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去汽油站的路上

今天傍晚我的汽油已经没了,所以我去加油站,我进去的时候,他们就关门。

我回去的时候,我们路不是高速公路,所以我走的方向是车在我后面,除非我回头看,我不会知道什么样的车在我后面。我不知道我后面有一辆大卡车。这个大卡车后面有一辆汽车,因为大卡车好慢,车的司机加上速度,超过大卡车,车路过我的旁边,这辆车差点儿碰了我的气瓶,我前面有一个人,他被吓坏了。他看了我说“只有我害怕,你不怕吗”,我摇摇头。我当时的确是没害怕。那辆车的司机也不好,他也没按喇叭,事情发生的时候,好突然。


This evening, I ran out of gas, so I went to the gas station. Just as I arrived, they were closing up.

​On my way back, since the road we take isn't a highway, the traffic was coming from behind me. Unless I turned around to look, I had no way of knowing what kind of vehicles were behind me. I didn't realize there was a trailer truck behind me. There was a car following the truck, and because the truck was moving so slowly, the driver accelerated to overtake it. As the car sped past me, it nearly hit my gas cylinder. A person walking in front of me was absolutely terrified. He looked at me and asked, 'Am I the only one scared? Aren't you afraid?' I just shook my head. I truly wasn't scared at that moment. The driver was in the wrong; he didn't even honk his horn. Everything happened so suddenly.

P.S. The car overtook at the left side of the trailer instead of right 🤦🏾.

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去汽油站的路上

今天傍晚我的汽油已经没用完了,所以我去加油站我进去的时候,他们正要关门。

This evening, I ran out of gas, so I went to the gas station. Just as I arrived, they were closing up.

​On my way back, since the road we take isn't a highway, the traffic was coming from behind me. Unless I turned around to look, I had no way of knowing what kind of vehicles were behind me. I didn't realize there was a trailer truck behind me. There was a car following the truck, and because the truck was moving so slowly, the driver accelerated to overtake it. As the car sped past me, it nearly hit my gas cylinder. A person walking in front of me was absolutely terrified. He looked at me and asked, 'Am I the only one scared? Aren't you afraid?' I just shook my head. I truly wasn't scared at that moment. The driver was in the wrong; he didn't even honk his horn. Everything happened so suddenly.

P.S. The car overtook at the left side of the trailer instead of right 🤦🏾.

回去的时候,我们因为路不是高速公路,所以我走的方向是车在我后面与车同向,除非我回头看,我不会知道什么样的车在我后面。

我不知道我后面有一辆大卡车。

这个大卡车后面有一辆汽车因为大卡车好慢,车的司机加上速度,超过大卡车,车路。汽车经过我的旁边这辆车差点儿碰了我的气瓶我前面有一个人,他被吓坏了。

如果你不知道什么时候该用句号,可以试试:在你换主语前,就用句号结束上一句。

他看了我说“只有我看我,说:“就我在害怕,你不怕吗”我摇摇头。

我当时的确是没害怕。

那辆车的司机也不好,他没按喇叭,所以事情发生的时候,突然。

去汽油站的路上


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今天傍晚我的汽油已经没了,所以我去加油站,我进去的时候,他们就关门。


今天傍晚我的汽油已经没用完了,所以我去加油站我进去的时候,他们正要关门。

This evening, I ran out of gas, so I went to the gas station. Just as I arrived, they were closing up. ​On my way back, since the road we take isn't a highway, the traffic was coming from behind me. Unless I turned around to look, I had no way of knowing what kind of vehicles were behind me. I didn't realize there was a trailer truck behind me. There was a car following the truck, and because the truck was moving so slowly, the driver accelerated to overtake it. As the car sped past me, it nearly hit my gas cylinder. A person walking in front of me was absolutely terrified. He looked at me and asked, 'Am I the only one scared? Aren't you afraid?' I just shook my head. I truly wasn't scared at that moment. The driver was in the wrong; he didn't even honk his horn. Everything happened so suddenly. P.S. The car overtook at the left side of the trailer instead of right 🤦🏾.

我回去的时候,我们路不是高速公路,所以我走的方向是车在我后面,除非我回头看,我不会知道什么样的车在我后面。


回去的时候,我们因为路不是高速公路,所以我走的方向是车在我后面与车同向,除非我回头看,我不会知道什么样的车在我后面。

我不知道我后面有一辆大卡车。


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这个大卡车后面有一辆汽车,因为大卡车好慢,车的司机加上速度,超过大卡车,车路过我的旁边,这辆车差点儿碰了我的气瓶,我前面有一个人,他被吓坏了。


这个大卡车后面有一辆汽车因为大卡车好慢,车的司机加上速度,超过大卡车,车路。汽车经过我的旁边这辆车差点儿碰了我的气瓶我前面有一个人,他被吓坏了。

如果你不知道什么时候该用句号,可以试试:在你换主语前,就用句号结束上一句。

他看了我说“只有我害怕,你不怕吗”,我摇摇头。


他看了我说“只有我看我,说:“就我在害怕,你不怕吗”我摇摇头。

我当时的确是没害怕。


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那辆车的司机也不好,他也没按喇叭,事情发生的时候,好突然。


那辆车的司机也不好,他没按喇叭,所以事情发生的时候,突然。

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