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Oct. 10, 2020

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I lost my bike yesterday afternoon and I am very sad about it. This is a Phoenix brand bike which was bought from Fuyang commercial building in 2017 or 2018, and it cost more than 500 CNY. Although I do not ride it all the time, I think it's very helpful because I often ride it in spring and autumn. I didn't expect that it would be stolen by someone, because nowadays, people are rich enough to buy a bike, stealing a bike is really not necessary, but it happened. I once thought that maybe someone would ride it in a hurry and they would return it later, but I am waiting for that until this afternoon, no expected thing happens. Although I am very helpless, there is still no way. Forget it, buy another one online instead.

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I lost my bike yesterday afternoon and I am very sad about it.

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Jack

Oct. 10, 2020

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Bike


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I lost my bike yesterday afternoon and I am very sad about it.


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This is a Phoenix brand bike which was bought from Fuyang commercial building in 2017 or 2018, and it cost more than 500 CNY.


This is a Phoenix brand bike which wasI bought from Fuyang commercial building in 2017 or 2018, and it cost more than 500 CNY. This is a Phoenix brand bike which I bought from Fuyang commercial building in 2017 or 2018, and it cost more than 500 CNY.

Although I do not ride it all the time, I think it's very helpful because I often ride it in spring and autumn.


Although I do not ride it all the time, I think it's very helpuseful because I often ride it in spring and autumn. Although I do not ride it all the time, I think it's very useful because I often ride it in spring and autumn.

I didn't expect that it would be stolen by someone, because nowadays, people are rich enough to buy a bike, stealing a bike is really not necessary, but it happened.


I didn't expect that it would be stolen by someonesomeone would steal it, because nowadays, people are rich enough to buy a bike, ss. Stealing a bike is really not necessary, but it happened. I didn't expect that someone would steal it, because nowadays, people are rich enough to buy bikes. Stealing a bike is really not necessary, but it happened.

It sounds more natural to split this into 2 sentences and use the active voice in the first sentence.

I once thought that maybe someone would ride it in a hurry and they would return it later, but I am waiting for that until this afternoon, no expected thing happens.


I once thought that maybe someone would ridetook it in a hurry and that they would return it later, but I am waiting for thated until this afternoon, no expected thing happens. and no one brought it back. I thought that maybe someone took it in a hurry and that they would return it later, but I waited until this afternoon and no one brought it back.

Although I am very helpless, there is still no way.


Although I am very helpless, there is still no way.There's nothing I can do about it now. There's nothing I can do about it now.

Forget it, buy another one online instead.


FI should forget it, and buy another one online instead. I should forget it and buy another one online instead.

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