Annual Health Check-Up
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Yesterday I had my annual health check-up. I asked the doctors how about my physical conditions when I was having each check-up. They told me that the bad health indicators two years ago had come to normal. I was so glad that I gave up the high-pressure job last, I realized how important life work balance was. I am planning to have a healthier lifestyle. I,really wish I can do it.
My Annual Health Check-Up
更自然地: I askedask the doctors how about my physical conditionscondition when I was havingreceiving each check-up.
也有可能: I ask the physicians about my physical condition during each check-up. / I always ask the doctors about my condition after each check-up.
They told me that themy bad health indicators two years ago had come tobecome within normal range.
注意:这句话有点模糊。 你指的是哪些"健康指标"? 胆固醇水平? 白细胞水平? 血糖水平?(在日本和中文中不需要,但在英语和德语中则需要更多细节。) 不同的语言在特异性方面有所不同。NOTE: This sentence is somewhat vague. Which "health indicators" are you referring to? Cholesterol levels? White blood cells levels? Blood sugar levels? (In Japanese and Chinese these would not be needed, but in English and German more detail is needed. Different languages differ in terms of their specificity.)
更好: I wasam so glad that I gave up themy previous high-pressure job.
lastFinally, I realizedhave come to realize how important life-work balance wasis.
也有可能: At last, I realize the importance of a healthy life-work balance.
I., really wish I can doachieve it.
Overall feedback
Great! I hope you achieve a good work-life balance.
谢谢。关于指标 我指的是尿酸、胆固醇这些 但是我不知道怎么表达所以没写。
I asked the doctors how about my physical conditions when I was having each check-up.
They told me that the bad health indicators from two years ago had comegone back to normal.
I was so glad that I gave up thethat high-pressure job
last, II've realized how important life work life balance was.
Must be "last year", "last month", "last time", etc, if referring to time. "At last" if meaning "finally". "Last" alone here implies it was the final thing you gave up and you're thankful for it having been the last thing.
I ,really wishhope I can do it.
I asked the doctors how about my physical conditions when I was having each check-up.
They told me that the bad health indicators from two years ago had come to normalwere gone.
At last, I realized how important life work-life balance was.
I am planningplan to have a healthier lifestyle.
I ,really wish I can do it.
Thanks
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