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April 28, 2021

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今天的感谢

今天我一定可以说「感谢」,因为今天是一个真不错的天。例如,我恨化学课,并今天我最后一次学化学。
除了这个事情以外,我也写生物学考试写得很好。从今天开始,我也没有生物课。这是因为我越来越附近完高中,所以课上选择比较少,没有空间选择这两个课。从明年开始,我只会有物理课、中文课、商务课,英语课、高级数学课和计算机科学。
今天的课又容易又短,所以我也有机会更练习中文。终于啊!我已经几个星期期待不必须复习的时候。再说,今天在生物上我们写考试之后,就一起玩手机游戏。英语课的时候,我一个人读几个故事……很舒服!
我希望星期四和星期五也能这么舒服和方便。


Today I can definitely be grateful because it's been quite a good day. For example, I hate the subject of Chemistry, and today was my last Chemistry class.
Other than this, I also wrote a Biology test very well. From today onwards, I also won't have Biology. This is because I'm getting closer and closer to finishing high school, so choices in regards to classes are getting relatively few in number, and I don't have space to choose these two classes. From next year, I will only have Physics, Mandarin, Business, English, advanced Mathematics, and Computer Science.
Today's classes were both easy and short, so I had opportunities to practice Chinese. Finally! I've already been looking forward to the time when I don't have to revise for several weeks. Furthermore, after writing today's Biology exam, we all had the chance to play a mobile game together. During English class, I read stories alone - quite comfortable!
I hope Thursday and Friday can be this comfortable and convenient.

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April 29, 2021

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April 29, 2021

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Thank you very much for your extremely detailed comments and feedback, it has been useful and really clarified some of these grammar points for me. Interesting to see that there is no direct translation to gratitude in Chinese!

今天的感谢


天的感谢日感恩 日感恩

In Chinese, if we want to express the gratefulness, in particular for what happened, we normally would use 感恩 or 感激 instead of 感谢.

今天我一定可以说「感谢」,因为今天是一个真不错的天。


今天我一定可以说「感谢」,因为今天是一个真不错的天是值得感恩的一天,因为发生了很多好事情 今天是值得感恩的一天,因为发生了很多好事情

Sorry I have to rewrite the whole sentence. It may seem way different from your original expression. But I tried my best to capture your idea based on your English version and rewrite it in a way that is natural to Chinese.

例如,我恨化学课,并今天我最后一次学化学。


例如,我恨化学课,并,但今天我最后一次化学 例如,我恨化学,但今天我最后一次化学

1. 例如 feels a bit formal for a diary. You may consider 比如. 2. When referring to a subject, we don’t need to add 课. 3. In the English version you use “and”. But in Chinese, using 但 here would be more logical and understandable.

除了这个事情以外,我也写生物学考试写得很好。


了这个事情以此之外,我也写生物考试得很好。 此之外,我生物考试得很好。

除此之外 = other than this

从今天开始,我也没有生物课。


从今天开始,我也没有往后,我也不用上生物课 从今往后,我也不用上生物课

从今往后 = from now on

这是因为我越来越附近完高中,所以课上选择比较少,没有空间选择这两个课。


这是因为我越来越附近完高中,所以课上快高中毕业了,所以上课的选择比较少,没有空间选择这两课。 因为我快高中毕业了,所以上课的选择比较少,没有空间选择这两课。

“课”的量词用“门”或者“节” 一节课 一门课

从明年开始,我只会有物理课、中文课、商务课,英语课、高级数学课和计算机科学。


从明年开始,我只会有用上物理课、中文课、商务课英语课、高级数学课和计算机科学。 从明年开始,我只用上物理课、中文课、商务课英语课、高级数学课和计算机科学。

今天的课又容易又短,所以我也有机会更练习中文。


今天的课又容易又短,所以我也有机会更我也因此有更多时间练习中文。 今天的课又容易又短,我也因此有更多时间练习中文。

Here, using 时间 would be more natural. In Chinese, 机会, though translated into opportunities or chances, means more like a timing of action. It is short and sudden. E.g. 我下学期要去意大利交换了,趁着这个机会,我打算学点意大利语。Here we emphasize the action of exchange, hence we use 趁着这个机会. To compare: 1. 我下周就要离开上海了,在那之前,不知道你有没有时间,我们约顿饭? 2. 我下周就要离开上海了,在那之前,不知道我们有没有机会约顿饭?

终于啊!


我已经几个星期期待不必须复习的时候。


已经几个星期期待不必须复习的时候。不用再复习了! 不用再复习了!

In Chinese, after several exams, we may say: 我终于考完了! 我终于不用再复习了! 我解放了!= I am released/free!

再说,今天在生物上我们写考试之后,就一起玩手机游戏。


再说,今天在生物上我们写考试之后,就另外,考完生物后,我们聚在一起玩手机游戏。 另外,考完生物后,我们聚在一起玩手机游戏。

英语课的时候,我一个人读几个故事……很舒服!


英语课的时候,我一个人读几个故事……很舒服! 英语课,我一个人读故事……很舒服!

我希望星期四和星期五也能这么舒服和方便。


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