Jan. 19, 2021
Wind is Strong
It's very windy today, so I almost didn't go outside. When I was walking outside, I felt so cold that I had a pain in my ears. Unfortunately, there was a big car accident that involved over 130 cars. This is because snowdrifts were blown and it made a snowstorm, so visibility was bad.
The only good thing was my clothes got dry quickly thanks to the wind. I can't wait for spring, a warmer and calm climate.
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WThe wind is Sstrong.
The wind is strong.
It's very windy today, so I almost didn't go outside.
When I was walking outside, I feltit was so cold that I had a pain in my earsmy ears started to hurt.
When I was walking outside, it was so cold that my ears started to hurt.
Unfortunately, there was a big car accident that involved over 130 cars.
This is because snowdrifts were blown and it made a snowstorm, sointo the air and created a snowstorm which reduced visibility was bad.
This is because snowdrifts were blown into the air and created a snowstorm which reduced visibility.
The only good thing was that my clothes got dry quickly thanks to the wind. The only good thing was that my clothes got dry quickly thanks to the wind.
I can't wait for spring, a warmer and calmer climate. I can't wait for spring, a warmer and calmer climate.
Jan. 20, 2021
Thank you so much!
WThe wind is Strong
The wind is Strong
It's very windy today, so I almost didn't go outside.
When I was walking outside, I felt so cold that I had a pain in my ears.
Because the wind was so bad, the snowdrifts made a snowstorm, so visibility was poor. Unfortunately, there was a big car accident thatwhich involved over 130 cars.
Because the wind was so bad, the snowdrifts made a snowstorm, so visibility was poor. Unfortunately, there was a big car accident which involved over 130 cars.
This way 'flows' better. Wind = Snowstorm = Accident.
The only good thing was my clothes got dry quickly thanks to the wind.
I can't wait for spring, a warmer and calmer climate. I can't wait for spring, a warmer and calmer climate.
warmER + calmER
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TT_TT Hurry up spring...
Jan. 20, 2021
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It's very windy today, so I almost didn't go outside. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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When I was walking outside, I felt so cold that I had a pain in my ears. This sentence has been marked as perfect!
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Unfortunately, there was a big car accident that involved over 130 cars.
Because the wind was so bad, the snowdrifts made a snowstorm, so visibility was poor. Unfortunately, there was a big car accident This way 'flows' better. Wind = Snowstorm = Accident. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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This is because snowdrifts were blown and it made a snowstorm, so visibility was bad.
This is because snowdrifts were blown |
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The only good thing was my clothes got dry quickly thanks to the wind. This sentence has been marked as perfect! The only good thing was that my clothes got dry quickly thanks to the wind. The only good thing was that my clothes got dry quickly thanks to the wind. |
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I can't wait for spring, a warmer and calm climate. I can't wait for spring, a warmer and calmer climate. I can't wait for spring, a warmer and calmer climate. warmER + calmER I can't wait for spring, a warmer and calmer climate. I can't wait for spring, a warmer and calmer climate. |
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