Feb. 27, 2021
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About ten years ago, I went to Shangri la county, Diqingzhou, Yunnan Province, China. The place borders Tibet with an altitude of 3500 to 4000, similar to Lhasa. Where Tibetan lives and is also a Tibetan-inhabited area. I do see many yaks there, which gets around on hills. Yaks are smaller than normal oxen and Buffalo, but they have long fur and look very interesting.
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About ten years ago, I went to Shangri lLa cCounty, Diqingzhou, Yunnan Province, in China.
About ten years ago, I went to Shangri La County, Diqingzhou, Yunnan Province in China.
The placeis region borders Tibet withand has an altitude ofranging from 3,500 to 4,000, meters which is very similar to Lhasa.
This region borders Tibet and has an altitude ranging from 3,500 to 4,000 meters which is very similar to Lhasa.
Where Tibetan lives and is also a Tibetan-inhabited area.This region is also where many Tibetans live.
This region is also where many Tibetans live.
I do seesaw many yaks there, which gets around on on the hills.
I saw many yaks there on the hills.
Yaks are smaller than normal oxen and Ban ox as well as a water buffalo, butand they have long furs and look very interesting.
Yaks are smaller than an ox as well as a water buffalo, and they have long furs and look very interesting.
You should only use the connector "but" when the first part of your sentence is in contrast with the second. In this case, that fact that yaks are smaller does not contrast their fur and their appearance. In other words, a yak could be both smaller, have lots of fur AND interesting.
Feb. 27, 2021
The placeis region borders Tibet withand has an altitude ofranging from 3,500 to 4,000, meters which is very similar to Lhasa.
This region borders Tibet and has a altitude ranging from 3500 to 4000 meters which is very similar to Lhasa.
Feb. 27, 2021
Where Tibetan lives and is also a Tibetan-inhabited area.This region is also where many Tibetans live.
This region is also where many Tibet live.
Feb. 27, 2021
I do seesaw many yaks there, which gets around on on the hills.
I saw many yaks there on the hills.
Feb. 27, 2021
Yaks are smaller than normal oxen and Ban ox as well as a water buffalo, butand they have long furs and look very interesting.
You should only use the connector "but" when the first part of your sentence is in contrast with the second. In this case, that fact that yaks are smaller does not contrast their fur and their appearance. In other words, a yak could be both smaller, have lots of fur AND interesting.
Yaks are smaller than an ox as well as an water buffalo, and they have long furs and look very interesting.
Journal
About ten years ago, I went to Shangri la county, Diqingzhou, Yunnan Province, China.
The place borders Tibet withand has an altitude of 3500 to 4000 (m, ft?), similar to Lhasa.
The place borders Tibet and has an altitude of 3500 to 4000 (m, ft?), similar to Lhasa.
This sounds more natural in the US.
WIt's where Tibetans lives and is also. (It's a Tibetan-inhabited area.)
It's where Tibetans live. (It's a Tibetan-inhabited area.)
I'm not sure what you're trying to say here so this is my best guess.
I doid see many yaks there, which. They gets around onamong the hills.
I did see many yaks there. They get around among the hills.
This should be past tense since you visited ten years ago. It reads and sounds better in the US if this sentence is broken into two.
Yaks are smaller than normal oxen and Bbuffalo, but they have long fur and look very interesting.
Yaks are smaller than normal oxen and buffalo, but they have long fur and look very interesting.
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Good job!
Feb. 27, 2021
WIt's where Tibetans lives and is also. (It's a Tibetan-inhabited area.)
I'm not sure what you're trying to say here so this is my best guess.
Your guess are right
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Thank you very much
Feb. 27, 2021
Your guess are right
It is where Tibetans live. Or it’s Tibetan-inhabited area.
Feb. 27, 2021
The place borders Tibet withand has an altitude of 3500 to 4000 (m, ft?), similar to Lhasa.
This sounds more natural in the US.
The place borders Tibet and has a altitude of 3500 to 4000 meters.
Feb. 28, 2021
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The place borders Tibet with an altitude of 3500 to 4000, similar to Lhasa.
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Where Tibetan lives and is also a Tibetan-inhabited area.
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I do see many yaks there, which gets around on hills.
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Yaks are smaller than normal oxen and Buffalo, but they have long fur and look very interesting.
Yaks are smaller than normal oxen and
Yaks are smaller than You should only use the connector "but" when the first part of your sentence is in contrast with the second. In this case, that fact that yaks are smaller does not contrast their fur and their appearance. In other words, a yak could be both smaller, have lots of fur AND interesting. |
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