Also, her communication skills are dragghindering her behinddevelopment. Also, her communication skills are hindering her development.

Honestly, I'd combine this sentence with the previous one since her poor communication skills are probably what's hindering her career.

She just can't vibe with today's dynamic socializing platforms. She just can't vibe with today's dynamic socializing platforms.

Not sure what specific correction to make, it's grammatically correct but awkward and a bit too informal. Perhaps "She just can't keep up with all the information coming at her through social media." Although, this is still a bit out of place in the rest of the paragraph. Maybe, "She just can't keep up with the speed of communication through social media".

These things are making her depressed with life, and frustrations are engulfing hered with life. These things are making her depressed and frustrated with life.

She is just hoping for someone to come into her life and rescue her from this miserable situation. She is hoping for someone to come into her life and rescue her from this miserable situation.

This is a stylistic correction and not a grammatical one.

Anju is the definition of a typical girl from a middle-class family with a lot ofmany dreams and expectations and dreams to fulfill. Anju is the definition of a typical girl from a middle-class family with many dreams and expectations to fulfill.

She is an introvert andwho can't raise her voice because of the fact that she was told not to speak much in her childhood. She is an introvert who can't raise her voice because she was told not to speak in her childhood.

You could replace "much" with a more descriptive word like "too loud" or you could replace "not to speak much" with "stay quiet".

Now, she is facing an identity crisis in her youth and, failing to cope with the modern dynamicfast-paced society. Now, she is facing an identity crisis, failing to cope with the modern fast-paced society.

Unsure if you mean dynamic as in "ever changing/fast-paced" or dynamic as in a social/cultural/interpersonal dynamic. If you mean the second you could say "the modern dynamics of society".

She doesn't have a lot ofmany friends andor connections. She doesn't have many friends or connections.

So, despite beher outstanding academically goods, she i's falling behind in her career. So, despite her outstanding academics, she's falling behind in her career.