Dec. 15, 2022
Kuwagata Nano is an Australian vTuber girl who sings in Japanese even though she doesn’t understand Japanese.
I got to know about her, because she collaborated with one of my favorite streamers.
When I first visited her live stream, she was yelling at a viewer in the chat.
I thought that she was interesting, because many streamers always try to be nice.
I remember that I said “I love your chat moderation style!” in the chat then.
I simply thought she was a feisty and interesting streamer at first, but I gradually found out that she was a really nice person while I visited her live streams and joined her discord server, etc..
Relationship between her and her community is interesting.
As I said before, many streamers always act nice like “I appreciate you! I love you, audience!” and their communities are like “I love you, I will support you, streamer!”
This is fine, but it's typical.
On the other hand, she yells at the chat sometimes as when I first visited her live stream, and viewers often say things like “You deserved it!” when she screwed up in a game.
However, they trust and care for each other, actually.
They have built a really nice and welcoming community.
Actually, it’s nicer than others’ in my opinion.
She puts effort into communicating nicely with viewers even outside her live streams.
I am not that active in her community, but still I can tell that.
Recently, I can’t visit her live stream because of the time zone, unfortunately.
Her stream completely overlaps my sleeping schedule.
I mistakenly said she was an Australian , but actually, she is an Austrian. She has just pointed it out.
I knew that she was an Austrian and her first language was German. I don't know why I wrote that at the first place.
vTuber - Kuwagata Nano
Kuwagata Nano is an Australian vTuber girlwoman who sings in Japanese even though she doesn’t understand Japanese.
I got to know about her, because she collaborated with one of my favorite streamers.
When I first visited her live stream, she was yelling at a viewer in the chat.
Your sentence isn't incorrect but this is a more natural way to say it in the US.
I thought that she was interesting, because many streamers always try to be nice.
I remember that I said in chat at the time, “I love your style of chat moderation style!” in the chat then.!”
I simply thought she was a feisty and interesting streamer at first, but I gradually found out that she was a really nice person whilen I visited her live streams and joined her discord server, etc..
RThe relationship between her and her community is interesting.
As I said before, many streamers always act nice like, “I appreciate you!
I love you, audience!” and their communities are like “I love you, I will support you, streamer!”
This is fine, but it's typical.
On the other hand, she yells at the chat sometimes as when I first visited her live stream, and viewers often say things like , “You deserved it!” when she screweds up in a game.
According to my son, we can personify chat.
However, tThey trust and care for each other, actually.
They have built a really nice and welcoming community.
Actually, it’s nicer than others’ in my opinion.
She puts effort into communicating nicely with viewers even outside of her live streams.
I am not that active in her community, but still I can tell that.
Recently, I can’thaven't been able to visit her live stream because of the time zone difference, unfortunately.
Her stream completely overlaps my sleeping schedule.
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vTuber - Kuwagata Nano
Kuwagata Nano is an Australian vTuber girl who sings in Japanese even though she doesn’t understand Japanese.
I got to know about her, because she collaborated with one of my favorite streamers.
No need for a comma here.
When I first visited her live stream, she was yelling at a viewer in the chat.
I thought that she was interesting, because many streamers always try to be nice.
No need for a comma here.
I remember that I said to her, “I love your chat moderation style!” in the chat then.
You need to specify who you are saying something to here.
I simply thought she was a feisty and interesting streamer at first, but I gradually found out that she was a really nice person w. While I visited her live streams andI joined her discord server, etc..
This sentence is way too long. You need to break it up into at least two seperate sentences.
RThe relationship between her and her community is interesting.
This requires 'the' at the start of the sentence.
As I said before, many streamers always act nice likejust to say “I appreciate you"!
Sounds ackward, needs to be reworded. The exclaimation mark needs to be closed at the quotation.
I love you, audience!” and their communities are like “I love you, I will support you, streamer!”
Don't really understand what you are trying to say here, maybe a rewording is in order.
On the other hand, she yellsed at the chat sometimes as when I first visited her live stream, and viewers often sayid things like “You deserved it!” when she screwed up in a game.
'yells' is the present tense, should be 'yelled' for the past tense. The same for 'say' and 'said', one is present tense and the other is past tense,you are speaking about the past but using present tense grammer.
However, Actually. they trust and care for each other, actually.
This correction sound a lot smoother.
They have built a really nice and welcoming community.
Actually, it’s nicer than others’ in my opinion.
She puts effort into communicating nicelybetter with viewers even outside her live streams.
'Nicely' really doesn't fit here, use better.
I am not that active in her community, but still I can tell that.
Recently, I can’tUnfortunately, I was unable to visit her live stream recently because of the time zone, unfortunately difference.
Her stream completely overlaps my sleeping schedule.
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Hope this helps.
vVTuber - Kuwagata Nano
The 'v' in VTuber is always capitalized.
