Sept. 28, 2022
Volunteer Work
Apart from my full-time work as a software engineer, I am an enthusiastic volunteer serving in various non-profit organizations with my expertise.
I lead a team of 30+ volunteers to translate articles between Chinese and English. Our work is subscribed by more than 500K+ users worldwide. I have translated and proofread 200+ articles in the past two years.
I also worked for ABC, a 501(c)(3) non-profit organization dedicated to helping professionals grow their careers. As part of the leadership team, I lead the work to maintain contact with our speakers and talents.
Volunteer Work
Apart from my full-time work as a software engineer, I am an enthusiastic volunteer serving in various non-profit organizations (with my expertise).
It would sound more natural without “with my expertise.”
I lead a team of 30+ volunteers to translate articles between Chinese and English.
Our work is subscribed by mMore than 500K+ users worldwide. subscribe to our work.
It’s hard to use “subscribed” in the passive form without sounding awkward, so I made it active by changing the subject.
I have translated and proofread 200+ articles in the past two years.
I also worked for ABC, a 501(c)(3) non-profit organization dedicated to helping professionals grow their careers.
As part of the leadership team, I lead the work to maintain contact with our speakers and [talents].
“Talents” sounds odd—I would need more context to correct it.
Volunteer Work
Apart from my full-time work as a software engineer, I am an enthusiastic volunteer serving in various non-profit organizations with my expertise.
I lead a team of 30+ volunteers to translate articles betweenfrom Chinese andto English.
Our work is subscribfollowed by more than 500K+ users worldwide.
I have translated and proofread 200+ articles in the past two years.
I also worked for ABC, a 501(c)(3) non-profit organization dedicated to helping professionals grow their careers.
As part of the leadership team, I lead the work tocoordinate the maintaining of contact with our speakers and talents.
It's best to avoid using 'lead' here twice.
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I lead a team of 30+ volunteers to translate articles between Chinese and English. I lead a team of 30+ volunteers to translate articles This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Our work is subscribed by more than 500K+ users worldwide. Our work is
It’s hard to use “subscribed” in the passive form without sounding awkward, so I made it active by changing the subject. |
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I have translated and proofread 200+ articles in the past two years. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I also worked for ABC, a 501(c)(3) non-profit organization dedicated to helping professionals grow their careers. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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As part of the leadership team, I lead the work to maintain contact with our speakers and talents. As part of the leadership team, I It's best to avoid using 'lead' here twice. As part of the leadership team, I le “Talents” sounds odd—I would need more context to correct it. |
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