oOkay,. Today I will write a story, about Dan. Okay. Today I will write a story about Dan.

oOkay,T today I will write a story, about Dan. Okay, today I will write a story about Dan.

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oOkay,T today I will write a story, about Dan. Okay, today I will write a story about Dan.

oOkay,T today I will write a story, about Dan. Okay, today I will write a story about Dan.

Dan is an engineer at the building,h. He is a tall man,h. He has curily hair and, blue eyes and a pointy nose. Dan is an engineer at the building. He is a tall man. He has curly hair, blue eyes and a pointy nose.

Dan is an engineer at the building,h. He is a tall man,he has curily hair and blue eyes, and pointy nose. Dan is an engineer at the building. He is a tall man, has curly hair and blue eyes, and pointy nose.

Use "an" when the next word begins with a vowel and in certain other situations (e.g., an hour). Also watch your spelling.

Dan is an engineer at the building,; he is a tall man,he has cri with curly hair and, blue eyes and a pointy nose. Dan is an engineer at the building; he is a tall man with curly hair, blue eyes and a pointy nose.

Dan is a engineer at the building, he is a tall man, he has curily hair and, blue eyes and point nose. Dan is a engineer at the building, he is a tall man, he has curly hair, blue eyes and point nose.

"and" is only used for the last item in a list.

He does not like his job, because the booss is very anglry every day. He does not like his job, because the boss is very angry every day.

He does not like his job, because the booss is very anglry every day. He does not like his job because the boss is very angry every day.

Spelling and punctuation. If "because" is followed by a short clause you typically don't need a comma (e.g., My favorite color is blue because I love the ocean)

He does not like his job,because the booss is very anglry every day. He does not like his job,because the boss is very angry every day.

He does not like his job, because the boohis boss is very anglry every day. He does not like his job, because his boss is very angry every day.

"the boss" can colloquially mean the owner of the business, but in this extent it's better to say "his boss" as it's someone that works with Dan directly.

One day, Dan gets up at 7:00 a.m., Dan's wondering: “What time is quailky fast,? I don't (won’t?) go to my work.” One day, Dan gets up at 7:00 a.m. Dan's wondering: “What time is quailky fast? I don't (won’t?) go to work.”

I don’t understand “quailky fast.”

One day, Dan gets up at 7:00 a.m., Dan's wondering:Ws, 'what time is quailky breakfast,? I don't want to go to my work.' One day, Dan gets up at 7:00 a.m. Dan wonders, 'what time is breakfast? I don't want to go to work.'

I don't understand what "quailky fast" is meant to be. I assume you meant "breakfast" but am unclear. Again, watch your spacing, punctuation, and spelling.

OneEach day, Dan gets up at 7:00 a.m.,Dan's and he wondering:s: What time is quailky fast,I don't go to my work. Each day, Dan gets up at 7:00 a.m. and he wonders: What time is quailky fast,I don't go to my work.

I'm not sure what "What time is quailky fast,I don't go to my work." is supposed to mean so I'm not sure how to correct it. If he's waking up late maybe "What time is it already? I need to get to work."

One day, Dan gets up at 7:00 a.m., Dan's wondering:What Wow, time is quailky fast,I don'thas passed quickly, I need to go to my work. One day, Dan gets up at 7:00 a.m. Dan's wondering: Wow, time has passed quickly, I need to go to work.

I had to guess a bit at the intended meaning here, it wasn't clear.

Then,H he puts on his pants, shirt, belt, tie, and coat. Then he puts on his pants, shirt, belt, tie, and coat.

Pronouns like "he" are not capitalized in English. You also need a space after using a comma, and if you list three or more things you need to use the Oxford comma like so: Incorrect - I bought an apple, an orange and a banana Correct - I bought an apple, an orange, and a banana

Then,H he puts on his pants, shirt, belt, tie and coat. Then, he puts on his pants, shirt, belt, tie and coat.

Then,H he puts on his pants, shirt, belt, tie and coat. Then, he puts on his pants, shirt, belt, tie and coat.

He goes outside,he gets into his car,he drive and begins his cardrive to work,Sunndely. He goes outside, gets into his car, and begins his drive to work.

Break up your sentences or use "and" when there are independent clauses.

He goes outside,he gets into his car, and he drives his car to work,Sunndely. He goes outside, gets into his car, and he drives his car to work.

He goes outside,he gets into his car,he drives his car to work,Sunn. Suddenly He goes outside, gets into his car, drives his car to work. Suddenly

For this kind of sequence sentence, you don't repeat the subject for each clause. If you want to repeat it, you'd need to make each clause their own sentence.

TSuddenly, the car iswill not star,t. He tiries to start the car, but ithe car does not star,he it and he becomes frustrate.d. Suddenly, the car will not start. He tries to start the car, but it does not start and he becomes frustrated.

Try to combine your clauses whenever possible to make more natural sounding sentences.

The car is nodoesn't star,t. He tiries to start the car, but the car does not star,t and he is frustrated. The car doesn't start. He tries to start the car, but the car does not start and he is frustrated.

The car is nowon't star,t. He tiries to start the car, but the car does not star,t, so he is frustrated. The car won't start. He tries to start the car, but the car does not start, so he is frustrated.

He sees the gas mieter,O and thinks, 'oh, no, I forgot... to get gas.' He sees the gas meter and thinks, 'oh, no, I forgot to get gas.'

He sees the gas mieter,: "Oh,no,I forgot..." He sees the gas meter: "Oh,no,I forgot..."

