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alexwong2164

April 24, 2021

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Sleep more, Smart more

Just watched a TED video about the power of sleep.

The full video was 17 minutes long.

Lager amount of test date and many more good information related to a good sleeping.

I only take out the best part and share in here with you.

If you want have a good memory of what you learned.

You are not only sleep after you learning.

You should (must) sleep you start learning.

How’s that sounds to you?

Let’s try this method and see how much of improvement can happen.

My question to this method is that can we sleep that easily?

Sleep is not just close your eye!

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The full video was 17 minutes long.

Sleep more, Smart more


Sleep more, Smart morebe smarter Sleep more, be smarter

Just watched a TED video about the power of sleep.


JI just watched a TED video about the power of sleep. I just watched a TED video about the power of sleep.

"TED video" is technically correct, but people usually say "TED talk."

The full video was 17 minutes long.


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Lager amount of test date and many more good information related to a good sleeping.


Lager amount of test date and many more good information related to a goodThe video presenter discussed data and information about the importance of sleeping. The video presenter discussed data and information about the importance of sleep.

Or "about how to sleep well."

I only take out the best part and share in here with you.


I only take outwill summarize the best part and share int here with you. I will summarize the best part and share it here with you.

If you want have a good memory of what you learned.


If you want have a good memory ofto remember what you learned... If you want to remember what you learn...

This isn't a complete sentence - needs one more clause.

You are not only sleep after you learning.


You are not only sleep after you learning. You are not only sleep after you learning.

Not sure I understand what you mean here.

You should (must) sleep you start learning.


You should (must) sleep you start learning. You should (must) sleep you start learning.

Do you mean that sleep is necessary for learning?

How’s that sounds to you?


How does that sounds to you? How does that sound to you?

Let’s try this method and see how much of improvement can happen.


Let’s try this method and see how much ofwe can improvement can happen. Let’s try this method and see how much we can improve.

My question to this method is that can we sleep that easily?


My question abouto this method is that can we sleep that easily? My question about this method is can we sleep that easily?

Sleep is not just close your eye!


Sleep is not just closeing your eyes! Sleep is not just closing your eyes!

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