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Write a letter to my friend who went to study at London

Dear friend,

It was a long a long time. I hope you are fine. Since you went to London, we didn't talk together.
So i want to know all about your new life. What's about London, it is a beautifull town? And people, are they nice with strangers ?
About your school, do you like it? have you new friends? what are their names? Teachers give lessons comprehensibly?
And food, do you like London's foods? Do you do any exercices? If yes, Which ?
About me, i am very fine. Since you went, i go to Paris University to do Mathematics. I began well and i like this module.
I meet many peoples here who are my friends now. We pass much time together. We play soccer and basketball together.

I wait your response, in a short time.
Take care of you

Your friend Milou


Cher ami,

Cela fait très longtemps. J'espère que tu vas bien. Depuis ton départ pour Londres, nous n'avons pas eu de nouvelles.

J'aimerais donc tout savoir de ta nouvelle vie. Comment est Londres ? Est-ce une belle ville ? Et les gens, sont-ils accueillants avec les étrangers ?

Et ton école ? Tu l'aimes bien ? T'es-tu fait de nouveaux amis ? Comment s'appellent-ils ? Les cours sont-ils clairs ?

Et la nourriture ? Aimes-tu la cuisine londonienne ? Fais-tu des exercices ? Si oui, lesquels ?

Pour ma part, je vais très bien. Depuis ton départ, je suis à l'université de Paris pour étudier les mathématiques. J'ai bien commencé et j'aime beaucoup cette matière.

J'ai rencontré plein de gens ici qui sont devenus mes amis. On passe beaucoup de temps ensemble. On joue au foot et au basket.

J'attends ta réponse très bientôt.

Prends soin de toi.

Ton ami, Milou

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About me, i am very fine.

Dear friend,

I hope you are fine.

We play soccer and basketball together.

Your friend Milou

Write a letter to my friend who went to study at London


Write aA letter to my friend who went to study at London A letter to my friend who went to study at London

The correction above is just a description of what you're writing, but if you want to make the title a command, you should say "write a letter to your friend who went to study at London". If you say "my friend" it sounds like you're telling yourself to write the letter.

Dear friend,


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It was a long a long time.


It whas abeen long a, long time. It has been long, long time.

It whas a longbeen a long time. It has been a long time.

I hope you are fine.


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I hope you are fine. I hope you are fine.

Since you went to London, we didn't talk together.


Since you went to London, we didn't talk haven't spoken (together). Since you went to London, we haven't spoken (together).

Since you went to London, we didn't talk togetherhaven’t talked. Since you went to London, we haven’t talked.

So i want to know all about your new life.


So i, I want to know all about your new life. So, I want to know all about your new life.

So iI want to know all about your new life. I want to know all about your new life.

What's about London, it is a beautifull town?


What's about London, it isLondon like? Is it a beautifull town? What's London like? Is it a beautiful town?

I think it's more technically correct to write these as two separate questions, although in more casual contexts, like when texting, a comma would probably be fine. Also, I think generally people would refer to London as a city - towns are usually not that large.

What's aboutHow is London, it? Is ist a beautifull town? How is London? Is it a beautiful town?

And people, are they nice with strangers ?


And the people, are they nice withto strangers ? And the people, are they nice to strangers?

Just saying "people" sounds like you're talking about all people abstractly, whereas "the people" makes it clear that you're talking specifically about the people in London.

And people, are they nice withto strangers ? Are they nice to strangers ?

About your school, do you like it?


AWhat about your school, d? Do you like it? What about your school? Do you like it?

AboutDo you like your school, do you like it? Do you like your school?

have you new friends?


Do you have you new friends? Do you have new friends?

Do you have you new friends? Do you have new friends?

what are their names?


wWhat are their names? What are their names?

wWhat are their names? What are their names?

Teachers give lessons comprehensibly?


TDo the teachers give lessons comprehensibly? Do the teachers give lessons comprehensibly?

The correction above is grammatically correct but sounds very weird. A more natural way to say this is probably "do the teachers teach well?" or even just "are the teachers good?"

Teachers give lessons comprehensiblyHow are the teachers? How are the teachers?

And food, do you like London's foods?


And the food, do you like London's foods? And the food, do you like London's foods?

The difference between "food" and "the food" is the same as the point above about "people" and "the people". Although "London's foods" is an understandable phrase, a more natural way to say it is "and the food, do you like it there?"

Do you do any exercices?


Do you do any exercicese? Do you do any exercise?

Do you do any exercices? Do you do any exercice?

If yes, Which ?


If yes, Which so, what? If so, what?

If yes, Which ones? If yes, Which ones?

About me, i am very fine.


Abouts for me, iI am very fine. As for me, I am very fine.

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Since you went, i go to Paris University to do Mathematics.


Since you went, i goleft, I have been going to Paris University to do Mmathematics. Since you left, I have been going to Paris University to do mathematics.

Using "have been..." shows that something began in the past but continues into the present, so is quite useful in the context of a letter. So, for example: "I go to Paris University" - you go there now but this gives no indication of when you started going. "I went to Paris University" - this sounds like you no longer go now. "I have been going to Paris University" - you started going in the past, but you still go there now. You can use this with basically any verb. For example: "Recently, I have been playing a lot of football" - I started in the past ("recently") but I still play football now. "Since then, you have been swimming a lot" - after some point ("then"), you started swimming and you still swim now. "He has been eating a lot of chocolate" - he started at some point in the past and still eats a lot of chocolate generally now.

I began well and i like this module.


I began well and iI like this modulcourse. I began well and I like this course.

"Module" usually refers to a smaller part of something I think. For example, in a university course you may take lots of modules or classes.

I meet many peoples here who are my friends now.


I have meet many peoples here who are my friends now. I have met many people here who are my friends now.

We pass much time together.


We pass much time together. We pass much time together.

"We spend much time together" might sound a bit more natural.

We play soccer and basketball together.


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I wait your response, in a short time.


I waitill wait for your response, in a short time. I will wait for your response, in a short time.

Take care of you


Take care of yourself. Take care of yourself.

Or just "take care".

Your friend Milou


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