today. I'm going to talk about university today.

It wasn't wrong, just sounds more natural this way.

I'm a senior inat Doshisha uUniversity, which is located in Kyoto. I'm a senior at Doshisha University, which is located in Kyoto.

And, it ihas the highest deviation value among private universities in western Japan. And, it has the highest deviation value among private universities in western Japan.

I have no idea what "highest deviation value" is supposed to mean, so I don't know how to correct it. But I do know that something "has" a value, rather than "is" a value.

And, iIt is the highest deviation value among private universities in western Japan. It is the highest deviation value among private universities in western Japan.

I do not know what you mean by deviation value. This is not a term that would be used in English. Perhaps you mean: Among private universities in western Japan it is the best for its quality of education. Technically, one should not start a sentence with the word and. It is a rule that is very often broken by fluent speakers, but rarely in writing. Either way, it is a good rule to follow.

And, iIt is the highest deviation valueranking among private universities in western Japan. It is the highest ranking among private universities in western Japan.

I think "highest deviation value" would equate to something similar to college rankings here, but that may not be what you meant.

To be honest, I didn't have any specific reasons at first when I enteredparticular reasons for choosing this university, but I'm enjoying it now. To be honest, I didn't have any particular reasons for choosing this university, but I'm enjoying it now.

Wasn't wrong, just rewrote it to sound more natural.

To be honest, I didn't have any specific reasons at first when I enteredto choose this university, but I'm enjoying it now. To be honest, I didn't have any specific reasons to choose this university, but I'm enjoying it now.

We wouldn't say enter a university except to physically walk into it. Your sentence is grammatically correct, but I have modified it to be more standard.

To be honest, I didn't have any specific reasons at first when I enteredfor choosing this university, but I'm enjoying it now. To be honest, I didn't have any specific reasons for choosing this university, but I'm enjoying it now.

I belong to'm in the Global and Reagional Studies fuaculty and I, where I'm learning about other countries' cultures and problems like, such as immigration. I'm in the Global and Regional Studies faculty, where I'm learning about other countries' cultures and problems, such as immigration.

I belong to the Global and Reagional Studies fuaculty and I learn about other countries' cultures and problems like immigration. I belong to the Global and Reagional Studies faculty and I learn about other countries' cultures and problems like immigration.

I belong to the Global and Reagional Studies fuaculty and I learn about other countries' cultures and problems like immigration. I belong to the Global and Regional Studies faculty and I learn about other countries' cultures and problems like immigration.

While I think "faculty" would be correct, it is more common to say "department"

In particular, I'm learning about foreign workers around the world because I wannat to know why they don't work in a country of birth but ither than otherir birth country. In particular, I'm learning about foreign workers around the world because I want to know why they work in a country other than their birth country.

In particular, I'm learning about foreign workers around the world because I wannat to know why they don't work in a country of birth buttheir birth country but instead in other country. In particular, I'm learning about foreign workers around the world because I want to know why they don't work in their birth country but instead in other country.

Wanna is a form of slang. It is used commonly verbally, but outside of songs it is something that is almost never written. In formal situations, words like gonna, wanna, shoulda... are not used. country of birth is correct. Birth country is simply the more common term.

In particular, I'm learning about foreign workers around the world because I wannat to know why they don't work in atheir country of birth but in another country. In particular, I'm learning about foreign workers around the world because I want to know why they don't work in their country of birth but in another country.

"Wanna" is slang, and it does mean "want to," but it is very informal and more common in speech (or texting) than in writing.