Kuwagata Nano is an Australian vVTuber girl who sings in Japanese even though she doesn’t understand Japaneseit.
Using japanese twice is repetitive in this sentence.
I got to know about her, because she has collaborated with one of my favorite streamers.
'I got to know her' is a phrase but it is strange to use it with about.
I simply thought she was a feisty and interesting streamer at first, but I gradually found out that she was a really nice person while I visited her live streams and joined her discord server, etc..
RThe relationship between her and her community is interesting.
On the other hand, she yells at the chat sometimes aslike when I first visited her live stream, and the viewers often say things like “You deserved it!” when she screwed up in a game.
Actually, it’s nicer than others’ in my opinion.
Others is also a plural ownership pronoun.
I am not that active in her community, but still I can tell that much.
I added 'much' to sound a bit more natural.
Recently, I can’t visit her live stream because of the time zones, unfortunately.
Her stream completely overlaps with my sleeping schedule.
vTuber - Kuwagata Nano
Kuwagata Nano is an Australian vTuber girl who sings in Japanese even though she doesn’t understand Japanese.
Your sentence is grammatically correct, but here is a slightly more natural way to say it:
"...sings in Japanese despite not speaking it."
I got to know about her, because she collaborated with one of my favorite streamers.
When I first visited her live stream, she was yelling at a viewer in the chat.
I thought that she was interesting, because many streamers always try to be nice.
I remember that I said “I love your chat moderation style!” in the chat then.
I simply thought she was just a feisty and interesting streamer at first, but I gradually found outover time I came to learn that she was a really nice person whileas I visited her live streams and joined her discord server, etc..
"find out" describes an instantaneous revelation. Your realisation was "gradual" so "find out" isn't appropriate here.
RThe relationship between her and her community is interesting.
As I said before, many streamers always act nice like “I appreciate you!
I love you, audience!” and their communities are like “IWe love you, Iwe will always support you, [streamer]!”
This is fine, but it's typical.
On the other hand, she yells at the chat sometimes as when I first visited her live stream, and viewers often say things like “You deserved it!” when she screwed up in a game.
However, theNonetheless, they actually trust and care for each other, actually.
They have built a really nice and welcoming community.
Actually, it’s nicer than others’ in my opinion.
She puts effort into communicating nicely with viewers even outside her live streams.
I am not that active in her community, but still I can tell that.
Recently, I can’thaven't been able to visit her live stream because of the time zone, unfortunately.
Her stream completely overlaps with my sleeping schedule.
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Good writing! A shame about her schedule though :(
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Kuwagata Nano is an Australian vTuber girl who sings in Japanese even though she doesn’t understand Japanese. Kuwagata Nano is an Australian vTuber girl who sings in Japanese even though she doesn’t understand Japanese. Your sentence is grammatically correct, but here is a slightly more natural way to say it: "...sings in Japanese despite not speaking it." Kuwagata Nano is an Australian Using japanese twice is repetitive in this sentence. This sentence has been marked as perfect! Kuwagata Nano is an Australian vTuber |
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I remember that I said “I love your chat moderation style!” in the chat then. I remember I remember that I said to her, “I love your chat moderation style!” in the chat then. You need to specify who you are saying something to here. I remember that I said in chat at the time, “I love your style of chat moderation |
I simply thought she was a feisty and interesting streamer at first, but I gradually found out that she was a really nice person while I visited her live streams and joined her discord server, etc.. I "find out" describes an instantaneous revelation. Your realisation was "gradual" so "find out" isn't appropriate here. I simply thought she was a feisty and interesting streamer at first, but I gradually found out that she was a really nice person while I visited her live streams and joined her discord server, etc. I simply thought she was a feisty and interesting streamer at first, but I gradually found out that she was a really nice person This sentence is way too long. You need to break it up into at least two seperate sentences. I simply thought she was a feisty and interesting streamer at first, but I gradually found out that she was a really nice person wh |
Relationship between her and her community is interesting.
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I love you, audience!” and their communities are like “I love you, I will support you, streamer!” I love you, audience!” and their communities are like “ I love you, audience!” and their communities are like “I love you, I will support you, streamer!” Don't really understand what you are trying to say here, maybe a rewording is in order. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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However, they trust and care for each other, actually.
This correction sound a lot smoother.
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Actually, it’s nicer than others’ in my opinion. This sentence has been marked as perfect! Actually, it’s nicer than others Others is also a plural ownership pronoun. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
She puts effort into communicating nicely with viewers even outside her live streams. This sentence has been marked as perfect! She puts effort into communicating 'Nicely' really doesn't fit here, use better. She puts effort into communicating nicely with viewers even outside of her live |
I am not that active in her community, but still I can tell that. This sentence has been marked as perfect! I am not that active in her community, but still I can tell that much. I added 'much' to sound a bit more natural. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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