Dec. 4, 2023
Do you think about the sun anytime? I didn't. I recived it like a obligation or something regular. Most of people didn't think too. Why? The sun is very important piece of us. Of course, the sun is important part of our solar sistem, but I want to tell about our life. If you imaged than the sun is dissapear, what would be with us? We will die. Most of all дiving creatures will die. Ok. I'm sorry. I don't want to make you scared. So, forget what I told. Imagine, if you isolate someone from the sun, how change his life? First, circadian rhythem will be upset. Then, he will feel bad himself, because he won't recive some things from the sun. After that, his psychological condition will become worse, than early. And he will go crazy in the end and die. Thanks for reading.
Do you ever think about the sun anytime?
Do you ever think about the sun?
I didn't (until recently). I didn't (until recently).
Do you think about the sun now? If so, say this. If not, say "I don't."
I just received its like aght, thinking that it shines out of obligation or something regusimilar.
I just received its light, thinking that it shines out of obligation or something similar.
This is the best way I can think to rewrite this while using your words.
I would change it to "I took its light for granted, as just a part of nature." or something similar.
Most of people didn't thinkthink (the same / this way too).
Most people think (the same / this way too).
Why?
The sun is a very important piece of usour life.
The sun is a very important piece of our life.
Of course, the sun is an important part of our solar siystem too, but I want to tellalk about our lifeves.
Of course, the sun is an important part of our solar system too, but I want to talk about our lives.
If you imagedmagine thant the sun is dissappear,ed: what would be withhappen to us?
Imagine that the sun disappeared: what would happen to us?
or "what would become of us?"
We willould die.
We would die.
Most of all дliving creatures willould die.
Most living creatures would die.
Ok.,
Ok,
I'm sorry.
I don't want to make you scared.
So, forget what I toldjust told you.
So, forget what I just told you.
Imagine, ifnstead that you isolated someone from the sun,: how would this change his life?
Imagine instead that you isolated someone from the sun: how would this change his life?
or "how would his life change?"
First, his circadian rhythem willould be upset.
First, his circadian rhythm would be upset.
Then, he willould feel bad himself, because he wocan't receive some things(anything / light) from the sun.
Then, he would feel bad, because he can't receive (anything / light) from the sun.
After that, his psychological condition willould become worse, than earquickly.
After that, his psychological condition would become worse, quickly.
And he will go crazy in the end and die.
Thanks for reading.
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What do you think about the sun?
DoHave you think about the sun anytimeever thought about it?
Have you ever thought about it?
I didn'thadn’t, until recently.
I hadn’t, until recently.
I recived it like a obligation or something regulartook it for granted, like a mundane obligation.
I took it for granted, like a mundane obligation.
Most of people didn't think too.probably do the same. But why?
Most people probably do the same. But why?
The sun is very important piece of usa vital part of our existence.
The sun is a vital part of our existence.
Of course, the sun is importantit's an essential part of our solar siystem, but I want to tellalk about its impact on our lifeves.
Of course, it's an essential part of our solar system, but I want to talk about its impact on our lives.
If you imaged thanmagine if the sun is dissappear,ed -- what would be withhappen to us?
Imagine if the sun disappeared -- what would happen to us?
We willould die.
We would die.
MAlmost of all дliving creatures will dieould perish.
Almost all living creatures would perish.
I used perish here to change it up a little bit since we used "die" in the previous sentence
Ok.
I'm sorry.
I don't want to make you scared.
So, forget what I tolsaid.
So, forget what I said.
Imagine, how someone's life would change if you isolate someoned them from the sun, how change his life?.
Imagine how someone's life would change if you isolated them from the sun.
First, their circadian rhythem will be upsetould be disrupted.
First, their circadian rhythm would be disrupted.
Then, they will feel bad himself,ould begin to feel unwell because they wouldn't receive some thingvital elements from the sun.
Then, they would begin to feel unwell because they wouldn't receive some vital elements from the sun.
After that, his psychological condition will become worse, than early.Gradually, their psychological health would deteriorate, potentially leading to severe mental distress and, ultimately, death
Gradually, their psychological health would deteriorate, potentially leading to severe mental distress and, ultimately, death
Thanks for reading.
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