Sept. 6, 2023
An article connected to galaxy travel competition
Dear Readers,
when I read this notice, immediately I decided to write an article. I am interested in topics of travelling, vehicles and development.
So I would like to answer the first question. I think we will use updated cars with extrem fast speed and express trains, which are indeed very quick in 50 years’ time. We will able to travel hundreds of kilometres in few minutes by them.
The solution for the second question is the travelling capsule. It will seem like a special island with natural daylight and coctails. In this will robots work and they make the journey us pleasure. In fact, travelling would be the holiday in this way.
If I would win the prize, I would protect a such project furthermore, I would like to travel to Hawaii Island for a bit sunshine, as unfortunatelly, this capsule has not existed yet.
Best regards
Cloe
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An article connected to the galaxy travel competition An article connected to the galaxy travel competition
Dear Readers,
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When I read this notice, immediately I decided to write an article.
Dear Readers,
When I read this notice, immediately I decided to write an article.
I am interested in topics of travelling, vehicles and development.
I think we will use updated cars with extremely fast speeds and express trains, which are indeed very quick in 50 years’' time.
I think we will use updated cars with extremely fast speeds and express trains, which are indeed very quick in 50 years' time.
"which are indeed very quick in 50 years’ time." This doesn't quite make sense to me? Maybe you mean:
"which will indeed be developed within 50 years."
We will be able to travel hundreds of kilometres in few minutes by themn.
We will be able to travel hundreds of kilometres in few minutes by then.
The solution for the second question is the travelling capsule.
It will seem like a special island with natural daylight and cocktails. It will seem like a special island with natural daylight and cocktails.
In this will, robots will work and they will make the journey us pleasurable.
In this, robots will work and they will make the journey pleasurable.
In fact, travelling this way would be the holiday in this way.
In fact, traveling this way would be the holiday.
If I would win the prize, I would protect a such a project f. Furthermore, I would like to travel to Hawaii Island for a bit of sunshine, asbut unfortunatelly, this capsule has not existed yet.
If I would win the prize, I would protect such a project. Furthermore, I would like to travel to Hawaii Island for a bit of sunshine, but unfortunately, this capsule has not existed yet.
Best regards
,
Cloe
Best regards,
Cloe
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There were just a few minor errors, but overall, the passage was clear! I would love it if technology like this existed soon!
Sept. 7, 2023
Thank you so much! I am glad that you like this idea. :) I am really greatful for your help and advices.
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An article connected to galaxy travel competition An article connected to the galaxy travel competition An article connected to the galaxy travel competition |
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Dear Readers, when I read this notice, immediately I decided to write an article.
Dear Readers, |
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I am interested in topics of travelling, vehicles and development. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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So I would like to answer the first question. |
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I think we will use updated cars with extrem fast speed and express trains, which are indeed very quick in 50 years’ time.
I think we will use updated cars with extremely fast speeds and express trains, which are indeed very quick in 50 years "which are indeed very quick in 50 years’ time." This doesn't quite make sense to me? Maybe you mean: "which will indeed be developed within 50 years." |
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We will able to travel hundreds of kilometres in few minutes by them.
We will be able to travel hundreds of kilometres in few minutes by the |
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The solution for the second question is the travelling capsule. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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It will seem like a special island with natural daylight and coctails. It will seem like a special island with natural daylight and cocktails. It will seem like a special island with natural daylight and cocktails. |
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In this will robots work and they make the journey us pleasure.
In this |
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In fact, travelling would be the holiday in this way.
In fact, travel |
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If I would win the prize, I would protect a such project furthermore, I would like to travel to Hawaii Island for a bit sunshine, as unfortunatelly, this capsule has not existed yet.
If I would win the prize, I would protect |
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Best regards Cloe
Best regards |
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