Feb. 4, 2020
Cacti poaching
I read an article about a growing menace of cacti poaching. Apparently, for some national parks, it's a thorny issue. Some cacti species fetch a hefty price which results in succulents being stolen from parks and national lands. The problem is so pervasive, that the rangers and other park workers had to come up with a solution. They have started inserting chips into plants. They hope that the chip insertion will be an effective deterrent and will help them to catch the thieves red-handed.
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I read an article about a growing menace ofproblem with cacti poaching.
I read an article about a growing problem with cacti poaching.
This sounds more natural.
Apparently, for some national parks, it's a thorny issue.
Some cacti species fetch a hefty price, which results in succulents being stolen from parks and national lands. Some cacti species fetch a hefty price, which results in succulents being stolen from parks and national lands.
The problem is so pervasive, that the rangers and other park workers had to come up with a solution.
The problem is so pervasive that the rangers and other park workers had to come up with a solution.
They have started inserting chips into plants. They have started inserting chips into plants.
Your sentence is not wrong, but something like "tracking chips" or "microchips with GPS" would be clearer here.
They hope that the chip insertion will be an effective deterrent, and will help them to catch the thieves red-handed.
They hope that the chip insertion will be an effective deterrent, and will help them catch the thieves red-handed.
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Well done, and thanks for sharing a very interesting topic! I didn't know about this problem, but I hope it gets resolved soon.
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I read an article about a growing menace of cacti poaching.
I read an article about a growing This sounds more natural. |
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Apparently, for some national parks, it's a thorny issue. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Some cacti species fetch a hefty price which results in succulents being stolen from parks and national lands. Some cacti species fetch a hefty price, which results in succulents being stolen from parks and national lands. Some cacti species fetch a hefty price, which results in succulents being stolen from parks and national lands. |
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The problem is so pervasive, that the rangers and other park workers had to come up with a solution.
The problem is so pervasive |
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They have started inserting chips into plants. They have started inserting chips into plants. They have started inserting chips into plants. Your sentence is not wrong, but something like "tracking chips" or "microchips with GPS" would be clearer here. |
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They hope that the chip insertion will be an effective deterrent and will help them to catch thieves red-handed. |
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They hope that the chip insertion will be an effective deterrent and will help them to catch the thieves red-handed.
They hope that the chip insertion will be an effective deterrent, and will help them |
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