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A High school

I passed a high school few days ago.
When I gave passed message, I was so happy with my mother.
Thank you for my mother’s help and I will study foreign languages harder.


私は数日前受験に合格した。
私が合格の通知を受け取ったとき、私は母と一緒に喜んだ。
母の助けには感謝しているし、私は外国語を勉強するのを頑張る。

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A HBETTER TITLE: Passing by a high school A BETTER TITLE: Passing by a high school

QUESTION: Was it the high school that you once attended? If so, this wording is possible: Passing by my high school

When I gave passed message, I was so happy with my mother.


When I gave passedreceived the message, that I wpas so happy with my mother.sed, I and my mother were so happy. (or: When we found out that I passed, me and my mother were so happy.) When I received the message that I passed, I and my mother were so happy. (or: When we found out that I passed, me and my mother were so happy.)

When I gavreceived the passeding message, I was so happy with my mother. When I received the passing message, I was so happy with my mother.

The correct phrase is "received the passing message" since you're talking about getting the notification or news of passing. "Gave" is incorrect here, as you're not giving the message but receiving it.

When I gave passed message, I was so happy with my mother. When I gave passed message, I was so happy with my mother.

When I was told about/got the results, My mother and I were so happy

When I gave passed message, I was so happy with my motMY GUESS: When I notified my mother, I felt so much appreciation for her. MY GUESS: When I notified my mother, I felt so much appreciation for her.

So did you recently pass a high school entrance examination?

Thank you for my mother’s help and I will study foreign languages harder.


Thank youI'm grateful for my mother's help and, so I will work harder at studying foreign languages harder. I'm grateful for my mother's help, so I will work harder at studying foreign languages.

Thank youI’m grateful for my mother’s help and I will study foreign languages harder. I’m grateful for my mother’s help and I will study foreign languages harder.

"I'm grateful" sounds more natural than just "thank you" in this context. It reflects your appreciation for her support more clearly.

Thank youI am grateful for my mother’s help and I will study foreign languages harder. I am grateful for my mother’s help and I will study foreign languages harder.

Thank you for my mother’s help and encourage, I will study foreign languages harder. Thank you for my mother’s help and encourage, I will study foreign languages harder.

QUESTION: Besides English, what languages are you studying? Chinese and English? French and English?

I passed a high school few days ago.


I passed a high school few days ago.entrance exam a few days ago. (or: I was accepted into a high school a few days ago. / I passed the entrance exam for a high school a few days ago.) I passed a high school entrance exam a few days ago. (or: I was accepted into a high school a few days ago. / I passed the entrance exam for a high school a few days ago.)

I passed afinished high school a few days ago. I finished high school a few days ago.

"A high school" is unnecessary here because you're referring to passing high school in general, not a specific school. "A few days ago" needs the article "a" before "few" to sound natural. If you wanted to say you just graduated high school, "finished" is more appropriate

I passed a high school few days ago. I passed a high school few days ago.

I passed high school few days ago.

もし、あなたの高校だったらです: I passed my high school few days ago. あなたが通っていない高校の場合: I passed a high school few days ago. もし、あなたの高校だったらです: I passed my high school few days ago. あなたが通っていない高校の場合: I passed a high school few days ago.

Was this in your hometown? If so, perhaps this wording - I passed a high school in my home town few days ago.

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