He sees the gas mieter,: "Oh, no, I forgot..." He sees the gas meter: "Oh, no, I forgot..."

Directly quoted thoughts go inside quotation marks.

Then,H he takes out his phone, and calls taixa taxi. Then, he takes out his phone and calls a taxi.

Whenever you're referencing a noun like this you need an article such as "a," "an," or "the." For example, "he is eating an apple" or "he gets in the car."

Then,H he takes out phone, and calls taixa taxi. Then, he takes out phone and calls a taxi.

Then,H he takes out his phone, and calls taixa taxi. Then, he takes out his phone, and calls a taxi.

5 min,The tax is come here,i arrives in five minutes. Dan gets into the taixi. The taxi arrives in five minutes. Dan gets into the taxi.

Whenever you have a number that is less than ten you typically spell it out instead of using digits, unless specifying a range e.g., 5-10 minutes.

5 min,The tax is come here,After 5 minutes, the taxi arrives and Dan gets into the taixi. After 5 minutes, the taxi arrives and Dan gets into the taxi.

5 min,The tax is come here,utes later, the taxi has arrived, and Dan gets into the taixi. 5 minutes later, the taxi has arrived, and Dan gets into the taxi.

"here" would be the position of the writer, not of Dan.

He says:

Do not start a new line here.

He says, "please, quailky,ickly, or I will be late for work,. If I'm late for work,Mmy booss will firde me." He says, "please, quickly, or I will be late for work. If I'm late my boss will fire me."

Use quotation marks (" ") to indicate dialogue.

please quailkhurry, I will be late for work,. If I am late for work,M my booss will firde me. please hurry, I will be late for work. If I am late for work, my boss will fire me.

pPlease quailkgo quickly, I will be late for work,. If I'm late for work,. My booss will firnd me. Please go quickly, I will be late for work. If I'm late for work. My boss will find me.

30min,The taix driving his work aThe taxi takes thirty minutes to get to his building. The taxi takes thirty minutes to get to his building.

Whenever time is passing you typically don't start the sentence with the amount of time it takes.

After 30 min,The taix drivingutes, the taxi arrives to his work at this building. After 30 minutes, the taxi arrives to his work at this building.

30 min,Tutes later, the taixi driving his work at this building. 30 minutes later, the taxi driving his work at this building.

Secondary clauses within the same sentence don't start with a capital letter, unless the word would start with a capital letter anyway (like proper nouns, or the world "I")

The drive ride $50,He pays $50 for taix.costs $50. The drive costs $50.

It's implied that Dan pays for the taxi so it sounds more natural to leave that part out.

The drivde ride $50,Hcosts $50 and he pays $50 for taixhe taxi. The ride costs $50 and he pays $50 for the taxi.

The drive ride $50,Hride costs $50, so he pays $50 for taixhe taxi. The ride costs $50, so he pays $50 for the taxi.

Arrive at this work,Dan's booss is stand oing in this office when he arrives at work. Dan's boss is standing in his office when he arrives at work.

Whenever someone is currently doing something you want to say "is ___" or "are ___." For example, "he is running," or "they are running."

Arriveing at this work,Dan's boos stand on t the boss is standing in front of his office. Arriving at his work, the boss is standing in front of his office.

After arriveing at this work, Dan's booss stand os in thise office. After arriving at this work, Dan's boss stands in the office.

He says:"Dan, you are late!," he says. "Dan, you are late," he says.

Quotation marks and sentence order.

He says: "Dan, you are late!" He says: "Dan, you are late!"

He says: Dan, you are late! He says: Dan, you are late!

Now,"You're fired,go out of room. now get out." "You're fired, now get out."

Whenever you're telling someone to leave you typically don't need to indicate where they currently are because it's implied.

Now,Y you're fired,go out of. Leave the room." Now, you're fired. Leave the room."

Now,Y you're fired,go get out of the room. Now, you're fired, get out of the room.

Dan is angly,he says:ry. Dan is angry.

Dan is angly,hery and says: Dan is angry and says:

Dan is anglry, he says: Dan is angry, he says:

"You're ungly,I. I'm never come in this placeing back," he says. "You're ugly. I'm never coming back," he says.

"You're ungly, I will never come inback to this place." "You're ugly, I will never come back to this place."

You're ungly, I will never come into this place. You're ugly, I will never come to this place.

Dan is sad,he feels unhappy,So, so he wants to trivaavel. Dan is sad, so he wants to travel.

You've already said that Dan is sad so you don't need to repeat yourself by saying he's unhappy as they're synonyms.

Dan is sad,he feels unhappy,So, so he wants to trivaavel. Dan is sad, so he wants to travel.

Dan is sad, he feels unhappy,. So,he wants to trivaavell. Dan is sad, he feels unhappy. So,he wants to travell.

He goes to the train station,he takes train at the train station and buys a ticket. He goes to the train station and buys a ticket.

It's implied that he will take a train because he's going to the station. You could end the sentence there, or you could specify that he buys a ticket to a specific destination, waits for the next train to arrive, etc.

He goes to the train station,he takes train at the train statio and gets on a train. He goes to the train station and gets on a train.

He goes to the train station,he and takes a train at the train station. He goes to the train station, and takes a train at the train station.

Now,I will trival all the world... Now,I will trival all the world...

"Now, I will travel all over the world," he says.

"Now, I will trival alavel the world..." "Now, I will travel the world..."

"Now, I will trivaavel all over the world..." "Now, I will travel all over the world..."