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Tammy

June 12, 2024

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Last Saturday's hike

As you may know, I went hiking on Saturday.

The trail was in the hills behind a small village. There were many waxberry trees in these hills.

Now is the season of waxberry ripening. The owners allowed us to pick some to eat because they don't have enough people to pick fruits and it would be a waste to let the ripe fruits fall.

One of my friends was lucky to meet an owner just picking fruits, the owner invited her to eat the ripest ones.

I was a little jealous because I wanted to meet an owner to ask for a beautiful branch with fruits.

It was still a great hike. You can watch this video to see it: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=88zwNw2G39c

If you have any suggestions about the captions, feel free to let me know.

Have a nice day!


如你所知,我星期六去徒步了。

路线在一个小村庄后面的山上。山上有许多杨梅树。

正是杨梅成熟的季节。主人家允许我们摘一些吃,因为他们没有足够的人摘水果,让成熟的水果掉下来也是浪费。

一个朋友很幸运地遇到了一个正在摘果子的园主,邀请她吃了最熟的果子。

我有点嫉妒,因为我想碰到一个主人,要一根长着果实的漂亮树枝。

这仍然是一次很棒的徒步。你可以在这个视频里看到:https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=88zwNw2G39c

如果你对字幕有任何建议,随时告诉我哦。

祝好!

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Last Saturday's hike

As you may know, I went hiking on Saturday.

The trail was in the hills behind a small village.

The owners allowed us to pick some to eat because they don't have enough people to pick fruits and it would be a waste to let the ripe fruits fall.

One of my friends was lucky to meet an owner just picking fruits, the owner invited her to eat the ripest ones.

I was a little jealous because I wanted to meet an owner to ask for a beautiful branch with fruits.

It was still a great hike.

You can watch this video to see it: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=88zwNw2G39c If you have any suggestions about the captions, feel free to let me know.

Have a nice day!

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Tammy

June 13, 2024

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There were many waxberry trees in these hills.

It was still a great hike.

You can watch this video to see it: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=88zwNw2G39c If you have any suggestions about the captions, feel free to let me know.

Have a nice day!

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Tammy

June 13, 2024

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JoeTofu

June 13, 2024

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Last Saturday's hike

As you may know, I went hiking on Saturday.

The trail was in the hills behind a small village.

There were many waxberry trees in these hills.

One of my friends was lucky to meet an owner just picking fruits, the owner invited her to eat the ripest ones.

It was still a great hike.

You can watch this video to see it: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=88zwNw2G39c If you have any suggestions about the captions, feel free to let me know.

Have a nice day!

Tammy's avatar
Tammy

June 13, 2024

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Last Saturday's hike

As you may know, I went hiking on Saturday.

The trail was in the hills behind a small village.

There were many waxberry trees in these hills.

Now is the season of waxberry ripening.

It was still a great hike.

You can watch this video to see it: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=88zwNw2G39c If you have any suggestions about the captions, feel free to let me know.

Have a nice day!

Tammy's avatar
Tammy

June 13, 2024

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The owners allowed us to pick some to eat because they don't have enough people to pick fruits and it would be a waste to let the ripe fruits fall.


The owners allowed us to pick some to eat because they don't have enough people to pick fruits and it would be a waste to let the ripe fruits fall. The owners allowed us to pick some to eat because they don't have enough people to pick fruit and it would be a waste to let the ripe fruit fall.

"Fruit" sounds better in this context. "Fruits" typically refers to many different kinds of fruit.

The owners allowed us to pick some to eat because they don't have enough people to pick fruits and it would be a waste to let the ripe fruits fall, so they'd otherwise go to waste. The owners allowed us to pick some to eat because they don't have enough people to pick fruits, so they'd otherwise go to waste.

What you wrote is fine, but this is more natural.

The owners allowed us to pick some to eat because they doidn't have enough people to pick fruits[the fruit | it] and it would [be | have been] a waste to let the ripe fruits fall to the ground. The owners allowed us to pick some to eat because they didn't have enough people to pick [the fruit | it] and it would [be | have been] a waste to let the ripe fruit fall to the ground.

Suggestion: …didn’t have enough people to pick it and didn’t want it to go to waste.

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One of my friends was lucky to meet an owner just picking fruits, the owner invited her to eat the ripest ones.


One of my friends was lucky to meet an owner jusout picking fruits, the owner invited her to eat the ripest ones. One of my friends was lucky to meet an owner out picking fruit, the owner invited her to eat the ripest ones.

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One of my friends was lucky enough to meet [an owner rchard owner | a landowner] (just) picking fruits, the owner who invited her to eat the ripest ones. One of my friends was lucky enough to meet [an orchard owner | a landowner] (just) picking fruit who invited her to eat the ripest ones.

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I was a little jealous because I wanted to meet an owner to ask for a beautiful branch with fruits.


I was a little jealous because I wanted to meet an owner to ask for a beautiful branch with fruits. I was a little jealous because I wanted to meet an owner to ask for a beautiful branch with fruit.

I was a little jealous because I wanted to meet an owner to ask for a beautiful branch with fruits on it. I was a little jealous because I wanted to meet an owner to ask for a beautiful branch with fruit on it.

I was a little jealous because I wanted to meet an landowner to ask for a beautiful branch withfull of fruits. I was a little jealous because I wanted to meet a landowner to ask for a beautiful branch full of fruit.

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Last Saturday's hike


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As you may know, I went hiking on Saturday.


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As you may know(already) know / As you might have already heard, I went hiking on Saturday. As you may (already) know / As you might have already heard, I went hiking on Saturday.

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The trail was in the hills behind a small village.


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The trail was in [the hills | some hills] behind a small village. The trail was in [the hills | some hills] behind a small village.

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There were many waxberry trees in these hills.


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There were many waxberry trees ion these hills. There were many waxberry trees on these hills.

"in" implies that the trees were literally inside of said hills, and not ontop of them.

Now is the season of waxberry ripening.


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Now iIt's the season ofwhen waxberry ripenings. It's the season when waxberry ripens.

But I'd probably just say "They're ripe now."

Now is the season ofwhen waxberryies ripening. Now is the season when waxberries ripen.

More natural: Waxberries are in season now. When we say a fruit is “in season” we mean it’s ripe and ready to be harvested and/or it’s plentiful in markets.

NowCurrently, we're isn the season ofmiddle of the waxberry ripening. season. Currently, we're in the middle of the waxberry ripening season.

It was still a great hike.


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You can watch this video to see it: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=88zwNw2G39c If you have any suggestions about the captions, feel free to let me know.


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Have a nice day!


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