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I was born and raised in Germany. One of the foods that most people like and eat a lot, is potato, I have never been into them. My mother used to cook potatoes with herb quark for me, as this is a very traditional way to eat them in Germany. For some reason I don’t like them. I always try to eat them, to change my mind , but it won’t happen. The only way I really like potatoes is to make French fries, I peel them and fry them in the pan. But I have to admit, that I really love pasta and in Italy, they play the same role as potatoes in Germany.
I was born and raised in Germany.
One of the foods that most people like and eat a lot, is potato,. I have never been into them.
One of the foods that most people like and eat a lot is potato. I have never been into them.
'is potato' is a necessary part of the sentence, so it shouldn't have a comma. 'I have' is a new subject and verb, so it needs to be a new sentence. You've used 'into them' correctly!
My mother used to cook potatoes with herb quark for me, as this is a very traditional way to eat them in Germany.
For some reason I don’t like them.
I always try to eat them, to change my mind , but it won’t happen. I always try to eat them, to change my mind , but it won’t happen.
This is correct. In order to make it clearer that you are adding onto the thought, you can say 'in order to change my mind.'
The only way I really like potatoes is to makeas French fries,. I peel them and fry them in the pan.
The only way I really like potatoes is as French fries. I peel them and fry them in the pan.
You can also say, 'The only way I really like to make potatoes is French fries.'
But I have to admit, that I really love pasta and in Italy, they play the same role as potatoes in Germany.
The Country of Potatoes
I was born and raised in Germany.
One of the foods that most people like and eat a lot, is the potato,. I have never been into them.
One of the foods that most people like and eat a lot is the potato. I have never been into them.
My mother used to cook potatoes with herbs and quark for me, as this is a very traditional way to eat them in Germany. My mother used to cook potatoes with herbs and quark for me, as this is a very traditional way to eat them in Germany.
Actually, "herb quark" is okay -- I've had a rethink!
For some reason I don’t like them.
I always try to eat them, to change my mind , but it wodoesn’t happen.
I always try to eat them to change my mind, but it doesn’t happen.
The only way I really like potatoes is to make French fries, – I peel them and fry them in thea pan.
The only way I really like potatoes is to make French fries – I peel them and fry them in a pan.
But I have to admit, that I really love pasta, and in Italy, they play the same role as potatoes in Germany.
But I have to admit that I really love pasta, and in Italy, they play the same role as potatoes in Germany.
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Very good! Mainly some small issues with the puncutation.
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The Country of Potatoes This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I was born and raised in Germany. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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One of the foods that most people like and eat a lot, is potato, I have never been into them.
One of the foods that most people like and eat a lot
One of the foods that most people like and eat a lot 'is potato' is a necessary part of the sentence, so it shouldn't have a comma. 'I have' is a new subject and verb, so it needs to be a new sentence. You've used 'into them' correctly! |
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My mother used to cook potatoes with herb quark for me, as this is a very traditional way to eat them in Germany. My mother used to cook potatoes with herbs and quark for me, as this is a very traditional way to eat them in Germany. My mother used to cook potatoes with herbs and quark for me, as this is a very traditional way to eat them in Germany. Actually, "herb quark" is okay -- I've had a rethink! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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For some reason I don’t like them. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I always try to eat them, to change my mind , but it won’t happen.
I always try to eat them I always try to eat them, to change my mind , but it won’t happen. I always try to eat them, to change my mind , but it won’t happen. This is correct. In order to make it clearer that you are adding onto the thought, you can say 'in order to change my mind.' |
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The only way I really like potatoes is to make French fries, I peel them and fry them in the pan.
The only way I really like potatoes is to make French fries
The only way I really like potatoes is You can also say, 'The only way I really like to make potatoes is French fries.' |
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But I have to admit, that I really love pasta and in Italy, they play the same role as potatoes in Germany.
But I have to admit This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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